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June 18, 2006 at 11:26 pm #32861reaper0002000Participant
The Monster: Termination Alley
A narrow, but relatively clear alleyway on an overcast, late afternoon. An inconspicuous and untravelled walkway between two sheer, high-walled buildings. Nervously, as he nearly comes to the back end of the alley, a lithe but herculeanly-muscled female Korean figure suddenly steps intimidatingly into the center of the alley, blocking his path.
He gasps, for Es is completely naked, wearing only sunglasses, her face expressionless. He stares in awe at the phenomenal muscles of her nude physique, for her Asian body is the ultimate pinnacle of frighteningly peaked muscular development. Es is an utter freak — every single ungodly muscle has been pumped to mind-blowing extremes. In workouts of such terrifying intensity that she left others as unconscious, mangled wrecks merely trying to keep up to her, Es has fulfilled her matchless Korean genetic potential…and gone beyond it!
Thick hulking traps slope toward broad, swollen shoulders and arms so sculpted most males would die for them: big, BIG bulging biceps that although relaxed, already hint at shocking vertical peaks and on their backs, protruding resting horseshoe triceps; her pumped upper arms end in rippling, bowling pin forearms that power her rock-crushing fingers.
Es’ back is so big, thick and wide that it actually pushes her arms more than 45 degrees away and far from her sides, her monstrous lats menacingly visible from the front as a mindblowing flared taper and revealing her as an ominous presence of undiluted power. So shredded she doesn’t have an ounce of fat left even around her small girlish nipples, Es’ massive, separated pecs are utterly devoid of any breast tissue, bulging like vertical superdomes atop a thick resting six pack that becomes even more jagged with every breath the rock-hard Korean takes.
His eyes can’t help but wander down past the last chiseled set of solid abdominal muscle and onto the full, thick black bush between Es’ hips. His eyes pop at the sight. Her Asian pubes are wild and wiry, barely obscuring her powerfully built mound, but it’s indeed the giant muscles of her cunt that protrudes threateningly which boggles the mind! Framing her hellish sex organs are the insertions of the massive muscles that pack her pumped-up runner’s thighs; muscles that end in small kneecaps before flaring again into hellishly developed calves and even built-up anterior shin muscles.
With a start, he jerks his eyes up away from her hairy, naked crotch and realizes he’s been caught looking by the slightest smirk on her face. Es slowly raises an arm, bending it, and then flexes a terrifyingly big, peaked and ripped bicep. Looking gloatingly at her jagged muscleball, she raises her other arm as well and glances at it as her astoundingly huge lats flare like wings from her sides.
The Asian beauty repeatedly extends and then violently flexes both beastly biceps, pumping them up and causing both insane peaks to push even higher till each becomes completely separated and bulgingly round! Finally, Es turns away from her flexed, smoking 20”-plus skyscrapers to stare at him behind shaded eyes, her man-shaming double biceps a herculean vision of unsurpassable power. Strength that could rip a man apart like an insect!
…to be cont'd….
June 20, 2006 at 9:25 pm #32862iceman75ParticipantHey Reaper, another great beginning! I can't wait to see more soon.
June 21, 2006 at 10:13 am #32863reaper0002000ParticipantWell, it begins innocuously enough, but this is probably the most extreme scene in terms of gore and dismemberment that The Monster dishes out, which is why it rates an x-gore.
"You've been warned…"
Reap…cont'd….
Es gives him a feral grin, her vicious intentions clear: “I’m a monster…,” she growls. Swallowing hard, he turns around and tries to flee back up the alley. His effort is futile; with a burst of inhuman speed, she catches up to him in three strides and then literally runs him over, ramming him with a nude muscular body as hard as steel and trampling him with legs like huge, unstoppable pistons of muscle.
He is left a sputtering, crawling mess of impact injuries in the center of the alley, and as he looks up fearfully at her from her back, he takes in the boulderous veiny diamond calves, peaked hamstrings, and perfectly developed glutes of her naked ass.
Above that, Es’ monstrously built back flares, a rippling, flaring, sculpted colossus of tremendous muscular power that prompts him to stumble terrified to his feet and stagger away from this Asian hellioness, back the way he came.
