[John]

Well this is a story about an underground (literally) spy agency that has both male and female spies, makes heavy use of genetic engineering, muscular training, and a somewhat kinky lifestyle.  The girl/guy ratio is 5/2, and it is mostly run by the women.  The following is the introductory episode:

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MuskelGrotheCreations/files/Stories/The%20Bluquens/

It's in zip format and you need to join my Yahoo group. 

I'll post the text here if a mod will OK it.  It's definitely not G-Rated, and has a few explicit sex scenes.  Some minors (pre-18) are mentioned, but it's just to point out that the group trains it's members from birth in some cases.  They aren't involved directly in anything sexual in the stories.

Haven't posted a story here before so I'm just getting a feel for what I can and can't post.  I don't want to get in trouble. 

[John]

Here's the text for part one.  I edited out two sections that may be NSFW. (You can read them in the one on my Yahoo group):

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The Bluquens

Episode 1: The Beginning
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Part 1
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Intro
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On the planet of Dulbal, there is a race of humanoid people called the Blubors.  They have pale, blue skin, slender builds, and wavy hair.  Their noses look like horns, and their lips are very thick.  They have gills on their necks to breath underwater. 

The planet itself is a temperate one, with mostly water.  About 90% is water, the rest of the surface is scattered islands, varying from a few yards across to 200 miles.  The planet has a radius of about 3000 miles, and has a gravity of about 0.5G. 

On a large island of about 150 miles across in the northern hemisphere, there lives a young girl by the name of Eksi, and her family.  Eksi is 18 years of age, and planning on leaving the house soon.  Her friend, Otahi, lives two houses down, and visits often. 

Today Otahi is visiting Eksi for a few hours.  They are talking about Esaho, Otahi's boyfriend.  Otahi says she wants to go to school with Esaho, but her mom wants her to go to the prestigious Hilwest College.  Esaho is going to Waveisle Tech on a driveball scholarship.

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Dinner
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As they are talking, Araki, Eksi's mom comes by.  She tells Eksi dinner is ready.  Otahi says its time for her to leave, and that she'll call Eksi later.  Eksi says goodbye, and gives her friend a hug. 

Eksi lives with her mother and younger sister, Orahi.  Orahi is 12 years old, and Araki is in her early 40s. 

Eksi's father died when she was 14, and Araki never remarried, though she does still date local guys from time to time.  Araki works at the local port loading goods to support the family.

At the dinner table, Orahi asks for fish fries.  Eksi comments that she'll get fat on them, but Araki says that they are nutritious and that Eksi should eat more, instead of looking like a housepole.  Eksi, being very skinny, gets angry at her mother for the comment, but keeps it to herself.  She'd rather not start a fight, especially since doing so would cause her to be grounded, and she had plans for later.

They finish up their meals, and go to bed early. 

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Late Night Comm Call
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Eksi was expecting a comm call that night.  She didn't want her mom to know she was getting a call, so she set it to "shock" instead of "ring".  The shock sends a mild, painless jolt through the body, which alerts the receiver that they are getting a call.

Halfway through the night, Otahi called, and Eksi woke out of her sleep to answer.  Otahi said to meet her at a local mountain in an hour.

Eksi quickly-yet-quietly got ready.  She snuck out.

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Meeting at the Mountain
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Eksi and Otahi met, and Otahi told Eksi what she had planned for the night's adventure.  Both were avid climbers, and wanted to scale the mountain by the end of the day.  The mountain was not huge, but was pretty challenging.

They put on the gear Otahi provided, and started scaling the mountain.

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The Ascent
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Otahi was slightly more built than Eksi, so she carried the heavier equipment, and they started to climb the mount.  Eksi quietly led, while Otahi trailed behind.  They had a light to guide them in the pre-dawn darkness. 

Shortly they were couple hundred feet up the mountain.  When they reached a certain point, they took a short break and chatted.  They started talking about guys.  They were young and very horny, so naturally they talked about the best guys they've been with in bed.  Otahi did most of the talking. 

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Wild Animal
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While they were thus chatting, they heard the fierce growl of a bear.  They quickly grabbed their stuff, got up, and hauled tail out of there.  The bear chased after them for a few hundred yards, but they finally lost it.  Too bad they had lost their path by the time that they found safety.

Now they were lost, and now trying to find the right path.

