revisiting and recording an old story (The Date / Check, please!)

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  • October 24, 2020 at 8:22 pm #148521
    rob000
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    Long ago (around 2006-12-03), I wrote a vignette titled “Check, please!” and uploaded it to Brawna. A better name would have been “The Date”, so that’s what I’m calling it now.

    I recently revisited that story. I tweaked it a bit, turned it into a script, and had a voice actress record it for me. Find attached the original and the script. You can find the voice recording here: https://sta.sh/01zuxu6ntls8

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    October 24, 2020 at 10:48 pm #148522
    AlexG
    Keymaster

    Nothing wrong with tweaking one of your previous stories into a new format – a case of that it’s so old that it’s new once again.

    I’ve been working for a while now on reimagined version of one of my Titan / Titaness power couple series from yrs back. B)

    “I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
    ~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

    October 25, 2020 at 12:09 pm #148526
    Vince
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    Hi Rob, it was a very good one, I recently integrated in my stories archive, hope you don’t mind. It would be great if you could share your updated version in the writing. Thanks

    October 25, 2020 at 9:40 pm #148529
    rob000
    Participant

    I don’t mind if you add it to your collection.

    October 26, 2020 at 11:01 am #148532
    Vince
    Participant

    Thanks a lot!!

    November 25, 2020 at 3:03 am #148859
    asdfghjkl_21212
    Participant

    Looks like the mp3 file is inaccessible in sta.sh?

    November 25, 2020 at 3:25 am #148860
    rob000
    Participant

    You might need to be logged in to deviantart to download it.

    December 2, 2020 at 3:05 am #148925
    rob000
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    I have uploaded another version of the audio file. The words are the same but I have spatially separated the narrator lines from the date’s lines. I think it’s a little easier to listen to this way.

    https://sta.sh/02bhl81qxpee

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