This time, he barely gets a quarter of the way before Es again runs him over at blinding speed, as uncaring and unstoppable as a train. Already battered by the first collision, he is sent flying down the rest of the alley by the sheer force of her second contact… but the Korean superjock is so mind-bogglingly fast that even as he lands, she is already on top of him, and one of her bare feet tramples his thigh while the other foot crushes a couple of low ribs.
The power of her legs is so great that she effortlessly snaps his femur and ribs, his bones as much resistance as dry twigs to her. Unable to even scream in pain because of the severe damage already done by colliding with her nude but incredible rock-hard body, he lies completely helpless and broken as she stands over him, once again almost expressionless but flaunting her infinitely superior female Korean physique by slowly flexing each perfectly developed muscle group. Es’ muscles inflate like overblown balloons, stuffed with rock-solid fibers of man-smashing power! He’s been totally destroyed, and Es hasn’t even started to breathe hard…
“Gawd, she’s fuckin’ naked..!” Two bikers come up behind her from the parking lots in the rear of the alley, staring at the sight of a nude, impossibly muscular Asian girl. Both stand over six feet tall and weigh over 250lbs each, both enforcers of the local gang. Despite her nudity and the fact that they both dwarf her in bloated size, Es is so confident in her limitless physical abilities that she doesn’t even glance at them.
Just standing there, it’s in fact Es who dwarfs them in terms of muscle size, hardness, and strength. Their eyes are glued to her bared, perfect buttocks, but when she abruptly flexes her mighty ass to deeply separated, shockingly built gluteal relief, they finally look away, wide-eyed at the dramatic transformation from temptingly chiseled to terrifyingly striated.
“Fuck, look at her muscles!” The first one stares in awe at the unbelievable muscular development of the naked Korean beauty. “Man, she’s got better guns…hell, horseshoes and everythin’ than even Bod at Venice..!”
The other agrees, “Yeah, this pumped Asian girlie here’s big AND ripped! Shit, take a look at that back – it’s soooo fucking big!”
The first one walks around to Es’ front, unable to tear his eyes from her overpowering muscular physique. ”Fuck, even her pecs are bigger than her tits! Dude, those things are all muscle — you have more tit than she does! And fuckin’ see that six-pack! Oh yeah! Bush, baby!”
“Jesus, and her legs … her legs are pumped from hell! That ass has striations!”
“God, look at that cunt between her legs…that thing is fuckin’ HUGE!”
For the first time, they register the broken male heap at her feet. “Hey, what’s with this guy? Jesus – the dude’s busted up bad… Was he gonna rape you and you fucked him up?” One of them finally speaks directly to her, not knowing the delay, the disrespect, has sealed their fates in her vicious mind.
“No, I’m going to rape him.” Es says evenly, dominantly. Both men stare at her in shock, but she doesn’t say anything further. Finally, one of them shakes his head, uncomprehending, as the other makes his move. He puts his right arm around the amazingly muscular Korean and tries to bring her close to him, but he may as well have tried to move a granite statue. Es’ incredible physique is as solid and unmoveable as stone.
…to be cont'd….
June 29, 2006 at 5:10 am #32864reaper0002000Participant…cont'd…
“Why even bother with fuckhead here? Hey, I don’t mind your big, strong muscles… Jesus, you feel like steel! Your muscles are so fuckin’ hard!” He exclaims as he tries in vain to manipulate the obvious strips of sinew of her bulging capped deltoid with his fingers. “But I like my women buff…and no one could be as buff as you! What’s your name?”
Suddenly, Es seems to take notice of him; she reaches with her left hand to gently grasp him by the back of his jaw, the small movement making her enormous muscle-widened lat enlarge and extreme bicep contract into a softball even though it’s her left arm and still unflexed.
“Esther,” the Korean beauty smiles coyly, and firmly pushes up, titling back his head as he closes his eyes in pleasure at her firm, aggressive touch. But her grip tightens, the pressure on his jaw building to become more than uncomfortable, and all of a sudden, his head is tilted back as far as it can go. But still Es pushes up, still smiling casually, her strength unstoppable as she lifts his entire body off the ground with just a single sculpted arm.
