[iceman75]

*Bows down*

You my good sir, are still the master, thanks for taking my suggestions to heart, not that your stories weren't good before, but now that Es is bigger, she'll beat men in every single aspect, power, muscle size, muscle definition, and it'll make her even more intimidating and (to some) desireable to men.

[iceman75]

Oh, of course I wouldn't expect you to go that far, I mean GBM is a really acquired taste, I'm a big fan of his stories, but they're not for everyone. I was thinking more along the lines of Annie Ample, I think we all have read some Annie stories sometime throughout our lives, and whats one constant in those stories, Annie appears to be bigger in each one, she went from 37 to 50 inch biceps from 7 to 8 and 50 to 82 from 8 to 9. While I wouldn't want you to go against your natural instincts as a writer, I would love to see Es or your next character expand their muscles beyond realism into Annie Ample esque type numbers.

[iceman75]

You're sort of right, proportionally, the muscle size on Es' body is just as big as some of the big male bodybuilders, because of her height and relative size. And with your descriptions, it makes her seem bigger. But my philosophy has always been bigger is better, so, as she went along, I would have liked to see Es increase in size, so she starts out with 20 inch arms, then increase every episode, same with strength, but then again she's your character so you can pretty much do what you want. Just a suggestion as a fan and a fellow writer.

[iceman75]

Another great chapter, dude! The only thing I would work on is the muscle size, you say she's bigger than any male bodybuilder, and yet, her arms are not much over 20 inches, while this isn't important to some, I would say make her slightly bigger, the biggest male bodybuilders probably average 23 inch arms, there's one that I've seen with 26 inch arms. Now I'm not saying that this hurts your writing, since you have some of the best descriptions out there, I personally, would like to see her numbers become larger, since she's described as being so much bigger than any male on the planet, you know what I mean?

[iceman75]

Hey Reaper another great story and at last, something including something other than outright muscle snuff, I mean not that I don't love that, but I like to know how she got so strong, and how strong she actually is, so I'm happy you wrote this chapter. I hope you continue writing, if I was you, I'd take a break and start writing a new series, complete that and start posting it piece by piece like this one. This one has worked out great, you're a very good writer and deserve all the accolades you receive. Good job on this story!

[iceman75]

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! Whatcha all say if i try to create kitty 😉 as a 3d incarnation. Ofcourse if FemXman diesnt have anything
against it… 🙂

I vote yes!  🙂

[iceman75]

Hi 😮
I just want say that I've been following your stories, and while I'm not fan of excessive violence and gore, I'm very attracted to and seduced by your characters sexual drive and sheer supermuscled strength and your discription of their immense bodies. I can't believe they are mere humans but some kind of new super species.
Your stories are similiar in some ways to the Dmaynard's stories at Diana the Valkyrie's site. I will try to add the link if you are interested.
http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/dmaynard/index.htm

Please keep up the great work.
Rodman 8)

Thats a great comparison, I agree for the most part, that the gore parts do remind me a lot of Dmaynard's stuff, but I think reaper's muscle description is much better, all around, and Es might be stronger than any of D Maynard's women, but whatever comes next for Es, I can't wait to read it!

[iceman75]

Whoa!  Is there any part of her body that doesn't pose a mortal threat to men.  😮

I agree with that statement, I would love to see more of what she can do to men.

[iceman75]

Sorry Gimme Size, I've been out of the country for the last few weeks on vacation, so I'm a little behind on my writing.  I had a bit of Hardbody chapter 6 done before I left so I hope to pick up where I left off soon. 

Actually, while on vacation, I came up with a new idea.  Anybody have any interest in seeing a story set in a women's prison staring a bunch of sweaty, super-cut hardbodies?

Well, its good to see you back, hopefully you can write with a whole new energy, now that you've had a nice vacation to get your mind clear. As for your idea, yeah, I definitely would love to see that, the bigger and stronger they are, the more I'll probably like them.

[iceman75]

Wow, that was even better! I love how you can come up with such unconventional feats of strength, like using her mouth like that, her tongue crushing his tongue and teeth, her bite taking his face apart, with the power to crush concrete(which I would love to see her do, extensively)like nothing. And describing her clit as though its a muscle of its own, bigger than any cock, harder than steel, just about, man you come up with some awesome stuff, and I can't wait to see more unconventional feats from you.

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