[KeithXZ]

This is going great!  I can't wait to read more.

[crazyfck]

glad that you liked it.

as soon as I finish and revise it more properly, I'll post it on brawna. It may take some time.

anyways, to be not let anyone down, here some more:

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“Shit! What should I do?” Mark asked himself. He knew that Gracie was nuts, and that she knew about his lifetime platonic love over Eve. She could kill her. “Eve! Get out of here!”

Eve was inside her own feelings of dejection from the world, searching for herself in the magazines and all vanished. For her, nothing was worth of anything. If the world ended now, she would be happier.

Gracie knocked the door again harder. “Eve! I mean it, get out of here!” Mark said again. And Eve kept looking over the mags. “Are you deaf!? That girl is crazy, she can kill you!”

“Who cares?”

“I care” and Mark took her arm upstairs to his bedroom “stay here.” Mark locked his bedroom and opened the front door for Gracie:

“Hi! I’m really busy. What…” and he look at her enormous cleavage “…look, I’m really busy.”

Gracie looks down at him not understanding what ‘really busy’ means, she just got inside the house taking him to her breasts engulfing his head “I missed you between them… they need you… I totally want you to swallow you whole”  And she took him in her arms lifting him to her lips invading his mouth with her tongue “you are mine, you know that? Do you, Mark?” Gracie took off her blouse leaving her melon milky breasts on his face.

“Lick them. I want you to lick them”

Mark had no option. I was not just attraction, it was powerful. Gracie could have her way with him anytime anywhere. It was her smell, her supernatural beauty, her size, the warmth; it was manipulating him like strings on a puppet.

“Mark, you wont believe how was my day! We discovered that mom is rich now! You don’t believe how much, for real, like… so much money, but so much money that she can buy a car for me! Oh, my god, can you believe it? She’s the owner of half of the city! Totally unreal… I mean, real! They are saying that this money is not ours, screw them. They say we didn’t earn it. It gets me so mad, just like, so whiny that they are poor like we were. But, then you wouldn’t believe in school… ohmygod! Half of the guys didn’t even appeared, girls rule!”

Mark was listening Gracie endless babbling, but he was really paying attention to her breasts… and her muscles. Each time she said ‘totally’ her packed arms contracted and its volume jumped.

“What you like those… me too, so unreal!” and she flexed her arms for him. “it could crush you so easily” and Gracie took him in a singled arm headlock. “I think I can totally do anything I can think of”. His mouth was compressed against the hard muscle.

“Gracie…”

“I’m not hearing you, you have to speak louder. Much more louder”

“Gracie!”

“Scream my name, and I release you”

“GRACIEEEE!”

And she took him in her other arm. “You see, is so easy to make me happy, you only have to do what I ask…” and she opened his jeans.

“What you doing?”

“Let me see it…”

“See what?”

Gracie opened it exposing his privates in the living room “is this so hard for me, Mark? I don’t totally rule over you?”

“Gracie, put me down”

“No way” and she carried him to his bedroom.

“No, not my bedroom!”

“You never let me see your bedroom, why? I’ve always wanted to see your stuff, were you sleep, your porns…” and she stroke him lightly.

“No, take me there, Mary’s bedroom…”

“Shut up, Mark, don’t spoil it” she said adding pressure to his chest to shut him up “I want to see what porn Mark have now. Is it buff girls? Like me?” and she opened the door like it was not locked and turned on the lights.

Mark saw no one inside. “Where is Eve?” he thought searching for her.

[crazyfck]

a little more…

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Eve didn’t want anyone to see her in this house; she went below Mark’s bed and stayed there quietly. She saw the body of Gracie, not her face, just the body carrying the teenager Eve just met. “Look at those legs” Eve’s mind drifted to her bulging curves that push each other for space.

When she first saw the degree of muscularity of any women around her for the first time, she almost threw up, her senses were overloaded by them. Eve was not on the runaway when it happened, but surrounded by her fat older sisters friends crowding her home to be close of her. All those never-desired ladies with a bad hair that ate junk food and never cared about how they look transformed into super muscular amazons in front of her.

Eve remembered the perfect beauties screaming at themselves, pointing each other with their clothes destroyed. The paparazzis on duty took photos of them by the windows, of Eve inclusive. Some strong new amazons run almost naked after the photographers destroying their fragile cameras with their bare hands. Eve was freaking out when she saw her sisters, both touching each other in amazement.

