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gblock01
ParticipantWell, you're off to a good start, but it's a little hard to keep track of the dialogue. It all kind of runs together.
gblock01
ParticipantWelcome to the forum! I can't wait to see what you crank out in the near future.
gblock01
ParticipantMy guess that it's going to be the second one, but it'll have some shining moments that'll be priceless.
gblock01
Participant😮
I don't know whether to laugh or cry…Has anyone else noticed that some of the movies that are going to be coming out sometime in the near future, specifically ones based on comics or cartoons (cartoons mostly, Transformers excluded of course) look: a) strained, b) awful, c)horribly twisted from their original form, or d) some combination thereof?
gblock01
ParticipantA great continuation! An interesting situation, one with some very appealing potential. My only complaint is that there isn't very much description about the transformations themselves, just the resulting consequeinces (not that I'm complaining about that part). Other than that, though, there is one one thing to say: "Please, sir? May I have some more?"
gblock01
ParticipantI have to say that I'm relieved to here all of this information. I was recently looking for the Links tab as well, but couldn't find it. Ironically enough, I was going to post the same question, but, on a whim, I decided to check the posts that I haven't read yet. Funny how some things work out, huh?
gblock01
ParticipantAn absolutely awesome story! Very well written, although I could have used a bit more detail in the transformation, as well as in the following scene, but that's just me. 😉
It really is a well done story, though, and one that I sincerely hope that you continue.
gblock01
ParticipantIt's so hard to choose! I guess that I'd have to pick arms if anything, but abs are a lose second, followed by chest, then back, then legs.
gblock01
ParticipantOkay…
That was… interesting.
I really don't know how to respond to that… ???
gblock01
ParticipantA simple set up, a short story, and still amazing! great job.
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