Stranger Things Have Happened (But Not Really…)

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  • January 2, 2010 at 3:17 am #89077
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    🙂 Hi Everybody,
    This week I have been faced with an immense amount of freetime and when I woke up this morning I got an idea for a story.  I have created ideas for stories before but I never put them to paper.  So this will be my first time writing a story like this and I'm grappling with Brawna now to get it on there. So if anyone happens across it and reads it if you could be so kind as to leave a comment or impart some wisdom on this novice writer that would be great.  Read and I hope you like it.
    http://brawna.org/stories/stranger-things-have-happened-not-really/chapter-1
    No growth yet just sort of introduces the main character and it might be a little vague, just bear with me hehe

    January 2, 2010 at 4:12 am #89078
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    Wouldn't have even noticed it was your first if you didn't say so… good work! One thing I'll suggest that someone else suggested for me when I started writing is that you put dialog on separate lines from the story, and alternate the dialog to make it a bit easier to read. However if you would rather write how you are then by all means stick with it! Looking forward to part 2!

    January 2, 2010 at 8:25 pm #89079
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    Here's chapter 2 with a twist
    No growth yet still…sorry
    It seems like its taking forever to get to that part heheh 🙂
    Thanks for the advice Unknown I'll be sure to do that in chp 3, 'preciate it.
    http://brawna.org/stories/stranger-things-have-happened-not-really/chapter-2

    January 3, 2010 at 6:22 am #89080
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    🙂 Seems like I got past my writers block, um so this is chapter 3 its got muscle in it but no growth yet.  Please read it and feel free to post comments or some advice.  I dont know if I was descriptive enough of the body or the actions so if anyone has any advice that would be great. Thanks Everyone
    http://brawna.org/stories/stranger-things-have-happened-not-really/chapter-3

    January 4, 2010 at 5:04 am #89081
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    Even without the growth it's still keeping me reading. It's nice to see stories that aren't JUST growth but yet they are still interesting and fast paced. Another thing I would like to commend you on is your speed, keep up the good work!

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