[iceman75]

I enjoyed it myself, I thought while I would like Traci to remain the main character of the story, I do like that you introduced two very well described girls as her best friends, and could possibly branch off into new stories involving those characters if you felt like it. I have always been a fan of your muscle description, I have tried to model some of my newer works after yours because of the enjoyment I get out of reading your stories. Its up to you what you want to write, if these things interest you, then there's nothing wrong with them. I just hope all the negative comments don't make you hesitant to write again, I would miss your writings a great deal. Like I said at your site, I love it when you take it to the next level and hope you bring it beyond in the future.

[iceman75]

Hey Vincent, glad to see you back, man. Always loved your characters, especially Kitty and the other vertically challenged ones, in fact, I sort of made mention of your stuff in my most recent story, Muscle Impossible 2, comparing one of my characters with Uber Kitty. Can't wait to see what more you have come up with.

[iceman75]

Like I said at my group, which you posted it on also, this story blew me away, guys and gals, if you like super strength, read this story! I hope you keep doing the super duper strength feats storyline going, that's one element I wish would be in more stories.

[iceman75]

Why not all three, that's what I do. I can't wait to see what happens btw, hope to see Mercy do some flexing and strength feats.

[iceman75]

Ain't noone gonna wish me a happy birthday?  :'(

[iceman75]

I agree, don't forget though, the original hosts of the American Gladiators were pro football players in the 1970's and early 80's, so you would expect them to go slightly old school, although Laila Ali is newer, Hulk Hogan hasn't been really that relevant since 2002. I guess his reality program is fairly relevant, but I don't watch it myself. Well, whatever, it should be interesting to see the levels of fitness on the female gladiators, hope there's a good mix of heavy muscle and light muscle.

[iceman75]

Yup, I'm watching it too, I wonder if all female bodybuilders are like that, judging their own bodies harshly while thinking others are better than them in every respect? It's sort of a turn off to tell you the truth, even with all that muscle.

[iceman75]

Thanks guys, yeah, I almost always write myself as the main character because I know these are the things I would like to happen to myself, you know? And I'd rather have myself experience these things by proxy, lol. Yeah, most of the time I do write for myself, and the kind of stories I write, outlandish or not are more like what I want than most people it seems, but if other people like them and care enough to comment on them, then its great for me, this is one of the most complimented stories I have done recently, really, I got two comments about it here, and three on another forum I posted it on, so for me, I think I must have done something right here, because the narrative seems to be hitting home for more people.

[iceman75]

Actually, I don't see it as a heel turn, I see it as an underhanded way to motivate her to get even more muscular than she already is, he's saying he wants to see her big enough to fill out that dress, he just holds out his love from her as the motivating factor to help her do it. I hope that's a good enough reason, because I definitely want to see it happen.

[iceman75]

Yeah, I have seen this story a long time ago and I loved it, I like to see this kind of story, where one woman overpowers a boatload of men at one time. I am not a fan of supertall women, like over 6'3, but it didn't take too much away from the story overall, so good job on it!

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