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Strange Path
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They found a path, not the one they
were looking for.  It was a steel path, partly covered with plants.  They followed it up the mountain.  There were stairs on the steel path, which made things somewhat easier.

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Dark Ladder
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They walked along the path a bit more, until they found a door on the ground, like a hatch.  It was somewhat obscured but still visible.

They opened the hatch, and saw a steel ladder going down a deep dark pit.  They hesitated momentarily, but eventually went down the ladder out of curiosity. 

The ladder must have gone down for 100 feet.  After climbing down, they found themselves on a stairway in the dark.  It was steamy and thick, so a light did little good. 

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Stairway & Chute
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As they went down the stairs, they could faintly hear voices down below.  In spite of their fears, they kept walking cautiously. 

Then, all of the the sudden, the ground gave out from under them, and they found themselves falling.  They landed on a soft surface, and started sliding down some sort of chute in the dark. 

They slid down a very long path, until they dropped onto a padded surface, surrounded by a cage.  They had fallen into a trap of some sort. 

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Bluquen Introduction
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They found themselves in a steel-walled room, which surrounded the cage.  There was one door, and a mirror in the room.  The whole place looked technovanced.

They sat in there for 5 minutes, and gained their bearings after the drop.  Then, they started screaming for help.  They didn't realize that behind the mirror, and on several cameras, the operator of the room were watching them.  They thought they were trapped and alone. 

Soon a very beautiful, muscular woman with blue skin and white hair came in.  She must have been bigger than the two friends combined.  She spoke.

"Greetings, I am a member of the Bluquen tribe.  You have dropped into our secret entrance.  You must have heard about us on the surface, because this is a pretty hard place to find."

The woman then asked who referred the two to the Bluquens, and they responded by telling her that they found it on accident.  The woman was surprised, and made a comment that they would have to improve their security measures from that time forth. 

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Offer to Join the Bluquens
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The strong woman then asked the girls since they were already there, if they were interested in joining.

The girls never considered being that big and muscular a possibility, and just as they were curious of the ladder, they were curious what this group was about. 

They asked.

The Bluquen lady answered that it was a secret, independent group of powerful people, mostly female, whose aim was to act as agents for governments to perform various tasks; from keeping order in the world to bringing about change, and keeping rival countries in check.

She continued that most work is freelance and some is even by the volition of the Bluquen's themselves. 

She told the girls that they'd have one day to make up their mind, after touring the facility and viewing a sample Bluquen life.  She then took them out of the cage and placed them in their quarters.

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The Tour
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Eksi and Otahi toured the facility and saw what Bluquen life entailed,  They saw women training with heavy weights, as well as with other methods of training.  They also witnessed a free sex life in the recreational areas.  In the cafeteria, they saw women eating pounds of food in one sitting.  They also saw nurseries for Bluquen children.  The Bluquens produce from within as well as gather outside recruits.

They also watched a holovid of numerous operations that Bluquens perform in the surface world;  Eksi and Otahi were especially attracted to the prospect of traveling the world. 

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The Decision
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The Bluquen women in charge of new recruits took them back to their quarters, and they slept on it.  In the morning, they met with the Bluquen guide again. 
The admissions head said they can either choose to join, or have their memories wiped back to before the time they saw the steel path.

The girls had already made their decision — they wanted to become Bluquens.  They told their guide this, and she welcomed them.  She also introduced herself as Idagiquen.

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Initiation
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As the first part of their initiation, they changed their names to Eksiquen and Otahiquen, respectively.  They went through the initial training. 

They were given veteran training partners who guided them through the first tests.  The first tests consisted of strength and intelligence drills. 

The strength drills were:

a. A resistance drill called the push, which tied to people pressing against each other's hands in a pushup or bench press motion. 

b. Leg push — same idea, but with a leg pressing motion.

c. MQ testing, an all-around intelligence test.

d. Speed drills — tests to improve speed.

e. Various other strength exercises involving using resistance of two partners against each other, as well as some exercises with inanimate weighyts.

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Genetic Restructuring
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After the first week of initiatory drills, Eksiquen and Otahiquen were given Genetic Restructuring.  This operation took 2 months. 

The girls were taken to a lab, where they were put into an unconscious state.  A recording machine modified various things in their genetic code and structure, through various devices attached at several vital points on the body.

The recorders changed metabolism, maximum height, muscle inhibitors, sexual performance, and many other attributes. 

