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  • in reply to: Gauging interest. #60066
    g-man
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    Anybody remember any of the URLs for the old sites mentioned (ZZZ's board, the geocity site, the archive, etc) so that we might take a peek with the wayback machine?

    in reply to: My first story #60084
    g-man
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    I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

    in reply to: two new pencils #59966
    g-man
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    Ooh, it said one might be coloured, I look forward to that šŸ˜‰

    in reply to: i’m back #59741
    g-man
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    Yay! Been looking forward to more stuff from you for a while šŸ˜‰

    in reply to: Lifestream Delta (Tifa fanfic for sacul) #59453
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    That, sir, was AWESOME. While I never finished FF7 (indeed, never even finished the first disc, as I simply lacked the patience), I'm still familiar with the storyline and quite enjoyed Advent Children. And that really was a great piece of fiction.

    in reply to: Fantasy Island – a FMG episode #53034
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    I'm aware of my limitationsā€¦ you should know that! And I will not stop because of this. I didn't feel any negativity… to me it's the opposite

    and is impossible to please everyone, so I try to at least please myself. Since I believe someone share the same things as me, I put it here. Of the giantess thing, what can I say? Why not? šŸ™‚

    And thanks for your effort in showing me how the proper grammar changes some things for better (way better). I try to be dynamic since I don't have the full scope of the vocabulary, to not giving too much space for descriptions, my weak point.
    I donā€™t do it because want to write a story, but because I want to tell a story. In Portuguese would be very few people to tell this kind of fantasy

    What I wanted the most was someone who could give some time to do what I cant accomplish. To do exactly what you did, so I could be freer to tell a story

    Is hard to tell how doomsday it will be near the end. But will be very b-movie. Itā€™s a farce after all šŸ˜‰

     

    Well, there are people here who have a far better grasp of the language than I do, but perhaps some day I'll take a crack at it, starting with the first chapter. After all, if it's done a little bit at a time, it doesn't seem like such a daunting task. You're a very prolific writer! Err, no promises though šŸ˜‰

    in reply to: RFW Sakuya Sprite Update #59498
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    Imari produces lots of game designs, but nothing ever comes of them… I would suggest that you'll get more satisfaction implementing your character first for an existing fighting engine such as M.U.G.E.N.

    If you make your character as a MUGEN character, all you have to do is create a character rather than an entire game/engine. You can probably build a game around MUGEN too. Start small, and work up from there.

    in reply to: Fantasy Island – a FMG episode #53029
    g-man
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    I can't for the life of me figure out how to edit my previous post, so here it is.

    Upon further reflection, I realize that my previous post was a bit insulting. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to come across that way! My intention was to:

    1) Note that while your latest chapter had diverged from my tastes, not being in to giantess stories or doomsday scenarios, remained an excellent piece that was still worth of praise.
    2) Note that while your English may not be perfect (being a second language), this wasn't something to worry about, as it is the ideas that matter more than the words. And that if you wanted, somebody would probably be willing to act as an editor.

    Even professional authors have editors! šŸ™‚ I'm sorry if my post came across as too negative. That wasn't my intention.

    in reply to: Fantasy Island – a FMG episode #53028
    g-man
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    I'll admit, I'm not a fan of where it's going. I've never been into giantess stuff, and it's starting to get a bit depressing. But ignore me! Writers should write what THEY want, and only listen to reader requests if they like them.

    Don't let your poor English dissuade you! It's the ideas that matter, not the grammar. Besides, somebody can always edit it for you. For example, I'm a horrible creative writer, but I've got a decent grasp of the language. Here's an example of how some of your work might look like with a bit of editing:

    "Yes Mr. President, somebody is trying to steal the reality distortion field" Mr. Roarke said into the hotline handset.

    "What the fuck are you saying?!" the American president shouted into the phone in a panic, "Do you realize that the United States annexed Hawaii JUST because of this damned device!? Which, might I add, has NEVER worked properly as your grandfather promised it would!"

    "Mr. President, the truce was to protect the machine, not to use it for your gain."

    "I know, I know. Well, I've already sent a team to the island. They'll arrive in an hour. The military is also preparing for a sortie."

    "We've got a storm approaching, Mr. President. It'll arrive in a few hours. The sooner your men get here, the better." Tattoo looked at Mr. Roarke apprehensively as he placed the phone back in its cradle.

    "We need to shut the island down. Go to the lobby and inform everyone that they should seek shelter due to the storm." Mr. Roarke said to Tattoo. Roarke could see lightning far off on the distant ocean, beyond the fire of the decorative torches outside. It was surely a sign of things to come.

    In the resort's main bar, Tom was dealing with the stunning female guest. She was a blend of all his fantasies, of all the most beautiful women he'd ever seen, and she seemed to grow more strikingly beautiful with each passing minute.

    "I… I have… a girlfriend," he squeaked, managing to marshal his resolve for a brief moment.

    "She doesnā€™t have to know," she said, smiling, as she somehow grew even more attractive. Her breasts pushed outwards, stretching the fabric of her dress to its limits.

    "She'll know, Iā€™m sure of it." He couldn't help but take another glimpse at her breasts as her clothing tore open.

    "Oops!" she said, holding her dress, now too small to contain her growing bosom. Her plan to seduce him was plain and simple: shove her giant breasts in his face. In the beginning, she was a little disgusted by how men reacted to her amazing new body and face. She just couldnā€™t stand to think about what was going through their heads. Now she wanted to manipulate them, to squash them, to use them, to chew them up and spit them out. She didnā€™t care if she destroyed their lives, made them lose their girlfriends or wives, their family and kids. On this island, she was a goddess. She planned to rule over it.

    Tattoo chose this moment to interrupt the band and make his announcement over the PA.

    "Ladies and gentleman, sorry to cut your night short, but a strong storm is approaching,"

    The patrons eyed each other nervously.

    "For your own safety, please return to your rooms. The staff will give you instructions, and more information will follow shortly. Thank you for your cooperation."

    "Well, thatā€™s… bad." Tom said.

    "Don't mean bed?" she purred sexily, with a mischievous grin.

    "I really need to check if my girlfriend is alright…" he said to her. This guy, who couldnā€™t stop gawking at her growing breasts, was still thinking about his girlfriend? She only had a few days left like this, and she wouldnā€™t let the first night in her glorious new body be wasted.

    That's all I had time for, and it's really just a quick pass. My punctuation isn't perfect, but it's an example of what an editor can do to try to make your work take better advantage of the language. Perhaps somebody here would like to pick up where I left off, and make your work really shine. I hope you like what I've done with it šŸ™‚

    in reply to: ABX #57797
    g-man
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    Oooh, I like so far!

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