[reaper0002000]

A tease, to see if anyone's interested…

No matter how hard he tries, he can’t even dent the amazingly thick, dense musculature of her outrageously V-shaped back. It’s like trying to bearhug a granite sculpture. Esther lets him continue his efforts, amused at how hard he tries and how futile it is against her naked rock-hard, muscle-packed torso. He’s squeezing her with all his strength, and she can barely feel him… no sense of pressure whatsoever. Her muscles are SO jacked! The thought of how far physically superior she truly is begins to arouse the monstrously muscle-packed Korean. Finally, she’s had enough of his pitiful efforts, and though her hellishly sculpted arms bulge and ripple with a frightening muscularity begging to be used, to be unleashed on him, Es merely takes a deep breath while flexing her powerfully developed pecs and spreading apart her fabulously wide lats. Her expanding Korean musculature and ribcage effortlessly throws apart his arms with just a simple flex, confirming how truly inconsequential his strength is compared to hers.

“Now it’s my turn,” Esther gloats with a soft predatory grin, and engulfs him. Her thick upper arms encircle his sides, her bulging biceps bunching into steely balls that bend his ribs inwards with terrifying ease while her veiny forearms painfully compress his torso into her bare, thick, husky pecs. Her inhuman training has stripped her of any fat and breast tissue, but Es possesses a pair of huge, rock-solid pecs that are deeper and thicker than most women’s breasts! Her small, hardening Asian nipples grind painfully into his chest as they enlarge in arousal. Es’s broad shoulders turns into mounded traps and stripped deltoid caps as she inadvertently lifts him of the ground, leaving his feet dangling, and then suspends him without any effort whatsoever.

Cont'd…?

[iceman75]

Very good beginning, I think you should definitely continue it, your descriptions are great!

[fasola]

Please continue. It is incredibly descriptive. it will truly rock.

[Reason]

Man, that's HoT. Stories like this are few and far between on this site, with the main focus being on muscle growth. So, yes please, continue!

[Mr.Shhh]

I agree with everyone above.  Great writing!  My vote is for more, definately!

[reaper0002000]

…con't….

After a second of simply holding him up and letting him feel her enormous strength, Esther viciously squeezes him with just her powerful arms, and her big peaked biceps audibly snap his middle ribs like kindling with their pumped-up shape while her forearms effortlessly bow his ribcage down its entire length. Air wheezes out of him as his torso involuntarily contracts, completely helpless against her unimaginable might.

She’s broken him using only a fraction of only her arm strength, but now adds the endless strength of her gigantic back and chest as well. Her massively developed back explodes into frighteningly deep sinewy shapes and chiseled curves while her jutting chest visibly thickens, striations forming down the hard groove dividing her swelling pecs all the way across into her underarms. Pulled in by her monster back and pushed in by her ungiving and growing breastless chest with its powerful unstoppable pectorals, his ribs splinter against her, one by one loudly snapping. Effortlessly.

The Korean musclegirl marvels how easily she’s crushed him; he’s like a fragile toy to her! It’s been like squashing an ant, and the realization of how far superior her monstrous body is to his really turns her on! Aroused, Esther takes a long characteristic deep breath, and the further expansion of her tremendously developed torso shatters even more of his ribs. Sickening wet crunches are heard, muffled within the fearsome mass of female Asian muscle, and she smiles sadistically, while he barely manages to whisper “Please…” with what remains of his lungs.

“I’ve broken almost every rib of yours and I’m not even using a quarter of my strength yet,” Esther murmurs evenly, “I could kill you with my bare hands right now – just crush you to death. Like an insect.”  Her utter domination of him arouses her, and the small, light colored Asian nipples atop her granite pecs lengthen and harden even farther. “I’m so BUFF…beyond BUFF” Es whispers in erotic aggression, and her erecting nipples dig deeper into his chest, the tiny sex nubs becoming so hard that they actually pierce his skin, gouging his flesh and drawing blood.