It took some time for the changes to fully take place.  Although they had many things about their physiology and pshychology modified, they still retained the same basic looks and personality traits.  The recorder was merely used as an enhancer of their former selves.

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Tube-Feeding and Bulking Up
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Eksiquen and Otahiquen then underwent a massive food intake session for a few weeks. 

The Bluquens were big, so they needed to bulk up before commencing.  They were fed small doses of a high protein, highly nutritious formula, which was fed through a tube in their throat. 

Since they weren't ready for this much food in solid form, they needed a way to stream it in steadily, even throughout the night .  Here were their weight gains:

      | Ht.  | WtB4 | WtAft |
Otahi | 5-8  | 145  | 170  |
Eksi  | 5-11 | 130  | 175  |

(part edited out)

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Training Continues
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Eksiquen and Otahiquen continued training for weeks.  They quickly grew and developed into field-ready Bluquen agents. 

They had fun at night, and worked hard during the day.  They were also starting to do mini missions to prepare them for their work in the field.  These missions were basic, low-risk missions, done in the mission simulator.  They usually involved stealing intelligence in low security areas, basic knockouts and capture, and using local citizens for informants.

They also learned languages of the planet.  Most Bluquens know at least 5 different languages.  Great ones know around 10 or more.

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Bluquen Graduation
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Finally, after months of initial training, the girls become official full members of the Bluquen tribe.  They had a big graduation party, with the 148 graduates and their guides, among others.  All kinds of things happened at the party.  There wee games, dancing, and lots of sex, among other activities. 

They wrapped up the party after about 18 hours, and went to bed.

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[John]

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Part 2
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The First Assignment
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Eksi, Otahi, 6 other girls, and 4 guys from the graduating class formed a rookie team the next day.

Their team leader was Egliquen, who was no longer going to be guiding new Bluequens. 

Now each team had its own office and quarters in the Bluquen compound, with all the life necessities as well as a direct linkup to the head Bluquen's offices.  Bluquen leadership sent in a mission briefing to Egliquen.  They were to head out of the compound on their first mission.  Egliquen could tell the group specifics, but said it would be to a far away, exotic location.

Before they left, they had a little meeting in the team's meeting room.  The team members introduced themselves. Here is a list of the team members:

Name  |G|HtWt|Int|Measurements
Egli-  |Q|5824|183|48/62/19/13/28/33/24
Eksi-  |Q|5820|147|40/48/17/11/24/24/15
Otahi- |Q|5819|152|42/50/16/10/26/26/17
Witasi-|Q|5516|130|37/45/14/9/22/22/15
Atafi- |Q|5927|117|50/65/20/14/40/33/20
Pedsi- |Q|5918|142|40/44/15/11/22/23/18
Lubi-  |Q|6022|138|44/50/18/14/30/27/18
Ubabi- |Q|5716|145|37/63/13/9/25/20/14
Armasi-|Q|5822|124|50/58/22/16/27/27/18
Anmo-  |K|6027|127|58/10/22/14/33/30/20
Oybo-  |K|6225|135|50/9/18/12/30/26/18
Edaho- |K|6225|185|54/8/20/13/31/28/19
Ugaho- |K|6432|110|62/13/25/20/35/35/25

(Measurement format: Pecs/GenderSpecific/Bicep/Forearm/Waist/Thigh/Calf)

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Off They Go
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Egliquen and her rookie team went to the private jetport to take off to their destination.  The port was a large tower structure connected various hangars and tunnels. 

The team boarded a medium sized stealth ship.  These ships, while not small, are equipped with cloaking devices and an invisibility generator.  It is a quiet ship, hardly noticeable in the air.

Egliquen assign Edaho to the ship piloting controls.  He had received special piloting training as a kid on the base, so he was experienced and well trained.  He guided the ship up the port shaft, and as he reached the roof, a door/hatch opened up and the team was soon off in the open sky. 

Eksiquen looked out the window and was impressed by the view.  This was her first flight ever, so it was quite special and memorable for her.  She noticed her house from above, and wondered about her family.  She had left them months ago, and worried that she was assumed dead.  She didn't know how, but she felt determined to somehow let them know she was alright — eventually at least.

They soon picked up speed and reached top speed.  The ship was extremely fast.  They zoomed over the country side, until they reached the ocean in literally seconds.

