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hey guys,

thanks for all the love.

prophet tenebrae: thanks for all the input. i always try to use it to better my writing. the reason i write it more like a script is i'm a comic guy at heart and i would eventually like to see this maybe turn into comic(at least certain parts of it. specifically the growth.) and i do agree about the more descriptiveness and adding actions in the middle of dialogue. i think perhaps in future volumes i'll integrate more dialogue in paragraphs. i have done so in previous work, i just wasn't extremely happy with it. with the added descriptions though i think that i will be more inclined. thanks again!

p.s. the giantess thing was supposed to be a bit of a shocker but i can see your point in the added descriptions would have really fleshed it out and made it a bit better.

icon: thanks for da luv. i'm glad you like the story(except for the gts bit. the real goal of the story is that jess pretty well has the ability to do most(if not all) aspects of our little(no pun intended)fetish. if it makes you feel better i'm not super into gts so she probably won't do it that often. thanks again for da luv.

fonk: glad you like it man! and the date is the very next part!

brian

[bri159]

glad you're liking it fonk. this is my first attempt at a story and i have alot of plans. hopefully they will all flesh out nicely. thanks for da luv.

brian

[bri159]

thanks fonk. i'm really trying to go for a lot of character development as well. i mean. make no mistake. it's about growth.lol. i just want everybody to care about the characters as well.

brian

[bri159]

btw. part 2 is nsfw. i tried to edit the topic to let every one know but i couldn't figure it out. i know. i'm an idiot. lol. hope this helps.

brian

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Gamma pt. 2

Jessica sat up in her bed, astonished by what she had just witnessed. Doe eyed and mouth agape she stared at her destroyed alarm clock and nightstand. She pulled her covers off of herself and attempted to get out of bed, but soreness affected her whole body. One she had never felt before. It was almost as if she had used her sisters workout routine all night long even though she knew she had slept all night.

Dean: Jess? You okay in there? I heard a loud noise.

Jess: uh…. Yeah Dean…. I’m fine.

Dean came into the room, as Jess didn’t lock her door the previous night. After all, there is really no reason to. Dean and Jess trusted each other with their deepest secrets….

Dean: JESS! …What happened to your nightstand?!?

Jess: I don’t know. …I woke up when it collapsed.

Dean: Well it’s good to know something could wake you up.

Jess: huh…

Dean: Honey…you’ve been asleep for two days. I’ve been checking on you periodically to make sure you were still breathing. You just lay there most of the weekend wrapped in your covers. It was almost as if you were in a larval stage. (She said with a smirk and a wink)

Jess: Funny. What time is it? My alarm clock seems to have gotten broken when this cheap ass nightstand went tits up.

Dean: Well, they would be the only tits in this house. And it’s 10:30am.

Jess: Okay. Cool. I don’t have to be in to work until 12:30 because it’s Sunday. I’ll grab a shower and a bite….and Dean?

Dean: yeah…

Jess: Thanks.

Dean: No problem.

Dean left Jess to her tasks at hand but all Jess could think about was the incident.  Jess felt terrible about lying to Dean. They were best friends since first grade. And she will tell her…eventually. But right now, Jess had to figure out what was going on before she told anyone.  Jess made sure Dean was out of sight before she closed and locked the door extremely carefully.

Jess looked down at her bed. It was an antique bed she inherited from her great-grandmother. An old sleigh bed made of solid oak. Jess remembered that it must have taken 4 guys to bring it in here. Including Brie, who is no slouch. She knelt down and grabbed the end.

Jess: well…here goes nothing. A mental breakdown or a hernia await….possibly both.

Jess stood up bringing the bed up to her chin with ease. Her eyes widened.

Jess: wow….

She took one hand away instinctively. Jess was lifting this antique sleigh bed. It must have weighed 400 lbs and she was holding it as if it were paper. She began to giggle. She walked over to her antique dresser, also having been willed to her by an old relative. She used her free hand and lifted that as well. After doing a few reps she set them both down.

Jess: this is amazing…incredible…..

Jess walked over to her full-length mirror, this time not as self conscious as before. She stuck her left arm out. It was as thin as it always had been. Yet, as she flexed it a small bicep formed. She gazed in awe as it steadily rose…and rose….and rose…. Finally, as cantaloupe sized bicep peaked. It appeared as hard as steel, and yet as smooth as silk. She unflexed and her arm returned too normal.

Jess: whoa! I wonder….

jess looked down to her pectorals and began flexing. Just as with her arms they began rising like a loaf of break. Until a shelf of muscle filled her wife beater t-shirt almost to the tearing point. Jess returned them to normal. She lifted her shirt to show her flat unimpressive stomach. As she concentrated, her abs became visible. The more she inhaled, the deeper the ridges. Soon a full 8 pack formed.

Jess: Mmmmmmm…I like that.

She turned around and looked at her flat ass. As she concentrated a bit as watched as it rose, filling her underwear. ,rising, swelling, making her petite panties into a makeshift g-string.

