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10: I have a hard time with breaks.  I usually use paragraph breaks only when I start a new section of story. (like a new scene)  Whenever I start a new paragraph, all I need is an indentation.  Maybe I should have something like "one for a new paragraph, two for a new scene"…thanks for the suggestion.

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Neat story. I dig it! Youre obviously very talented. Hope you consider doing more in the future.

You mean with this or in general?  I've written quite a bit of femmuscle fiction but many of mine have it as part of something else. (weregirls, demonesses, etc)

[ataru320]

An incredible story! Very well written, though there were a few instances, especially after the transformation, that I would have liked some more elaboration on. The descriptions, though, were absolutely fantastic. The build-up for the story was also very good.

I really didn't know what to do post-TF.  I just wanted to sort of have her look herself over, get the outfit on (sort of matching a pic done by Dwarf) and then get to the punchline.  If you have suggestions I'm open but usually I guess once I get through a TF my brain just wants to collapse :p

Very good story!  I'd love to send a few girls over to that apothecary!  😉

I sort of have my own weird apocathary which deals with all sorts of female TF but I wanted something a bit more realistic. (that and somehow I remember some apocatharies in literature being ancient drug-stores…)

[ataru320]

Um…why would we miss you?

BTW: cute pic.

[ataru320]

Well somehow he has to notice now :p
(BTW: not sure if you want to know but I did use a pic you did as inspiration :p)

[ataru320]

We all have low self esteem for our works..the problem is coping with it.  If it means ending the story, then maybe its the only way.  It could be for the better if it leads to a better something later on.

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Been speaking with Satsoru about the whole ordeal…it really sucks but unfortunately I've seen it too often in this circle: we love something to the point of insanity and then something makes us crack.  Sort of wish it didn't have to be like this but at least he's never going to give up femmuscle art.

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Just heard a commercial for it on my radio.  All of a sudden all I want to imagine is…well, the girls on this board as Gladiators. (sort of like the T-shirt project but with cheesy nicknames and weird tiaras)

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Lonnie's taking requests?  Hmm, got an anime/manga girl myself.  Just wondering if he could do a more buxom/muscular version of Kagura from Gintama. (she's already super strong but sadly she doesn't have the curves to prove it…and yes, she needs the umbrella, that's part of her race)

Few pics:
http://culture.froggytest.com/modules/xoopsgallery/cache/albums/albup35/Gintama_3.jpg
http://1s3lla.free.fr/img/Gintama/Gintama_02.jpg
http://www.simon-p.com/animeblog/wp-content/uploads/2007/06/gintama-58/thumbnails/gintama_58-33.png
http://www.simon-p.com/animeblog/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/gintama-63/Large/Gintama_63_Large-42.png

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Geh…you may or may not still owe me stuff, Atari, but I'm a tad lacking in funds for the moment. (unless its something cheap from Ebay or something)

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