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I moved to Atlanta about a week after the Olympics ended back in '96 and that stuff was all over the news back then. I felt so sorry for the guy. The FBI tried to ruin a good man's life, and now he dies at the age of 44. I don't know what is health problems were, or if all that stuff drove him to drinking, but unless he had some sort of disease, 44 year olds don't die of natural causes.

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There is absolutely nothing wrong with shameless self promotion 😉 Who doesn't love the guy walking on the sidewalk like he's minding his own business, but he's wearing a huge sign draped over his shoulders that says something like "EAT AT JOE's! AND I'm JOE"

I tried to think of some stories that I've read to help you out though, but I can't come up with any thing different that fits your criteria. I sort of remember a yahoo group that had some stories like that, but I think the group is gone. Maybe somebody kept those stories or something.

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I'd have to go with the buff chick myself. Nothing to back it up or substantiate my argument… just going with my gut.

And nice one with the Travis Bickel… I sat here for a couple minutes trying to think where I had heard that name before.

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Hehe, no I felt bad, but I think its the heat this summer. Its getting to me.
Since I haven't had a chance to post. I did read Sarah's Suprise and Cold Fury 4. Just wanted to tell you, good job on both. Quite different, but both good.

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Yep, I just thought it over…  that list was even worse than those stupid lists that Rolling Stone puts out.

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When I joined this forum I had no idea what to expect. I'd joined a couple other FM type message boards and this forum blows them away. There are some thought provoking topics. I'd never really thought about this quesion before I read it tonight.

I've been writing FM and to a certain extent growth stories online since about '02, but I started reading stories in the genre back in the mid '90's. I started out reading the Aurora Universe stuff from Sharon Best. I haven't been able to find any of that material in years, but I always thought it was well written. I tend to really like authors who have fresh or unique ways to describe a female physique. I don't really need much help when it comes to situations or scenarios for my stories. I have those floating around in my head all the time.

[demented20]

Sorry for the slow reply, but another well written chapter. I really like how you don't let Tris get into a routine. As soon as she does, they shake her up. Keep it going. Waiting on the next instalment.

[demented20]

Ah somebody beat me to it. I was going to say that sleep is over rated and people need to suck it up.

Excellent chapter by the way.  Good fights scenes and I'm a guy who likes my fights scenes. Tris is going to have to lean to duck from time to time 😉

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I know I've already said this before, but I love the character. She's unique for the genre.  I'm just itching to see what you do with Trista.

[demented20]

Nice story, and give the guy a little poetic license. He was on a roll

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