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Thanks for the info, Prophet. I also would like to get this guy's email. I also have a couple of questions pretaining to the stuff from EL Publicatoins that I would like to ask him. If you can email it to me or post it, thanks. If you can't do either, thanks anyway.

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Also glad to have youe back.

Anyway, about your question, I also have a rather unique solution. In my stories, I always use the same two charaters as my main charaters, though their traits (both physical and personality) change slightly from story to story. Mayim always ends up being the "Uberbabe", as you put it, and Jinn winds up married to her, dating her, or otherwise involved with her. While Mayim is a harater of my own reation, Jinn really isn't. He is a refletion of my Id (inner self representing your strongest desires). Therefore, in a way, I actually am paired up with my dream girl.

I guess that it's kind of a pathetic set-up, but it works for me.  😀

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O_o

That. Is. Freaking. Awesome.

<bows in respect>

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In order for Shawna Walker to do well in 2007, she will need to learn how to get really ripped.
Shawna you have way too much fat. The way you train, and eat isn't going to work, if you want to be a real pro, with out all the drugs that will make you look Manly that is.  😉

Ouch. :-

Joking or not, that's a little harsh.

Personally, I think that she's hot as hell. She doesn't really need to get more ripped.

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Maybe that wouldn't be such a bad thing… 😉

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The great thing about fantasy is that it is not real. As The Collector said, "I'll use my fantasy to defeat your fantasy". Since it's not real, it's subject to the whims of a fantasy's creator. So why worry? Besides, some people actually fantasize about stuff like that. I however, prefer heavily muscled and largely busomed women that are taller than most men, who tend to be dominant but gentle, as y'all can see from reading some of my stories.

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Very impressive! I liked the story a lot up until the point were you find out that it was a dream. It was a bit of a let-down, but everything else was absolutely amazing.

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What exactly are you comparing?

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Yeah, I know the difference. I was just teasing. But you're right in your observation how the sentences just seem to ramble on in this story. However, from my point of view, I think that the way that it was written perfectly suits the story. Since it is being told from a first-person perspective and takes place entirely within the main character's mind, it makes sense that it would ramble on like many people's thoughts do. It adds a certain realistic quality.

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Great story, gblock.  Would you like to post it to Brawna so it doesn't get buried in the forums?

Done.

I was a little annoyed at Mayim for seemly forgetting that she'd wished "to become the ultimate object of sexual attraction," and/or that she didn't trust that all components of her wish would be fulfilled rather than one cancelling out the others, but…  that's a minor complaint.  The whole "two angels are sitting in a bar" thing was a fun approach, and the detail and pacing of the growth scenes was well done.  Keep up the good work!

Oh come on.  😀  It is only natural for a person to be skeptical when landed with such an opportunity, and the idea tha anything that can go wrong, will go wrong pops up all of the time with wishes. Her initial wish wasn't made seriously. She didn't think that it would ever come true, but she was still careful to phrase it in a relatively specific way in case it did. When she restated her wish, she took it much more seriously and tried to spell it out more clearly. Obviously, it was still granted literally (much to her, and our, eventual pleasure). As for the second comment, yeah, that was fun to write. I wanted to add more to those scenes (add more of a comedic element to them), but I felt that it would not only make the story too long, but that it would detract from the real point of interest in the story. If you guys liked that, I can try to add similar things into future stories. Personally, I think that it fleshes out the characters a bit, but I'm a little biased when I say that and you guys ARE the audience. Just let me know what y'all prefer.

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Hey! That's not nice! I write all of my stories with stream-of-consciousness, too! Is there something that you would like to tell me?  😉

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