[Harry Braff]

That's great work !

I like the way you draw the veins, it reminds me another regular of this board.  😀

[Debido-San]

Great Job, Refaal! Like DCM said, I'd also like to see longer hair…

And as someone else said, The picture seems like it's just a head and two huge arms, you could have done a better job showing us how strong she is as a whole!

I still like it! But you did ask us to tell you our likes and dislikes…as far as likes, she has a pretty face, an the arms are great!

[ze fly]

I like it, particularly the contrast between her aura of power and the ingenuous look of her face. And I'd add that you really improved the details with this one : the shades and the veins looks good!  👿

[AlexG]

Heh, what DCM said about the Wanted poster – agreed, its a hoot.  And since you're "wanted" by her, I doubt that you'll resist arrest . . .  😎

But since you're looking for critiques, the expression and pose are perfect – coyly playful looking – though I think you lose a bit of symetrical balance with her body since you can't see the lower portion tucked under the desk.

Or is she balancing it with her powerful quads?  One can only hope . . .  😀

Given the context of the other colors used in the panel, I think a darker hair color might work better and I'm not much into the "Tasha Yar" style of hair on a woman, so I'd want to see it longer in length.

“I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

[animemusclelover]

Nice pic! Especially love the arms.
But if you need constructive criticism…maybe some eyelashes wouldn't hurt, to help get the point across a bit better that it is a she, not a he.

[Ashlee]

well Its great ,
But where Leona from tank police and Anapuma & Unapuma sisters??
HUMMMMMMMMLOLOLO
Great Picture

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A fair illustration, dear Refaal. Though one point of critique.
Her deltoid, neck and sides. They need more defination and definement.
Her deltoids need to be a touch more cut to give them shape and her neck and sides are almost formless, giving her the appearance of weighty woman with rather strong arms. Not that there is anything wrong with it but that does not appear to be what you wish to be depicted. If you add a little more shape to her neck -such as the subtle cords of muscle or veins- as well as sketching in lines to represent her lateral muscles and upper obliques, then you shall improve vastly.
But, as you stand, you have a fine pen and good eye.
All the best for your future art.
Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[Tommy Dreamer]

Nice piece of artwork.  Very cute and very interesting.

[Yatz57]

That's a very nice piece of work, Refaal. I think the other comments covered most points, but I do have one suggestion on technique: You do a very good job of shading the cuts on the muscles, so I think that doing the black lines on the inside of the body – to accenuate the muscle – takes away from the rendering. If you've seen pin-ups by Adam Highes, he does a pretty thick outline, and all of the "inside" is rendered.

[refaal]

Many thanks to all  comments and suggestions. All were taken on board and acted upon or stored for future use.
Ok, Ill 'say a few words' in my defense:  😀

Yeah, I know she's a cop, and there are probably regulations about how short she has to keep it, but I love long hair on ladies, what can I say?

You got the point, Mr. Matthews.  I dont know how it works there, but here there are strict regulations about female cop hair. I just wanted to be more realistic as possible.

It's that her tanktop looks like it's painted on (you know what I mean) and not actually sitting on top of her gorgeous muscled body.

But IT IS painted on! 👿

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