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KeithXZ
ParticipantAnd will Nicole and Scott choose to be shielded?
KeithXZ
ParticipantThis is great PDG! I'm looking forward to reading more!
KeithXZ
ParticipantA great start. This is a good story, and it is well worth the effort to continue.
I suspect the extra line or paragraph breaks (that make the story a bit hard to read) resulted from either the tool used to compose the story, or how it was cut and pasted from that tool into the forum.
If you go back in edit mode, you should be able to remove those extra line breaks by backspacing over them. It will make the story a lot easier to read.
Again, this is a great start.
KeithXZ
ParticipantThis is coming along great, Wachsende!
I'm looking forward to where this goes next.
KeithXZ
ParticipantExcellent, thank you Kate! I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment.
KeithXZ
ParticipantVery good story Wachsende. I also generally prefer a plot, character development, and usually that means gradual growth.
I'm anxious to read more.
KeithXZ
ParticipantThis is good, I'm looking forward to more.
KeithXZ
ParticipantYes, I agree, please continue the story!
KeithXZ
ParticipantYes, more … hurry !
😉 Thanks
KeithXZ
ParticipantA great start. I'm anxious to read more!
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