Ultimate Black Cat -Part 4 (Finale)

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  • July 9, 2006 at 8:24 am #34174
    Max
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    Certainly that was a great finale for such great story. Thank you so much Rick for writting this story. It was definetly worthy the wait.

    I bet that poor Peter feels very intimidated by his mighty wife, but I don't see he will complain about it. Not in the position he is now at least  ;D

    Max

    July 9, 2006 at 8:56 pm #34175
    rick powers
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    Thanks Max,

    Remember though that all the three young heroes are still in high school (this is supposed to take place in the Ultimate Universe – with a few alterations – okay maybe it's my own Ultimate Universe…) and still have a lot of growing up to do. The story ends suggesting they are in a reclining position, whether that's a bed or a futon or a couch, I left that up to the reader's imagination. And whether they are clothed or not is also up to the reader's imaginings. In my own mind I see three extremely strong and healthy young people who are sharing an intimate moment together, collapsing after an arduous night of exciting changes and challenges, and allowing their budding friendhips and the friendship they already have estblished to grow as well in the light of those changes. (How's that for a lot of psychobabble?)

    It actually harkens back to a night I spent with two lovely young ladies in a shared bed … but that's a story for another time.

    Later dudes,

    -Rick

    July 9, 2006 at 9:09 pm #34176
    Max
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    Thanks for the note Rick. Certainly I miss the age of the characters (I was wondering how MJ has accepted so easy to have Peter trapped that way with Felicia)

    A futon? Well, that suggestion certainly made my mind wanders in a total different direction. Somehow I'm picturing at MJ with big round eyes, blue hair and dressed in a nice kimono.  ;D

    Max

    July 11, 2006 at 11:30 pm #34177
    David
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    An excellant story. A bit sorry that it actually ends. I wonder if Gloria/Defender will end up the hero she wished she was? And what impact MJ will now have on the Powers Ultiverse?

    July 18, 2006 at 4:53 pm #34178
    robclassact
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    Been waiting for the conclusion to this story for quite some time.  I was not disappointed!  I am curious though.  Did MJ grow up as as well or just out?  Basically, for the sake of my mental picture, did she grow taller as well?

    July 19, 2006 at 3:10 pm #34179
    garyguy
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    awesome…I don't even remember how long I've been waiting for this but it was well worth it.

    July 20, 2006 at 1:09 am #34180
    Axel3.14
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    A sensual tale with all the adventurous panache of the source material.

    August 28, 2006 at 12:40 am #34181
    ze fly
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    Been waiting for the conclusion to this story for quite some time.  I was not disappointed! 

    Same here. ;D I'd say it was worth the wait!! Awesome…

    August 29, 2006 at 12:58 am #34182
    Rob Smith
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    Agreed!  Well worth the wait.

    September 9, 2006 at 7:48 am #34183
    rick powers
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    Hey!

    It's been a while since I logged onto Amaz0ns. Nice to see that peopel are still reading the old stories.

    And thank you, all of you readers and those that took the time to write such nice comments. Please know that you are greatly appreciated.

    Later,

    -Rick

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