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January 24, 2008 at 11:44 am #54265iceman75Participant
OMG! What an awesome addition to the story, man! I have loved Mercy from the first time I saw her, but your description makes me want to love her more and more, I can't wait to see the next one, as I'm very much a fan of where this story is heading. You know, the whole muscular and superstrong vagina trip really, its one of my favorite story elements.
February 10, 2008 at 4:28 am #54266reaper0002000ParticipantThanks, I don't think you'll be disappointed in the upcoming final sequence. I'm re-editing it significantly at this point, and will finish it off very soon.
I'd like to offer my appreciation for all those who've read The Monster series and "The Muscles of Mercy", and especially to those who have posted on them. "The Muscles of Mercy" is the last and longest story I've completed, and hopefully I've managed to save the best work for last.
Best wishes,
ReapFebruary 15, 2008 at 4:14 am #54267airnelParticipantas always its the best of the best!
February 18, 2008 at 1:46 am #54268AbyssPlanetParticipantWhen you say "last", I hope that doesn't mean you're retiring — this is seriously great stuff!
February 22, 2008 at 10:36 pm #54269ayanamifanParticipantWell this theoretically belongs to femuscle art… but scince i did it for the story:
http://ayanamifan.deviantart.com/art/Mercy-78113511February 26, 2008 at 12:25 am #54270reaper0002000ParticipantMy thanks to Ayanamifan for a positively splendifitabulous render of Mercy… ;D
Now the bad news:
As you might have guessed, I was going to post the final part of this story last week. Due to major technical issues, I will probably be unable to complete "The Muscles of Mercy" to my satisfaction within the upcoming several weeks or so. My apologies to all those who have read along and wanted to see the end sooner. I promise it will go out with a proverbial (okay, literal) BANG.
And while I'll still be around… yes, I am going into "retirement." Or at the very least, semi-retirement.
Best wishes,
ReapFebruary 26, 2008 at 4:54 am #54271ayanamifanParticipantWell its a pity that you decided to retire, but well i have made a similar decision some time ago. Sometimes you need a break.
So i an really looking forward to your final installment of this story.
Good luckMarch 1, 2008 at 10:35 am #54272reaper0002000ParticipantI have HAD it with this computer-thingamajig — somebody give me a freakin' QUILL and PARCHMENT…! OK, so here's the deal: I'm going to post what I recover, a little at a time. Hope ya'll don't mind.
Exasperatedly yours,
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…con'td…
“I’m all muscle. Everywhere.”
The muscles of Mercy were utterly unimaginable, even between her legs.
He stared, agog. Mercy wasn’t wearing any underwear, and beneath her ample bush, it was plainly obvious that even her crotch was stuffed and overstuffed with hideous muscularity. She was mind-boggling; never had any sex organ evolved into something so visibly powerful. Mercy’s overdeveloped vulva actually resembled a jutting ribcage, her internal vaginal muscles so hypertrophied they actually protruded externally in bulging, iron bands of shredded sex beef.
Her labia was so hardened with striated fuck muscle, it was actually serrated with steely, individual muscle fibers protruding like jagged teeth. Her cunt muscles were so impossibly developed that Mercy actually possessed the fabled vagina dentata of myth – but her muscularly fanged pussy far exceeded the legend of the merely incising cunt. Mercy’s vaginal jaws were not only steel hard, but had the strength to completely crush diamonds to dust.
Just as ungodly as her fearsome, man-eating slit appeared, her huge clitoris was unimaginably pumped. The thick stud protruded out those heavy vaginal jaws, a squat sexual outcropping of erectile rock. And not only was it overdeveloped, Mercy’s clitoris was actually muscular, impossibly muscular, sculpted to a truly inhuman degree of sexual smooth muscle that only Mercy could possibly achieve. Her entire sex was so hard it far outclassed both genders of the rest of humanity, just like her muscular development.
Mercy moved right up to him, straddled the chair and stood over him, breathtakingly nude and utterly menacing with that bared, unstoppable groin weapon between her legs. Her beauty and muscularity were truly an unprecedented combination – she encapsulated physical perfection, covering and exceeding the entire spectrum from the female Figure to the male Olympia bodybuilding title.
In fact, she was the one person who could unify all the Olympia titles: surpass the entire Figure contest with her beauty, level the Fitness portion with her athleticism, and absolutely dominate both female AND male Bodybuilding ranks with her freakish proportionate mass and conditioning. Mercy was simply matchless, a physical specimen evolved beyond either gender. The current Figure holder was homely compared to Mercy’s beauty, while Mr. Olympia looked like a shapeless stick compared to her physique. And as to what was between her legs, there wasn’t even a contest –
Mercy lowered herself onto him, giving him an eyeful of her shredded massive pecs, and spread her lats so wide that she completely filled his field of view. She hadn’t spread fully before, and he goggled as the girl boundlessly grew wings beneath her arms. Her aroused scent completely overwhelmed him, addling his brain and making him breathless with lust. Struggling helplessly against her overwhelming sexuality, he felt his groin stir with a mind of its own.
Mercy lustfully moaned, a sordid throaty sound that was as irresistible as the sirens of myth. He stared at a perfectly developed chest of young beef whose sheer brute muscular eroticism had no equal. She was more perfectly muscular than the entire Mr. O lineup, and sexier than a stageful of porn stars. With a speed that amazed him, he soon involuntarily obtained the largest erection of his life… but was utterly outmatched by the supremely evolved groin that Mercy sported.
Nonetheless, his tenting trousers abutted up against the hairy monstrosity of Mercy’s dripping groin as she straddled him. Feeling his erection poke impotently at her far mightier genitalia, Mercy smiled knowingly. Therapist or not, he was just like the rest; nothing could resist her… or survive her.
…to be cont'd…
March 1, 2008 at 4:17 pm #54273Lupus14ParticipantO.k, let me guess – she is going to kill him…. and get away with it.
March 1, 2008 at 10:04 pm #54274reaper0002000ParticipantI actually wrote THREE possible endings (one of the reasons it initially took so long, even without my technical issues) and considered putting it to a poll to let readers decide which ending they wanted.
Then that idea fizzled. Went up in smoke, really.
And now, with a nod to the morally-inclined demographic of this thread's readership (to consider who Mercy has killed AND who she has let live thus far), what I'm left with is this thought…
You'll want him dead.
Best wishes,
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