Jess: I think I’ll keep these.

Jess happened to look down at her destroyed nightstand and see her little pink friend and got a devilish grin on her face.

Jess: hmm…it has been too long old friend; I think it’s time we got re-aquainted.

Jess picked up her long pink vibrator she had nicknamed Jack (short for jack-hammer) and turned it on full blast. After all, she didn’t really need any stimulus. She was already about to explode. She gently placed “Jack” next to her clit as she moaned in pleasure. Although an odd sound accompanied her movement, a sound of plastic vibrating against a metal pole, Jess enjoyed it all the same. After a few moments of clitoral attention, she inserted “jack” inside her moist vagina. Within seconds she experienced an orgasm that singularly topped all her previous ones combined! She pulled “jack” out and looked at its mangled form.

Jess: hmmm…I’m guess I’m strong down there as well. (She grinned)

Jess casually caught a new look in the mirror and saw her body again. It looked different. ,a bit thicker, more bulky. Some of her new muscle showed.

Jess: uh-oh…

she concentrated a bit and returned to ‘normal’

Jess: that’s good. If that didn’t work I may not have to worry about tell dean my secret.

Jess quickly showered and got ready for work. Grabbed a bite and said ‘bye to Dean. She got to work a few minutes early and got right to her duties. The first few hours were a bit boring as usual until she saw Brian.

Brian had worked for Jess’ dad for a couple of years. He had used the “free membership” benefit to it’s fullest. He had large arms, barrel chest, tight abs, and thick legs and calves. Jess bit her bottom lip. She became instantly horny. She watched him for a good twenty seconds. Marking his path and slinked over to the supply closet. She quietly slinked inside waiting to hear his footsteps. Strategically, she opened the door just as he passed and grabbed his shirt literally lifting him off of his feet and into the closet, closing the door rapidly keeping the lights off.

Jess practically mauled Brian with her tongue. Kissing his lips and neck. She slid her hands under his uniform shirt feeling his tight abs and thick pecks, which would have been hard for any other woman trying to feel them but they almost felt life rubber to her new strength.

Brian: aargh!

Jess: (disguising her voice) sorry baby…

She kissed his chest and abs working her way down to his crotch. Not able to hold back anymore, she ripped them open, tearing his belt and his pants open instantly devouring his cock.

Jess: (thinking to herself) hmm…well, I guess he can’t be big everywhere.
She continued to suck, getting him hard. Then lifting him effortlessly onto the floor. She undid her own pants and slid them, along with her panties to her knees. Jess guided Brian’s cock inside of her and began to pump. Slowly, for a moment, she then sped up. At first Jess wasn’t impressed at all, but suddenly she began to moan. She could feel Brian’s cock filling her…. expanding inside her.

Jess: (thinking) wha….

As his cock began to fill her, Jess moaned in delight. She rocked back and forth, edging ever closer to her second orgasm of the day, not acknowledging that each time she rocked, jess entire body grew. Thicker and bigger all over. Her shoulders widened along with her traps and deltoids. Small tears began forming in the back of her shirt. Her biceps destroyed her sleeves. Her thickening legs exploded, revealing her naked muscular body. Her breasts swayed until they reached a full out bounce. Brian reached up and began to massage her engorged nipples, as it was the only control he had. Her things and calves thickened against Brian’s body until she came as intensely as she did this morning. Brian went unconscious

Jess dismounted Brian, revealing his enormous penis.

Jess: huh. Interesting little side effect. Although I don’t think that little is the operative word. (She chuckled.)

As Brian slowly began to regain awareness, Jess lifted him to his feet and stood him outside the supply closet door. Disoriented, Brian managed to make it to the Men’s room with no one noticing. Jess turned on the supply closet light and caught her reflection in a broken mirror the janitor had kept around.

Jess: oh my god!

She saw her huge new body, easily as big as her “little sister” Brie. Which has quickly becoming more accurate. Thick arms and chest muscles. Tapering down to a thin waist, then widening again to feminine hips and tree trunk thighs and bulging calves. Jess concentrated and shrank back down to normal size again.

Jess: it’s getting depressing having the body of a goddess, but having to conceal it immediately afterwards.

She grabbed a spare uniform and put it back on.

Jess: I hope I can make it through the rest of the day in this.

2B continued….

Brian

[bri159]

awesome work! you rock man.

brian

[bri159]

excellent work as always, gettar! thanks for sharing

brian

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thanks for all the love guys!

GWHH: no problem. the way the story is gonna work out, i can accomodate pretty much anything imaginable.

hunter: thank you for da luv. i hope to have another installment by weeks end.

fonk: thanks. i only hope subsequent chapters can mainain the level of quality.

00tree: glad you dig it!

brian

[bri159]

wow. that's all i have to say. thanks for sharing

brian

[bri159]

good call on the thora birch. i've had a hankering to see olivia munn from g4 done up right.

brian

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