[stmercy2020]

Thanks, all- I try.  😀

As I mentioned in the pre-text, this actually was kind of a fantasy for the guy I wrote it for- I can't take too much credit, as the basic story idea was entirely his.  I just fleshed it out.  8)

[Chuck]

True, but fiction, and especially fetish related fiction like FMG and BE is dang hard to write. One of the reasons I shy away from it is because I have zero attention span; I need to focus to read a FMG story and really savor it.

I'm not a fan of gradual growth usually, but I liked how you did it in this story; and you did throw in some nice clothes rippage at the end. For FMG guys and gals, it certainly would be a treat to get to know a cute girl who, as you get to know them, transforms into Power Girl.

Also, nice job on proofreading too; your story was pretty clean except in a few spots but they're really negligible.

[stmercy2020]

True, but fiction, and especially fetish related fiction like FMG and BE is dang hard to write. One of the reasons I shy away from it is because I have zero attention span; I need to focus to read a FMG story and really savor it.

I sympathize.  I'm so ADD it hurts, sometimes.  I mostly avoid FMG and BE because I hate to caught doing the same things  in the same ways that every other author has done before me- and usually done better.  In this case, though, I was fortunate- Rick had the picture and the basic details of what he wanted to see happen in the story, and that really helped.

I'm not a fan of gradual growth usually, but I liked how you did it in this story; and you did throw in some nice clothes rippage at the end. For FMG guys and gals, it certainly would be a treat to get to know a cute girl who, as you get to know them, transforms into Power Girl.

I have a real love/hate relationship with clothes ripping.  On the one hand, it can be amazingly sexy if done right.  On the other hand, I rarely feel like I do it right- largely because of the massive suspension of disbelief required of me as an author.  Generally, I think that women prefer to wear clothes that fit/will fit after their growth concludes (sorry DeadlyPixxxie).  It was kind of fun to write about a girl who actually enjoyed her growth, knew what was coming, and decided to have fun with it.

And, yeah, wouldn't it be fun to have Sarah as a S.O.?

Also, nice job on proofreading too; your story was pretty clean except in a few spots but they're really negligible.

Thanks!  I try to catch errors as I write, as I suspect most authors do, and I take a lot of pride in presenting a story that is easy to read.  Every time I catch an error I end up smacking my head against the keyboard.  There were a couple in this story, most of which I corrected when I placed it on Brawna.

[Chuck]

I have a real love/hate relationship with clothes ripping.  On the one hand, it can be amazingly sexy if done right.  On the other hand, I rarely feel like I do it right- largely because of the massive suspension of disbelief required of me as an author.

Oh yeah! That's another reason I find writing it extremely hard; for a relatively underground fetish/subject, it seems like all the great scenes and metaphors have been used already and it's hard coming up with new ones. Sometimes it feels like we're the monkeys from 2001: A Space Odyssey; we know what we'd like to do and so we're straining our fingers and thumbs into working magic. And sometimes it works :).

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