Her flexing triceps engorges obscenely as it overpowers the force of gravity on his heavy 250lb body, and that fabulous arm muscle peaks to a huge swollen claw of ungodly sinew as she fully straightens her arm overhead.
“And I like my little boys…” Es’ tone is still just as even, though she’s now holding a 250lb man overhead with the sheer brute muscular strength of one arm like he’s a toy to her. Her immensely strong fingers abruptly power down on his jaw, crumpling it as easily as dry dirt, simply crushing bone and teeth in a wave of blood that chokes off his shriek of pain and horror. “…broken.”
As Es grinds the gore that used to be his lower face effortlessly with her bone-shattering fingers, she starts to lower and then press up the flailing man slowly and deliberately, using his 250lb bulk as a mere dumbbell to work out her monster triceps even further, striations rippling to the surface of her beastly claw with each repetition of this inhuman exercise. Her 3-headed arm muscle pumped to male-shaming size – and getting even bigger and stronger with each rep – Es simply drops her face-crushed human dumbbell behind her after 10 amazing reps.
Snapping out of the awe of watching his 250lb partner’s lifted like a toy with one arm by the naked Korean musclegirl and then the horror of seeing his friend’s face literally explode in the grip of her hand, the other man foolishly charges at Esther, and starts throwing punches into her thick, chiseled abdominal musculature.
He screams as his fists contact stomach muscle as hard as rock, but Esther just snickers derisively at him. His hardest blows are pathetically feeble to her, and as she tenses her deep thick abdominals to their magnificent, fully etched state, his knuckles shatter like glass against Korean muscle now casually flexed to a hardness far beyond steel. Her abs are so hard even a sledgehammer wouldn’t phase her!
…to be cont'd…
July 1, 2006 at 7:36 pm #32865ReasonParticipantFantastic so far. I'm a big fan of the extreme, ultra-violent type stories done by the likes of Smog, Dmaynard and Martin Kane over on Diana the Valkyrie's site, so it's great to see some of that style here. I know this isn't everyone's cup of tea, so thanks heaps for posting. Maybe, you'll even win a few people over. I mean they're all feats of strength, aren't they :-D? It's just that some hurt more than others.
Also, looking forward to the finished painting. I was going to ask you whether you painted the face you use for your Avatar, as it is quite impressive. The full body should be nothing short of amazing.
July 2, 2006 at 12:46 am #32866iceman75ParticipantI love this series! The Monster is one of the best new story characters I've seen in the last few years, up there with Jenna Steele from Hardbody. Your descriptions are awesome, and while I like the suspensefully short stories, I would like to see a really long story where you just put it all out there, just go as extreme as you possibly can on the strength feats and gore, just explore everything you have ever dreamed about your character doing. I know thats what you're trying to do in short installments, but I would like one big, long installment where you see Es do strength feats that are totally unreal and awesome and see how powerful her whole body is, tongue, eyes, and genitals included.
July 2, 2006 at 10:01 am #32867reaper0002000ParticipantThanks for the support! Been a fan of Martin Kane et al for sometime.
I've hit a …snag… in my efforts when it comes to being a little too busy with the rest of my life, so my artistic projects have stalled somewhat. I had planned to release 2 paintings by now — and yes, my avatar is Es (perhaps the headshot mentioned in "Doubleheader") — but it's just not there yet. So my sincere apologies…
As to one LONG story, my ADHD simply doesn't permit me to… ooh, a bright shiny object!!! [runs off] 😮
Reap
…cont'd….
Not knowing what else to do, the man kicks Es between her legs and somehow misses, not realizing that her bulging thigh adductors have blocked the blow. Stupidly, he tries again, and doesn’t even register the blinding speed with which she reacts, opening her hugely muscled legs up to ensure she fully takes the kick in her naked crotch.
He screams in horror as his kick makes contact up to the hilt of her thick clitoris, for Es actually snatches the top of his foot with her hairy groin, her beefy sex lips letting the toe of his boot in and then seizing it with mindboggling dexterity and sexual strength. Es grins nastily and flexes her powerful slit, pulling more of his foot into her unearthly slit with the suction power of her muscular sex tube!
