[iceman75]

Thanks, Sybic, I really appreciate your comments. Right now I'm not writing, I just lost my inspiration and motivation somewhere down the road. Anyway as far as describing them while doing the strength feats, I probably should have done that because that usually fits in with my style, but to tell you the truth, I am not a long story writer, I usually like to keep it 2-4 pages, and this one was 7 pages and I actually wanted to concentrate on power over muscle size and definition, if I went back to rewrite it, which I may, I would definitely change it so that the women's muscles would be more emphasized and I would describe their bodies more thoroughly during the contest.

[iceman75]

Welcome to Amazons.com, Valkyrielover! I'm so glad that someone from that sinking ship Forum Saradas could swim over here and put their art up for free. I hope you're just the first of many to come over and grace us all with your art.

[iceman75]

Good to hear dude! Hope its as intense, if not even more intense than this story!

[iceman75]

Wow! There are no words to describe this story, it was one of the most intense tales I remember reading, and I have read quite a few muscle stories in my time, but this one surpasses just about all of them. Both are huge and ripped beyond comparison, and I am guessing they're not even reaching the peak of their hugeness! Great stuff Mr. Shhh.

[iceman75]

I absolutely agree with that, I have always loved seeing stories where young girls or women challenge male superiority in any way, but especially on the football field, seeing a young girl, like 15 or 16 years old managing to push huge lineman around, men that weigh 150 pounds more than she does on average, with ease is an incredible idea to me and I would love to see it in more stories. And of course a girl with muscles that could not only challenge, but utterly defeat and devastate men on the Bodybuilding stage is great to me as well. I hope to see you write a story like this as soon as possible!

[iceman75]

Wow! That was even better! I can't believe my eyes, you have almost surplanted, with your two stories, Mr. Shhh as my favorite author on this site, your descriptions are awesome, and intense, the strength feats are really cool, and you leave open many possibilities, I doubt we've seen how strong Tania really is!

[iceman75]

Another very good story, dude! It was pretty short, but made me yearn for more, Maybe you can present us with a story about Tania doing a sport? I have always loved stories where girls beat boys on the football field, and seeing one huge muscle girl stomp a team of big boys or men into the dust basically by herself is a great story to me.

[iceman75]

thank you very much for the kind words you all, it makes it all worth the efforts.

I don't usually contimue stories that could have stopped, but this one provoqued enough reaction to extend it some.

I was thinking about  introducing  the mom in the third page, but sybic26 blew the surprise…. 😡  😉
what could i do now?

FFF

Either go really old with their grandma or really young with their younger cousin.

[iceman75]

😮 Holy crap! Your description is beautiful! I can't say much because my mouth is on the floor! You have upped the ante, my good sir, I very seriously doubt it can get much better than this, a lot of us writers can learn from your description of her muscles and sex. I don't know why but for some reason your story made me want to be her next victim!

[iceman75]

Here is the original thread for it, like I said before, really good stuff, I can't wait to see how powerful her genitalia really is!

http://www.amaz0ns.com/index.php?option=com_smf&Itemid=95&topic=3019.0

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