“God, I’m sooo STRONG…” she breathes, feeding off his helpless whimpering pleas for her to stop. Esther lets him have it with another merciless squeeze, and her fearsome upper body flexes to merely a small fraction of its incomprehensible full power, instantly pulverizing more bones within the completely surpassed male torso in her muscular embrace. “…and so HARD…” She enjoys his wheezed screams of pain, getting off on her absolute muscular dominance. Her Korean muscles and nipples take on a hardness far beyond steel as she tenses them, further mangling him like meat in a garbage disposal. As she lets his tangibly shattered torso sag in her arms, she notices the bloody gouges her bared, diamond-hard nipples have left on his ruined chest. Esther laughs her evil laugh, “Even my nipples are harder than you.”

Smirking wildly, she merely holds him in place, still effortlessly suspending him off the floor. Es again tightens her hug and flexes her amazing male-shaming pecs, and as her obscene beefy Korean chest muscles expand and hump, her aroused Asian nipples again bite into his skin, easily puncturing it and burying themselves into his flesh. He shrieks in agony, and Es’s smile goes wider as she enjoys her dominance and the exquisitely erotic feel of even her sensitive nipples (her nipples!) smashing and tearing his muscles like nothing.

“God, I’m so totally YOKED”  Es sighs erotically, relishing her power. She takes a deep breath and flexes her hulking pecs again and again, pumping the muscular chest granite up to size after incredible size as she grunts in lust. He tries to scream as her erect Asian nipples repeatedly shred apart his chest flesh as they flick and burrow deeper and deeper into him with each mangling flex.

Finally Es pauses and looks down, and the sight almost brings her straight to orgasm. “Heh, I’ve totally destroyed your pecs with my pecs,” Es grins ferally. Blood is pouring out of where his chest used to be – her own pumped, amazingly deep Korean pecs have now utterly replaced the space occupied by his once proud chest, the combination of her nipples and pecs completely grinding his chest away and leaving only gristle on the sides. Her light-colored nipples erect even further and push against the now-exposed bone of his ribs. “Mmmm” she lustily moans as she feels her nipples chip against his rib bones, “Maybe your weak little boy bones will challenge how hard my big strong girl pecs and nipples are…but I doubt it,” and Es laughs savagely.

She stares into his glazed eyes, and grins animalistically. With a sexy growl, Es flexes her awesome Korean chest harder than before, and her pumped Asian pecs respond with an explosion of monstrous female beef. Her granite pecs balloon with unstoppable power, and loud cracks are heard as her small but steely nipples derisively snap his exposed ribs like drill bits against matchsticks. As her mighty pecs violate his ribcage unstoppable and unopposed, Es grins nastily in total domination, “Told you – that was like nothing.”

…to be cont'd…if you want to see The Monster's other embrace….

[Mr.Shhh]

Wow, pretty intense.  Gotta admit, the whole gore / domination thing isn't my cup of tea, but you sure do have the writing chops.  My take is more muscle, less squishing – but it's not my story.  It'll certainly be interesting to see where it goes from here.

[Anonymous]

Very, very intense… but I will wait for the rest…

[Reason]

The way you described that reaper, I could almost hear the bones snapping! Really cool stuff!

Your little teaser earlier got me thinking about this game where one person writes a story, but gets a different person to write each alternate paragraph/section. It's a bit different to the never ending story idea I've seen on other sites as the original author can always steer it back to their original vision if someone gets too off track, or he could just choose to go with it. It's amazing how the story seems to take on a life of its own, taking you places you didn't really expect.

It might be a good way to get some people, who are too daunted to attempt a full story, to start writing. Also, some of the more exprienced writers on this board can join in and show us how its done.

I guess the best way to manage it would be to reply to the most recent paragraph as quickly as you can (first come first served) to save your place while you actually write the next part. The original author would then reply with the next part, etc.

So, reaper since you inadvertantly spawned this idea, would you be interested in starting such a game?

[sybic26]

I’m not so much in the hurting stuff but your writing style is really good.

I think reason’s idea is pretty cool 😀

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