The bed over Eve started to sway, she heard the shouting “yes, Mark, inside of me, inside… more” Eve was scared to be crushed under her weight. And Gracies’s legs were on each side of the bed moving up and down. It was hypnotic to Eve, she could sense its strength, that the leg of this girl had more mass than her slim six foot body. She wondered how was to be like this, to have this kind of strength. The calve moving in front of her was so close that she could feel its heat. She touches it with her delicate fingers.

“Hey! Someone grabbed me!” Gracie said lifting her leg.   

[alex]

Nice!!

Poor girl, she just couldn't help herself…  😛

I also wonder how Eve's life must be like with her sisters now. They must probably tease the hell out of her with their amazonian bodies. 

Please continue.

PS: I read all of the stories in your website, and I have to say they're doing great.  I look forward to reading more of Flavor, Bee Society and Stairway to Heaven.  Pandora is also excellent! If you want I could try translating it later when I have more time.

[crazyfck]

hey, thanks Alex, that would be really nice.

Eve can't control herself because she is very narcissistic, and now every girl has her own features multiplied, so Eve is connected with them all with an uncontrollable lust. And she wasn't a good girl also. She never treated her sisters and her (not exactly) close friends right. And they will get their vendetta over Eve multiplied. All of them are muscular Gisele Bundchens, including, of course, her (ex)fat sisters

Mark doesn't know the badgirl eve; his idealized Eve is just pure and now a victim. As soon as she finds out that Mark is the key to make the world as it used to be, she will manipulate him and then we will have the real havoc   

To write in english helps me a lot to learn it, very useful in my life. Sometimes I can't describe what I want, the right words escape me, but I'll keep trying until I get it right.

[alex]

Hehe, I know Eve is bitch. I was being kind of sarcastic there.  I do hope you show us some nice F/f action with poor Eve though before you decide to buff her all up though (not enough of these around).

I'll start working on Pandora later this week then.

T+

[crazyfck]

Eve will get a lot of action before the tables have turned over, read this (continuing)

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Gracie pushes Mark to the side and lifts the heavy bed throwing him to the floor. Gracie sees Eve almost scared in the floor “Eve?! What the fuck?” and grabs Mark’s collar “can you explain me what she’s doing here!?”

Eve tried to intervene “he was just helping me out…” and Gracie thrusts her away to the ground.

“Shut the fuck up before I rip your head off, bitch” it left Eve even more turned on. Inside, Eve wanted to be trashed away by this big amazon teenager with huge breasts.

“She’s… she’s…” Mark tried to find the words.

Gracie shouts “I’m so much fucking better than her now, why you’ve gone after her? Look at her! So miserable skinny. Now, look at me! Why her, Mark? Why you don’t fucking love me?!”

Mark was very afraid to say anything to Gracie, even a lie. Gracie throws him back to bed in anger.

Eve stood up “Look, I don’t want anything with him, to tell the truth I didn’t want to be here, to be seen here.”

“Because you’re a fucking celebrity? Why are you here?” Gracie can tell that Eve couldn’t take her eyes out of her body. At first she thought that was something wrong with her, but then she approach Eve, her nude breasts were slapping at Eve’s face. “What I should do with you?”

Eve wanted to squeeze those mounds of flesh, so big, so firm; she had to hold back her impulses “I need to leave.”

“No way” Gracie took her arm and Eve jumped to kiss her in the mouth.

“Eve?” Mark couldn’t believe in the scene in front of his eyes.

“Fuck me, girl… fuck me now!” Eve implored.

Gracie started to laugh; Eve the greatest top model, the untouchable rich celebrity was crying out for her. “Do you see Mark? She’s just the slut I always imagined” and Eve started to lick her biceps, Gracie flexed for her “even her can’t resist me, Mark, why should you?”

Mark was watching his dream girl completely lost in Gracie’s body; her legs encircle Gracie’s huge quads getting off on them. Eve was saying incomprehensive words as her breathing got faster.

“Yes, show Mark how the cheap cunt you are…” Gracie flared her back looking at Mark “she likes my muscles, Mark… yes that’s right girl, lick it… hey, that tickles!” Gracie took Eve in her arms and threw her to his bed. Gracie goes over her and sees Eve’s eyes devouring her broad body. “Want to join, Mark? Too late.” Gracie pushes him out of the bed and inserts two fingers in Eve’s trembling pussy provoking a muffed scream from her.

Mark was unable to not be aroused by what was happening, but his pride couldn’t let him to watch Gracie to be so in charge of the situation like this. He just walks away.

“Doesn’t matter, Mark… I’ll fuck her so much… she’ll be so wasted that you’ll have to forget her”

Mark walks the door hearing Gracie having hysterics laughs over him and Eve.

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