When most of his toes are encased by her monstrous sex organ, she clenches her mighty vagina and instantly pulverizes his boot into a gory pulp. Even the steel toe of his boot squashed as easily as tin foil! As he collapses howling, Es releases her horrendous sexual flex and gristle drips out of her vicious cunt – all that remains of the top of his foot looks like it’s been through a meat grinder! The Monster smiles evilly, twitching her giant masculine pecs and making her small girlish nipples dance aggresively.
Es reaches down and seizes him by his arms at the elbows. She laughs as her fingers crush bone in their utterly merciless grip. Her thumbs press deep into the soft tissue…and then straight through, dislocating his elbows from the front in fountains of blood. He shrieks and looks at his mangled arms in absolute horror, disbelieving how powerful and cruel this nude Asian young woman is.
Still gripping him by his shattered arms, the brutal Korean musclebeauty simply shrugs her beastly shoulders back and effortlessly yanks both his arms right out of their sockets with that simple twitch of unreal musclepower. Yowling in pain, he is abruptly silenced as Es casually backhands him.
The almost nonchalant ease of her motion belies the staggering force of the blow; she is so strong, so unimaginably strong, more contact area with his face would likely have torn his head right off his body. As it is, his neck is instantly snapped as he’s spun like a marionette and sent rocketing into the alley’s far wall, hitting it several feet of the ground. Her effortless blow is so forceful, his nearly lifeless body actually bounces off the wall to land at her feet.
There’s a guttural shriek behind her, and the crush-jawed biker locks Esther in a full nelson, barely accomplishing the feat because of the sheer width and thickness of her upper back musculature. Es’s prickly Asian stubble in her huge armpits slice into his skin like razors, the barely present, coarse pubic hair drawing blood. She snickers as he struggles despeartely to maintain the hold, stymied by the tremendous muscle weight of her beastly shoulders and upper arms.
Es rotates her shoulders slightly in a circular motion, and her armpit stubble cuts deeper into his forearms, shredding his flesh into bloody circular ribbons as she arouses herself by deliberately rubbing those almost imperceptible, erogenous shards. She purrs: even her tiniest hairs are stronger than he is!
At her whim, the incredibly developed muscles of her enormous shoulders and back bunch up, ripple and then flare out, her languid motion dislocating and then shattering his elbows with unstoppable strength, putting both her hands on her hips. He shrieks in agony as his arms are torn asunder. With a deep breath of increasing sadistic arousal, Es spreads out her gigantic lats, and when the obscenely flaring sides of her vast musclefan back pins his uselesarms against the bulging inside head of her unbelievably built triceps, he screams again in pain as unstoppable muscles mangle him, viciously crushing his biceps and triceps right up to the bone.
Relishing her dominance, the Asian musclegirl growls and fully spreads her monster lats to inhuman swimmer-shaming sizes. In an instant, both his upper arms are snapped and squashed to gory splinters between her ungodly lats and triceps. His arms have been all but scissored off. Effortlessly.
…to be cont'd…
July 2, 2006 at 9:48 pm #32868iceman75ParticipantWow! Just when I thought I'd seen everything, you pull out a great story, focusing on non-traditional feats of strength and toughness, and its almost exactly what I wanted to see, with her crushing his foot with her strong pussy, but the armpit hair being used to shred his skin, that was out of left field, dude, but still very cool.
July 6, 2006 at 10:16 am #32869reaper0002000Participant…cont'd…
Es grins as he screams, her huge teeth fully visible as her lips pull back past her gum line – the terrifying, sadistic grin of the Monster! Keeping the mangled remains of his arms squished between her massive lats and huge upper arms, she reaches back without even glancing at him and grasping his jeans, tears apart the denim as easily as tissue paper with a flick of her wrists.
The Asian musclegirl then seizes his pelvis, the horrific strength of her fingers actually crushing parts of it in her grip, and roughly presses his bared manhood against her naked over-developed muscular Asian ass. In a demonstration of breathtaking muscle control, she literally flexes apart her granite-hard Asian musclecheeks, shoves his manhood deep into her, and wags her beyond-perfect buttocks.
