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  • in reply to: a long ago story… #56386
    KeithXZ
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    And will Nicole and Scott choose to be shielded?

    in reply to: Paula pt2 #57998
    KeithXZ
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    This is great PDG!  I'm looking forward to reading more!

    in reply to: Paula #57996
    KeithXZ
    Participant

    A great start.  This is a good story, and it is well worth the effort to continue.

    I suspect the extra line or paragraph breaks (that make the story a bit hard to read) resulted from either the tool used to compose the story, or how it was cut and pasted from that tool into the forum.

    If you go back in edit mode, you should be able to remove those extra line breaks by backspacing over them.  It will make the story a lot easier to read.

    Again, this is a great start.

    in reply to: One Less [Part 1?] #55842
    KeithXZ
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    This is coming along great, Wachsende!

    I'm looking forward to where this goes next.

    in reply to: a long ago story… #56381
    KeithXZ
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    Excellent, thank you Kate!  I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment.

    in reply to: One Less [Part 1?] #55839
    KeithXZ
    Participant

    Very good story Wachsende.  I also generally prefer a plot, character development, and usually that means gradual growth. 

    I'm anxious to read more.

    in reply to: The Hypnotist (playscript format) #56355
    KeithXZ
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    This is good, I'm looking forward to more.

    in reply to: Leech (First post, First story, Probably NSFW) #52064
    KeithXZ
    Participant

    Yes, I agree, please continue the story!

    in reply to: Fantasy Island – a FMG episode #53021
    KeithXZ
    Participant

    Yes, more … hurry !

    😉  Thanks

    in reply to: Memoirs #56466
    KeithXZ
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    A great start.  I'm anxious to read more!

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