The Magnificent Kelly (Complete!)

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  • #7422
    g-man
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    IIRC he only ever got one dose?

    #7423
    trilliwig
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    Cool… not many stories where the guy goes out of control and the girl has to stop him.  Lots of potential for dramatic relationship twists.  👿

    #7424
    Jody
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    Let me add a kudo, Fonkster. I always appreciate FMG stories that 1) show some imagination 2) show some whimsy 3) show that the writer is paying attention to the tale and 4) have a tale to tell, as compared a few sweaty-palmed paragraphs sandwiched around the growth description.

    You did damn well on all points. Great job.

    #7425
    Anonymous
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    That's a brilliant story – some twists and turns in the plot, very readable and satisfying.  (and two sets of growth too!  That was nice!).  Thanks for sharing this with us, man!

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