[Fonk]

Lady pretty. Fonk happy.

[Hunter S Creek]

If I were being really picky I might suggest that she's a fraction broad for her height (despite how tall she is, LOL!), but it's great work anyway!

Yes, I think that it is because her head might be a bit smaller than it ought to be.  The perception of the distance from the viewer to her head secondary to her height is a bit off relative to the distance of her torso from the viewer.

Is this better?

Tschuss!
Hunter

[fbbfan]

I think the first one was the best…because she is tall now, her head should appear a bit smaller.  My opinion. 

Love your stories Hunter.

[blah8884]

Oooh, very nice picture!  😮

And just curious, was there an additional backstory to the picture?  ???

[cpbell0033944]

Yes, I think that it is because her head might be a bit smaller than it ought to be.  The perception of the distance from the viewer to her head secondary to her height is a bit off relative to the distance of her torso from the viewer.

Is this better?

For my money, this is the better version.  Nice stuff!

[Hunter S Creek]

And just curious, was there an additional backstory to the picture?  ???

Yes, actually, there is a back story.

This shrimpy nerdette has been crushing on her neighbor for quite a while but he has never been interested in her except as a friend and study partner.  One day while doing a school assignment together the nerdette notices a copy of "Busty Amazon Body-Builders" in his room.  She decides to do whatever it takes to get his attention. 

Here we see her the following day purchasing a copy of "Special and Unusual Chemical Concoctions" from a Christopher Lloyd/Doc Brown-type of recluse in the nearby woods —

She subsequently tells her neighbor about the book and her intentions; but to her chagrin and disappointment he only politely chuckles.  More determined than ever; she goes to work on the formula in her basement lab.  She is thrilled when it begins to work.  She then becomes a bit worried when it then seems to work too well.  She quickly outgrows her target size and her basement ceiling.  She has to duck/squeeze through her basement and house doors in order to go show her neighbor her new body.  She comes up behind him while he is alone doing his chores in his yard — and that is where the first posted sketch comes into the story.

Tschuss!
Hunter

[cpbell0033944]

Yes, actually, there is a back story.

This shrimpy nerdette has been crushing on her neighbor for quite a while but he has never been interested in her except as a friend and study partner.  One day while doing a school assignment together the nerdette notices a copy of "Busty Amazon Body-Builders" in his room.  She decides to do whatever it takes to get his attention. 

Here we see her the following day purchasing a copy of "Special and Unusual Chemical Concoctions" from a Christopher Lloyd/Doc Brown-type of recluse in the nearby woods —

That's a very cute backstory you've created. 8)

[fbbfan]

I like how you were telling the story, and you inserted a pic.

Very Cool.

[ze fly]

Really great! or he may be in serious trouble now. ;D

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Ah, you've a critical weakness for those cute girls who pine for the guy, just a little too slow to realise that she'd be a catch even if she didn't undertake to become a mighty amazon.

I think I tend to favour more gradual growth… there's not as much tension if the girl goes off, downs formula and becomes hulking valkyrie type in five minutes… oh, sure – it's still hot as hell but it doesn't quite pack the same punch as the girl working hard to become the ideal.

Actually, I think I'd like to see maybe a story from you where the girl merely aspires to become Amazonic for herself, Hunter… sure, there could be a boy in there but she's doing it because SHE wants to be big and sexy… not because she's desperate for a guy to want her… Just a thought.

Awesome pictures as always.

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