Definitely off to a good start! Hope to see more size in the next chapter!
One minor criticism: pay closer attention to verb tenses. The events should all be told in the past tense (or all in the present tense), there seems to be some switching back and forth.
Otherwise, nice work.
Oh
My
GOD
Now those are some insane proportions. Great work!
Now that's my kind of realism!
Supersized is great with me (but with my username, that's probably no surprise). Still, you have enough characters that you could probably spread it around. As long as some of them keep getting bigger!!
Yeah… more Monster is always welcome.
Cameo – You Make me work
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvypY8EpPWI
The 80s: holy crap.
The best part is that it sorta makes it sound like she's already established — maybe we'll get other appearances of her over the course of the series before then?
Hooray for hugeness! And its return, of course.
Super! (Pun shamelessly intended)
Love the casual feat of strength to match those massive muscles. Please, More!
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