The Chewbacca Defense

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  • March 12, 2009 at 8:12 am #81197
    The Riddle
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    I posted the first part of a story on Brawna a little while ago. If you get a chance to check it out, I'd love to know what you think!

    March 12, 2009 at 8:36 am #81198
    The Riddle
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    I guess I should post a link, too…

    http://www.brawna.org/stories/the-chewbacca-defense

    March 12, 2009 at 9:50 am #81199
    blah8884
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    Nice beginning, I'm hoping to see some FMG later  🙂

    March 12, 2009 at 9:56 am #81200
    The Riddle
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    There's going to be some, particularly (that I know of already) in Chapter 3, "On the Run". Except in that chapter, it's primarily going to be slow growth. I'm not very good with growth sequences; they never 'sound' right to me.

    March 16, 2009 at 12:23 pm #81201
    The Riddle
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    Well, I tried my first growth sequence, in http://www.brawna.org/stories/just-one-wish/just-one-wish-chapter-3, which is a continuation of my first story.

    The next chapter of The Chewbacca Defense will vary slightly depending on the reactions I get to Just One Wish. If you like what I've got so far, I really would like your comments. Growth sequences are a bitch, for me anyway, and I'd love to hear what you all think.

    March 17, 2009 at 11:53 pm #81202
    Jack
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    I really liked the growth in the 'Just One Wish' story.  Nicely paced and good description.  I also love the cliffhanger at the end of part 3 where it's hinted that there's going to be some worldwide change happening to women (or at least I hope that's what's going to happen)  😉

    Thanks for the lovely writing.  Please keep it up!

    March 18, 2009 at 12:59 am #81203
    Unbridled
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    Really awesome stories Riddle!
    keep writing and thanks for sharing your work!

    March 19, 2009 at 5:06 am #81204
    The Riddle
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    That's for the comments, guys.
    Hopefully, I'll get off my lazy bum tonight and finish out Just One Wish, take The Chewbacca Defense to at least Chapter Five (Breathe: Reprise), and finishing making sense out of the dream I had yesterday, the first part of which I posted to Brawna under "Riddle and the Muscle Factory."

    Just out of sheer curiosity, can anyone tell where I'm getting my chapter titles for Chewbacca from? (Without using Google; that's just cheating.)

    March 23, 2009 at 8:44 am #81205
    The Riddle
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    I finished off Just One Wish (sort of…) today, only four days after I said I would, which is really remarkable for me, and got to Chapter 3 of The Chewbacca Defense. If you care to, read both of them; there's not much growth at this point, but I did use some better descriptions than I had been giving, and I'm going M. Knight Shyamalan-esque with it.

    I hope you like them!
    http://www.brawna.org/stories/just-one-wish/just-one-wish-chapter-4
    http://www.brawna.org/stories/the-chewbacca-defense/the-chewbacca-defense-03-on-run

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