STEELE / DAWN who is the biggest there is?

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  • May 24, 2006 at 7:24 am #29878
    iceman75
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    Good to hear dude! Hope its as intense, if not even more intense than this story!

    May 24, 2006 at 9:11 am #29879
    tourist
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    hot damn!!!

    that ought to be animated.

    t.

    May 24, 2006 at 10:37 am #29880
    sacul
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    wow, that story was intense!! to be perfectly frank, you do win the title for best fmg
    story ever, but i still win th title for largest muscle on a female, oh, one more post and you'll understand. 😉

    May 24, 2006 at 4:53 pm #29881
    airnel
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    amazing!!! four thumbs up including the toes 🙂

    May 24, 2006 at 8:05 pm #29882
    wolf_leader_10
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    a…gg..wha…gr…..
    I can't even form complete sentances to describe how good this is..

    May 24, 2006 at 10:21 pm #29883
    msc827
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    Very nicely written, Mr.Shhh!
    CUDOS for a great descriptive narrative!
    I don't wish to be a spoiler, but I have one minor crtitique of a common misperception… You mentioned near the end of your tale how Dawn was now the "heaviest person on earth" after her body had swelled to such a tremendous size… That's really not possible unless she was eating HUGE amounts of food while arm-wrestling.
    Bodybuilders swell during exercise, but no matter how large they grow from a relaxed state to their new "pumped" state, their weight remains the same… An engorged muscle has added volume, but not weight (not without caloric intake).
    But again I want to stress, sir – nicely written tale!

    May 24, 2006 at 10:59 pm #29884
    Mr.Shhh
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    Thanks for the correction on the weight issue, fm-jumkie.  I know there's a lot of other issues as well, such as no one ever warming up before doing enourmous feats of strength.  What the heck, that's why they put the fantasy in muscle fantasy  :wink:. 

    Since Rhinehartd imbued Dawn with the superpower to grow mass pretty much out of nowhere, it was a challenge to have Jenna (who has no such powers) keep up.  Had the table not shattered, it's likely that Dawn would eventually out muscle Jenna……….. or would she :evil:?  Dun dun dahhhhh!!!

    Hey Sacul, we need to see what you've got cooking as soon as possible.  There's definitely some great female muscle work being posted right now (Reaper's stuff is fantastic)! 

    May 24, 2006 at 11:05 pm #29885
    Anonymous
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    …that's why they put the fantasy in muscle fantasy  :wink:. …

    I agree with both of you, but if you start nit picking simple things as weight and volume, then you can't really leave it there. Cause then you have to go and say that no human can achieve such mass, then you trying to break away from fantasy.

    So sticking to fantasy…anything can happen, right?

    May 24, 2006 at 11:27 pm #29886
    Mr.Shhh
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    Good point.  I'm gonna need that suspension of disbelief to finish the Kitty story.  That is one freakin' HUGE mega-babe. 

    May 25, 2006 at 1:46 am #29887
    msc827
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    Mon apologies, Mr.Shhh… Hadn't met Dawn before; didn't realize she was a character who could create new mass at will.
    Look forward to the next installment.

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