Roomies

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  • July 28, 2009 at 10:59 am #85704
    Valaunch
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    Hi there. I've been reading female muscle fiction and writing for leisure for years. I figured it was about time I put these two interests of mine together and finally create my own piece of work. This is my first foray into this category of writing, so comments on my descriptions ('cause hey, that makes the story, right?) are especially appreciated.

    http://brawna.org/stories/roomies

    July 29, 2009 at 6:04 pm #85705
    Fonk
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    I liked it – a good start made. Keep going!

    July 29, 2009 at 8:23 pm #85706
    luvmuslgirls
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    I usually look for FMG themed stories because those are my fav. This one doesn't appear to be one of those, but it looks like it may be going more toward the "muscle seduction" theme? Those can be good too. I will keep a watch out for more.  🙂

    July 30, 2009 at 1:05 am #85707
    Valaunch
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    Oh, growth is definitely my favorite sub-genre too and I definitely plan to write some of that. I just figured that for my first try, I should make sure I have a good grasp of describing muscle before I throw another dynamic (growth) into it. I'm feeling pretty confident thanks to you two.

    I should have another part up soon (< week).

    July 30, 2009 at 7:09 am #85708
    yaracyrrah80
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    I approve too :-).

    July 31, 2009 at 3:48 am #85709
    Valaunch
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    Did I estimate a week? I should give myself more credit.

    http://brawna.org/stories/roomies-part-ii

    July 31, 2009 at 8:07 am #85710
    yaracyrrah80
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    A+!  I like where this is going.

    July 31, 2009 at 3:22 pm #85711
    Reason
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    They're just aren't enough tender and innocent stories like this in this genre. Please keep it going.

    August 4, 2009 at 11:38 am #85712
    Valaunch
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    My writing's been accused of a lot of things, but innocent and tender…that's a new one. But I'll gladly take it.

    http://brawna.org/stories/roomies-part-iii

    With this, I screw the cap on Roomies. I'm pretty happy with it as far as getting my foot in the water goes. I think I'll keep at this. I just need decide what I'm going to write about next…I'm open to suggestions.

    August 4, 2009 at 1:41 pm #85713
    yaracyrrah80
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    I have to second "innocent and tender".  We need more love stories–especially well-written ones like this.  Thank you.

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