Tetsuko #2 page 12 **UPDATED!**

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    David C. Matthews
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    Hey, Zs are cool!  Think "Suzuki," "kamikaze," "naze" and other Japanese stuff… I think Tetzuko's an improvement!

    (Maybe we can do an alternate logo with the S in her name a stylized backwards Z? 😉 )

    Great as always, but two questions…

    (1) Hasn't Slade's face color gotten a lot fresher and more vivid in a hurry?

    (2) When will we see the update to the little "commentary" box on p. 11?

    Naaah, I'm fond of "Tetsuko".

    To answer your questions:

    (1) You're right; I have let his coloration get a little too healthy-looking. Maybe the sudden rush of excitement over Sonya's formula has improved his circulation. Yeah, that's it, the excitement has improved his circulation!!  😆

    Either that, or I've got a lot of panels to correct  😮

    (2) I probably won't do the commentaries until I've finished the story. Unless I change my mind…  😀

    #20796
    dwarfpriest
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    Man, I remember reading the script on your page a long time ago, and it's getting on the part where the script ends! I can't wait to see the climatic battle 😀

    And of course, I love how deGoff puts everything of himself on a punch, and he can't even faze Tesuko, and she acidentaly wrecks the lab when she pays him back  😀

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