[iceman75]

Another Great Chapter man, you really have a good way of describing strength feats and muscle, I have enjoyed just about every story I have seen from you, and this one was no different, another masterpiece.

[iceman75]

For those interested there is a new picture up at the Akade Site, its a fan art picture of Little Annie Ample, be forewarned its NSFW:

http://theakadesite.blogspot.com/2007/08/fan-art-little-annie-ample.html

[iceman75]

Yup, if I would take a guess as to why Mercy has an aversion to the opposite sex, look at the two situations so far, she was hit on and almost raped by an 18 year old gymnast when she was 10, then a couple years later a group of guys try to kidnap her and have their way with her, not realizing the power she possessed. So far her encounters with the opposite sex have not been pleasant and that may have influenced her decisions to not have anything to do with them sexually. BTW, great story, reaper, I love Mercy's power and hope to see more extreme feats of strength very soon.

[iceman75]

Awesome stuff there, I especially love Pan, as a big fan of DBZ and DB GT, it would be unreal to see her grow that big in a fit of saiyan rage and totally beat up any enemy the Z crew has to come up against.

[iceman75]

Not demeaning you or anything, but is there anyway to clean that up a bit, its very hard to read. I'm sorry and like I said, its not an insult to you, but I think the story was great, it was very, very hard to read.

[iceman75]

Feminox is updated Read about how a Little girl being call ugly and push around became a Amazon!Enjoy!
http://feminox.blogspot.com/ 

Actually, that's been around for a long, long time, Ashlee, look at the date, its June 27, so its a month and a half gone since that update, but I agree, its a real good update, but its not so new.

But the Akade site has updated with page 9 of the Vivi Biceps story here: (NSFW)

http://theakadesite.blogspot.com/2007/08/otra-mas-la-n-9.html

[iceman75]

Hey GBM, you're doing a great job with this story, and I hope you do more here in the future. I love the way you described her muscle and strength, and her desire to use it as well. Hope you have some really, really cool feats of strength in the next chapter. Jeremy W.

[iceman75]

Dammit, Jeremy, you keep interrupting my attempts to write my own fiction with the incredible stuff you write.  ;D  I've been a fan for as long as you've been posting at Paul Smith's eXtreme Strength site, and I was thrilled to see that you had started posting your stories here.

You keep writing 'em, I'll keep reading 'em.  Thanks!

I consider that to be the best compliment I've received at Amaz0ns.com, thanks very much St.Mercy2020.

[iceman75]

Hmmm, lets see, I get much of my inspiration from people who write very much like I write, so Michele Roppo is first and formost on my list, GBM is not far behind him, I draw a lot of inspiration from reading DTM also, even though his chicks aren't that big, he has great descriptions and strength feats. Speaking of strength, Paul Smith got me inspired early in my writing, Mr. Shhh has some really great descriptions as well. To me, muscle size and strength should be really extreme, and the one's who push their characters to the highest degree of muscle and strength are the ones that inspire me the most in my stories.

As far as the outside of muscle world, J.R.R. Tolkien is my favorite author, JK Rowling has made a more recent impact with her Harry Potter books, Star Wars EU novels have been a staple of my reading for the last 15 years, Kevin Anderson and Timothy Zahn are my two favorite authors of those works. So yeah, when it comes to reading, I'm a big nerd,  ;D

[iceman75]

Nice addition to the story, my friend, while I do like Mercy's strength a lot, I would have liked to see her do more in terms of lifting weights before ripping a male apart with her bare hands, but it was great, seeing her at 10 tear a guy limb from limb with ease. I wonder what else she could have done with her immense strength at 10 years old?

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