And will Nicole and Scott choose to be shielded?
This is great PDG! I'm looking forward to reading more!
A great start. This is a good story, and it is well worth the effort to continue.
I suspect the extra line or paragraph breaks (that make the story a bit hard to read) resulted from either the tool used to compose the story, or how it was cut and pasted from that tool into the forum.
If you go back in edit mode, you should be able to remove those extra line breaks by backspacing over them. It will make the story a lot easier to read.
Again, this is a great start.
This is coming along great, Wachsende!
I'm looking forward to where this goes next.
Excellent, thank you Kate! I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Very good story Wachsende. I also generally prefer a plot, character development, and usually that means gradual growth.
I'm anxious to read more.
This is good, I'm looking forward to more.
Yes, I agree, please continue the story!
Yes, more … hurry !
😉 Thanks
A great start. I'm anxious to read more!
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