The Upside-down Paradise

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  • September 20, 2007 at 11:38 am #52799
    crazyfck
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    people, sorry. I was also thinking that is taking a too long time to continue

    is posted the very beginning of the third part

    english is a trick language

    http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/anewflavor-partiii

    September 21, 2007 at 8:27 pm #52800
    alex
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    Great to see you're writing again!  Can't wait to read more!

    Btw, PM me if you need someone to do some editing and grammar-checking on your future work. I'm more then up for it.

    September 21, 2007 at 9:51 pm #52801
    cwmoss
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    Great stuff, can't wait for more.

    September 24, 2007 at 5:15 am #52802
    crazyfck
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    I took a time because I needed to solve the story in my head before typing

    to help myself I've made a timeline of the story already posted:
    http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/newflavor%27stimeline

    I'm happy to enter this world one more time. and alex… any help is more than welcome… or welcomed…hmm,  be prepared…

    I'm doing updates as I type it down, so stay tuned
    http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/anewflavor-partiii

    September 24, 2007 at 8:05 am #52803
    cwmoss
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    Crazyfck you are one Crazy F*ck! That was an excellent chapter. The girls just get sexier and sexier. I love the way you’re putting this story together.

    Your writing is exceptional and you really connect it all to produce a very exciding erotic thriller!

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