They sped over the ocean until they  reached a large island — one of the largest on the planet.  The island was mostly barren wasteland.  It was once lush, but that was many ages ago.  Now it's mostly desert sand, some palms, a few cacti, and other scattered vegetation. 

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The Reddust Landing
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They soon reached an area where many towers were sticking out of the mountainous dunes of sand. 

The ship slowed to an aerial stop, and awaited until a large tower rose out of the sand.  Once that tower reached full height, it opened up a landing pad.  The ship landed gently on the platform, and the team started to get out. 

But before they could exit, Egliquen stopped them, and told them they need to stay in the ship until she goes and checks on something.  She then dons a disquise as a fat local lady, and exits the ship.

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Egliquen spies out the area
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Egliquen had entered the underground city of Reddust City.  She walked inconspicuously down a large mall-like underground streetway, till she reached a store.  She met a local shop owner Sunrada.  Egliquen gave him a secret codeword, and he led her to the back where there was a Reddust man tied up. 

She then proceeded to aggressively question him on the whereabouts of a jewel that was taken from the Reddust king's royal residence.  He didn't take her seriously, being a very large man and she being dressed as a heavyset woman. 

When he resisted her interrogations, she asked again, gave a warning that he'd better fess up if he knew what was good for him. 

He resisted a 2nd time, and now Egliquen was getting angry.  She left the room after telling him she was going to get someone to wrestle the info out of him.

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Begging for submission
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Egliquen went into a private room, and took off the fat suit.  She then came back into the room, showing her supreme muscular development in her legs and everywhere else, and the man looked stunned.  She told him she was going to squeeze the truth out of him, one way or another. 

Egliquen then locked the doors to the room, but unbinded the man in custody.  The man then charged at her.  She let him grab her, and stood still.  He tried to wrestle her to the ground, but she withstood him.  After toying with him for a while, she grabbed him and pinned him to the ground easily. 

She then put him into a variety of stretches to make him want to surrender.  He was hard to push it out of.  He groaned and yelled in pain, but did not spill the beans.  Egliquen increased hold pressure gradually, until it was getting dangerously close to injury. 

He continued to resist.  She then put him in a nerve hold and made him pass out; and locked him up again.  Egliquen went back to the ship to tell the team to wait; she may be there all night. 

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Second Try
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Egliquen then tried a different method — she offered sex in exchange for info.  She was a very seductive woman, and this man had a weakness for women that were buff and strong.  He continued to struggle at first, but Egliquen slowly made him feel more comfortable and trusting of her.

He finally gave in after an hour, and she kept her promise.  He was serviced by her for about an hour.  After that she knocked him out again and turned him over to the authorities without revealing her identity.

She went back to the ship to tell the team of the location of the jewel, and to plan their recovery. 

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Jewel Recovery Plan
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Once in the ship, Egliquen told the team that the jewel was in the country of Damptree, a jungle-ridden island with a few cities and ample wildlife. 

There were many diseases on the island, so Egliquen administered shots and other protective treatments to counter the ills of the island.

She gave orders to leave, and Edadi followed the route given to him to go to Damptree.  They got there in a few hours.

The party landed in a secret underground Bluquen base in the eastern jungle.  The base was empty, but hardly run-down.  It had been used recently, and the last group didn't clean up fully.

The jewel was located in the estate of a local crimelord, Malapabana.  Egliquen had herself and 2 others — Oybokeng and Witasiquen — go take one of the small low-flyers from the base and spy out the crimelord's estate.  The estate was full of guards surrounding the premises, plus crocodiles in some areas.  Intruders were often fed to them.

The info files that Egliquen had stated that Malapabana was a cruel man, into many sadistic practices.  They also stated that he was a business genius and ran smuggling operations for many items peculiar to the island.  He was also noted for his savvy of intelligence operations and treated spies especially cruelly.  This was not going to be easy.

Egliquen mapped out the estate, and found a few weak points.  Still she was uncertain, as they seemed too easy for a man who prides himself in security and punishing intruders on his property.

So she decided to use the new prototype mosquito cameras.  Since mosquitoes were rampant in the area, it should be easy to have it blend in, she thought.

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Mosquito Spy Cam in the Estate
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The mosquito flew in unnoticed, and scanned the info to the mission computer.  Before long, the exterior was fully mapped out and documented.  The device was so sophisticated, that it even had a short-span invisibility function, and sound dampening.  It was quite a gadget for its size. 

