[iceman75]

Yeah, the story is great so far, Mercy seems like just my kind of girl, huge, superstrong, and very aware of it. Can't wait to see more, although I'm with whoever said that they want more of Battle of the Sexes, part 3 just left us hanging, hopefully if 4 ever gets done, it'll blow us away.

[AbyssPlanet]

Loving it so far!

But wait — what happened at the club?!?

Yeah, I'm confused too. The end of chapter 2 doesn't seem to line up with the start of chapter 3.  ???

[pdub13]

No Way, No worries.  I think its cool when i see my stuff show up in other places.  Haha, Looks like U changed it to something better anyway.

Glad to see you checked out the story, Pdub.  As a huge fan of your art, your comment means a lot to me.  By the way, I hope you don't mind my using the pic you did of Jenna from Hardbody as my avatar.  Let me know if it rubs you the wrong way. 

[Mr.Shhh]

Hmmm.  I guess I messed up the clarity of the time line between chapters 2 and 3 :-[. 

I've essentially cut away from Mercy's "audition" at the club to an hour or two after.  The reason is to continue to build suspense regarding Mercy's physique (to put further emphasis on her eventual first night dancing before a crowd).  Hopefully chapter 4 will clear things up a bit.  I might go back and make a few alterations to the previous chapters to make it a bit more clear.  Thanks for the notes.

Hey Pdub, I agree with you that your fantastic artwork should turn up more often.  However, I disagree with you that the new avatar is better than your pic.  I simply changed it for variety's sake.  Your art is top-notch in my book! 

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