The Conquest of Mawiyah – Feedback?

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    Cindy Tortio
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    Just wow! I love this story and your style of writing. My dear you can write, no ,paint a story. Its been a while since a written word has had my heart racing…lol.Where does the line form for more?

    #53666
    Mimi
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    [font=Times New Roman]~Mimi[/size”>

    #53667
    Tigersan
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    Thats an amazing beginning, very original in its tyle i like it very much.

    #53668
    cpbell0033944
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    The only word for this is steamy.  No, I'm wrong, sizzling covers it as well.  As does sultry.  Heck, Mimi, this is brilliantly luxuriant writing. 8)

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    ze fly
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    Awesomely done.

    #53670
    Mimi
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    [font=times new roman]~Mimi[/size”>[/font]

    #53671
    00tree
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    Wow what a well written story. I think I said this on one of your threads be fore but just in case I'll say it again. I'm not usually into the girl on girl thing ( I think I'm the only heterosexual male in America that isn't, homosexual girls are just just more women who aren't interested in me  ;D ) but I really love the way you write. I thoroughly enjoy the stories and who that even though one of the women is exceedingly muscular they seem just as vulnerable and human as the smaller woman. Something that a lot of people are scared of about woman with female bodybuilder type physiques is that they are going to beet them up, thats at least what I hear in my discutions with others about the subject. What people fail to realize is that just because someone can hurt you physically doesn't mean they go around pounding the living crap out of everyone around them.

    crap I started rambing sorry I can be kind of long winded at times. ;D

    oh and lovely artwork which you had done. I aplaud you choise of artist.

    #53672
    00tree
    Participant

    I just tried the link that you have so that I could read some more of you stories but it's a member sight thats all female  :-[ is there another place on the web to find your stories?

    #53673
    Mimi
    Participant

    [font=times new roman]I posted the link.

    Thanks, sweetie.

    Peace and Love,

    ~Mimi[/size”>
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    #53674
    Christopher Brown
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    very good

    sexy enough I say

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