Her moans of arousal are mixed with his howls of sheer agony, as his genitals are trapped and effortlessly compressed. However, his sounds are forever silenced as the Asian hellioness releases the remains of his arms from her crushing lat flex and reaching back overhead seizes his skull with both hands, flaring her monstrous lats. Her huge lats are spread wider than his linebacker-sized torso, while each of her upper arms are obviously larger than Es' own head! The musclepower..!
Es smirks, and simply brings her hands together while she really clenches her ridged gluteal globes. With her bare hands, the Korean musclegirl easily collapses his skull with a sickening pulpy crunch, and lower down within her magnificent tail, his manhood is splattered with a disgusting wet pop of rupturing flesh. It is that simple to her. With a grin of sadistic dominating pleasure, Es crumples the remains of his head with her unstoppably strong fingers, while her Korean buttocks, flexed to separated, striated relief, pulverize his penis into grisly mulch.
Enjoying the erotic feel of his gore sliding through her crushing fingers and sliding through her crushing ass. She has rendered him headless – both heads – in mere seconds. A shower of exploded brain, shattered bone, and bloody gore falls as the now decapitated and castrated corpse thuds to the ground.
Es reaches down and lifts the other uselessly-armed biker like the mere insect he is to her. Grabbing the back of his torqued head with one hand and his butt with the other, the Korean superjock rams him against her beyond buff nude hardbody. Her large hungry mouth devours his in a voracious kiss as her mighty fingers roughly knead his buttocks like they were jello, turning his flesh into bleeding squishy pulp with the sheer merciless power of her grip. Gore starts to ooze through her implacably strong, crushing fingers.
Es’ aggressive kissing becomes vicious as her ferociously strong tongue starts to batter the inside of his mouth, crushing and mangling his own tongue into a gory mush, breaking his hard palate to pieces and pushing out teeth at will. The power of her savage oral suction then tears his tongue out at its root. Es devours it hungrily– more protein to fuel her muscles! She grins and opens wider, engulfing his entire mangled mouth in her own.
With his teeth completely imprisoned between hers, Es snickers at his utter inferiority… and still grinning, she starts to bite down. The jaw muscles on the side of her long, gorgeous face become freakishly prominent, revealing the unprecedented totality of her tremendous muscular development. Her far bigger, far harder, far stronger dentition pulverizes his palate and shatters even his teeth to powder. Her fearsome teeth have allowed her to take bites out of reinforced concrete like it was soft tofu, and her unstoppable bite ends only when unstoppable enamel clack against each other in a feral grin.
Aroused by even her oral dominance, the Asian muscle beauty starts to gyrate her hips and thrust against him, her already amazing six-pack turning into an incredible knotty grid of abdominal iron as her bared, freakish haunches clench into thick ridges of perfect gluteal development. The naked young musclegirl grinds up against him with bone-crushing force, and her hairy crotch literally shreds the front of his jeans like wire scrub on tissue paper.
Her thick black Asian bush is so hard, strong and sharp, the thick denim melts with just a few of Es’ horny thrusts. As the metal of the zipper has all the resistance of wax against her pubic hairs, Es soon has his groin totally bare. He’s well hung, his genitals larger than most males, but compared to her unearthly pubic monster…well, he’s an infant!
Es smirks at the utter obvious superiority of her mind-bogglingly pumped up, hypertrophied female sex meat! His large balls and long dick are nothing contrasted to a shredded clitoris harder unaroused than any bone in his body, and vaginal muscles so developed they actually form visible striated peaks on the outside of her oversized mound. In a single grinding stroke of ferocious musclelust, Es’ wild bushy mound tears into the man’s now exposed groin, and unstoppably sharp, her coarse pubic hairs grates his dick into a bloody fountain of mush and paste.
…to be cont'd…
July 7, 2006 at 8:13 am #32870iceman75ParticipantWow, that was even better! I love how you can come up with such unconventional feats of strength, like using her mouth like that, her tongue crushing his tongue and teeth, her bite taking his face apart, with the power to crush concrete(which I would love to see her do, extensively)like nothing. And describing her clit as though its a muscle of its own, bigger than any cock, harder than steel, just about, man you come up with some awesome stuff, and I can't wait to see more unconventional feats from you.
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