The Purple Avenger! [NICE MUSCLES] BAD WRITING

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  • #12429
    Mattman
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    I was at an Anime and Comic convention a little while ago and I found an artist starting out anf he had made a new comic but noone seemed to be buying it but I looked and it was called the Purple Avenger and the main character is a BUFF Female SuperHero Just take a look at some pics I found. and JUST TO CLARIFY I DID NOT MAKE THIS COMIC.

    Hope u Enjoy!

    #12430
    Vic
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    Pretty nice, can it be ordered anywhere?

    #12431
    BlackKusanagi
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    Must…see…more!

    #12432
    TC2
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    Well I could see why this guy wasn't selling any comics, the name "Purple Avenger" really doesn't kind of JUMP OUT at me.  Though I like the physique he gave her the whole thing seems a bit badly written, the only reason I'd buy this comic book is to see more muscles that but that's about.

    #12433
    10-4
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    Itโ€™s done like a Small Press book, but with the skill level of an Inde publication. Probably testing the waters with the Digest to see if itโ€™s worth going full size. Did this guy have a web site listed anywhere in the book?

    #12434
    The Muffin man
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    Well I could see why this guy wasn't selling any comics, the name "Purple Avenger" really doesn't kind of JUMP OUT at me.  Though I like the physique he gave her the whole thing seems a bit badly written, the only reason I'd buy this comic book is to see more muscles that but that's about.

    Yeah. It's really hard to follow. Plus the girl can leap from buildings apparently, and land safely from jumping off one…yet a kick to the face DOESN'T leave the guy unable to talk or move. Hell, at least Spidey has the excuse that he pulls all his punches.

    One minute she seems to have superpowers, the next she's barely got the physical strength to pick herself up. On top of that, she has ONE bruise on her shoulder. No blood, no black eye, no wounds at all save for that one bruise.

    I think there's a good reason this comic didn't sell. They read it. ๐Ÿ˜

    #12435
    Weapon X
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    GREAT STUFF!

    keep on the good job ๐Ÿ˜†

    #12436
    David C. Matthews
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    My opinion seems to echo the consensus: good, serviceable art (the guy does know how to draw a muscular woman), but the story is weak. He undercuts the character horribly when, in our first good look at how she operates, he allows her to be beaten up by an apparently ordinary gang of street thugs (and has to be rescued by a cartoonish old lady wielding a stun gun!!). I think I understand what he's trying for here, but the execution fails, and we're left with a "heroine" who's incompetent at best.

    #12437
    Ashlee
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    i WONDERED IF IT CAN BE ORDERED,May I should write the book ,won't be much heroics, but then who the hell would care!!!! ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ ๐Ÿ‘ฟ

    #12438
    Mattman
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    I dunno I havent found it anywhere other then that convention and yeah I do agree with u guys that it does need a btter writer definatly! its just like whaaaaa.? ๐Ÿ˜• I really only bought it for the cover I didnt even read it lol

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