Egliquen realized that the only way to get inside was through the air vents.  But the air currents were strong, so it wouldn't be easy. 

She found a vent and entered the camera.  It was equipped with a zoom feature, so it didn't have to get too close to the object it was looking at to get a good shot.

The estate was huge, but Egliquen had most of it mapped out before long.  She took note of any suspicious areas where a jewel might be.  Soon she found what looked to be the room she was looking for.  It had a guard, lots of locks on the door, a window where two other guards were looking through, and plenty of cameras.  There were many boxes and one stood out by its Reddust packaging.  In fact, it was the only box with such packaging.  Thinking they had found what they wanted, the camera left the building grounds and went to the small low flyer a few hundred yards away. 

The group then met back at the base to make a thorough plan with this info. 

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The Retrieval
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Soon Egliquen found the best way to enter the base and retrieve the stolen jewel.  She decided that there would be no practical way to get a person inside, so she would use a mechanically modified delivery box passing as one of their shipped goods.

First they hijacked an upcoming delivery, and changed the box's destination address to a safer warehouse in the capital city of Damptree, that the Bluquens secretly owned.

After making the modifications repackaging the box, they dropped it into the loading bay at the Malapabana estate by parachute.  As they had observed, this was standard delivery procedure.

Next they waited for the box to be placed in the storage room with the gem.  When it was, the team then waited for night time when security was a little less competent.

The box's fire and smoke mechanism went off, throwing off the cameras and guards.  Then the box's mechanical arm came out of a hole and burned a hole in the gem box.  After making the hole, it grabbed the rock and placed it securely inside the team's modified box.

After the gem was sealed in the box, it was a matter of time before the box was shipped to the warehouse.  The Reddust box stayed put, and the rigged box finally arrived at its destination.

Egliquen sent Eksiquen and Oyabo to the warehouse in disguise to blend in with the city folk.

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The Warehouse Brawl
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Eksiquen and Oyabo made it to the private warehouse, and accepted the delivery at night.  It seemed it was in the bag, and ready to take back to Reddust.

But then an ambush of 5 of Malapabana's men came in.  Egliquen was aware of the attack, but far removed in the jungle base.  Besides, she felt the two were up to the task of defending themselves.

Eksiquen was about the same size as her male companion, and both were quick as a cat.  They proceeded to go into a fighting frenzy, throwing kicks and punches left and right.  After about 10 minutes, they had the ambushers tied up and sent to the authorities.

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Ocean Fight
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They got the gem just in time to see their ride arrive on the roof.  They flew off to Reddust, but were followed by Malapabana's cronies.  They got into an air fight over the ocean.  Now Malapabana had a substantial fleet of jets, so it was a formidable opponent.  They fought through the course of 2 hours, neither side giving way. 

Then out of the blue deep of the see, a giant robotic squid came out and grabbed the low-flying enemy jets before drowning them in the ocean.  The Bluquen rookie party quickly left the area, and stayed a good elevation from the surface.  They did so in case the squid was against them as well. 

They didn't have time to worry about the monster, as they needed to get back to Reddust

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Reddust Royal Return
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Upon returning to Reddust, the Bluquen group leader Egliquen was rewarded for her service by a representative of the Royal Family.  This was the same representative that contacted the Bluquens about the stolen jewel in the first place.  Egliquen then told him that if they ever needed help again to just notify the Bluquens.

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Close of Episode
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The rookie team came back to Bluquen base and the members were congratulated on a successful initial mission.  They then had a big party to celebrate

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End of Episode
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[John]

Also, I'm debating on whether to keep the section labels in as they kind of give the story away before reading the actual section.  I used them to keep the story organized and tracked while writing, but they do give a lot away.  Any feedback on this would be nice.  Also, I could probably afford to condense some of the paragraphs.  The thing is, I wrote this originally on paper in thin columns, so they looked bigger when writing.

Also tell me what you think about the quoted dialog, or lack thereof.  I thought it may make it a little more interesting with quotes, but was more interested in what was going on in the story than what people were actually saying.

Sorry for the misspellings and other errors.  I put it through spellcheck, but some in some cases (like "not" for "now" that I just picked up) it doesn't work.  I'll try to proof-read future work more.

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