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limit, I too am not a big fan of violence and I also very much enjoyed the story.

I really hope the author writes a sequel. I liked the length of the story as well and am very glad that nhlcoolers left it wide open for additional parts.

a must read.

[greyfox]

Hello guys, normally I am the classic lurker to this forum, but I had such a positive reaction to this story by nhlcoolers that i had to join and reply.

First off, I thought the story was amazing. It is fairly rare that you find a FMG story that is so well written and incredibly descriptive. It is simply a cut above all the regular/normal storys in the FMG relam.

Now, to respond to the thread topic. Steriods, I didnt mind that the author used them as its growth mechanism. Because in real life (which i think was the authors purpose/goal this time around) from your local competition to the olympia, all the girls and guys are one something; thats a fact. And look at how they drive us all wild! lol.  On another note, the author also has a mentioing of boobs on the girl and her gracious facial features. Also, a slightly deeper voice to me could mean that the girl sounded like a mouse before and now its simply more mature.

The point is that, I think nhlcoolers wrote a remarkable story that has a touch of realism and the fantasy elements we all love. Remember most fbb's on steriods loose there boobs and their face often can become distorted (remember Mrs. Neil?). IMO its a great peice of work and he is a great author, one of which that is becomming to rare in the fmg community.

Yours,

Steve

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