[Chachibenji]

I like the turn that it took, I was totally unable to dig the story up until now for some reason, but this little twist actually totally wins the story.

[Lupus14]

I didnt say that people torturing cats and dogs are sexy ??? WTH? Please dont take my comment too personally. It was just my 5 cents like i said 😉

I did not take them personally and I'm sorry for this misunderstanding. It was meant to be an analogy and I did set a question-mark behind it. Regards.

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The story is now getting very gory. If they would make a film out of it, I couldn't bare to watch it.

[reaper0002000]

To be perfecty honest, I probably couldn't stand to watch it myself…!
I don't like slasher films, don't even read Stephen King, which is why doing this is such a creative stretch. As for the gore, my personal "ugh!" moment was earlier, when Mercy literally kicked a guy in half. Her foot sticking out through his back was the visual that got me.

Just realized I've never heard of a horror flick where the monster was a musclegirl.

For my part, I didn't intend this to be as big a twist as it apparently turned out. I'd written about Mercy's sister very early on, as a ten year-old when Mercy was four. And Grace was to have had her own subplot. But pooh.
Glad you guys liked it anyway.

Kind regards,
Reap

[Tigersan]

If they would make a film out of it, I couldn't bare to watch it.

I'd love to see a movie like that hehe

[MicroZer]

      Me too I want to watch a movie like that., ;D,.I hope Ican watch it.,

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