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  • July 15, 2007 at 3:45 am in reply to: Second Chance, Chapter Seven #55507
    KeithXZ
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    This is coming along really really well StMercy!  I've just read parts 3 through 7, after being away for a while.

    I really like the complexity of the plot and the pace at which you are developing it and developing the characters.

    Your story is really letting me get into it.

    Thank you very much, and I hope to read more of it soon!

    July 15, 2007 at 1:33 am in reply to: The Hypnotist #55431
    KeithXZ
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    Good.  I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

    July 7, 2007 at 9:02 pm in reply to: MUSCLE MACHINE #49784
    KeithXZ
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    The problem with posting stories using blog software is that the paragraphs end up totally out of sequence.

    Initially, the user goes to the bottom, scrolls up to the start of the first post, and reads down.

    Then he scrolls back up, to the start of the second post (so roughly twice as far), and reads down again.

    Then he scrolls back up again, searching for the start of the fourth third post, and reads down again.

    If a story stretches across many posts, or if there are multiple multi-post stories in a blog, it is a nightmare to try and read.  it is zig-zag all over the place.

    Maybe there is another format of blog software somewhere that addresses this problem, but I haven't seen it.

    June 22, 2007 at 6:00 am in reply to: The Muscles of Mercy (NSFW; very gory) #54179
    KeithXZ
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    A really good start Reaper.  I really like the additional detail.

    I'm looking forward to reading more.

    June 18, 2007 at 2:50 am in reply to: Leech (First post, First story, Probably NSFW) #52055
    KeithXZ
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    This is a really good direction to take with the plot.  I think it opens up lots of possibilities and it doesn't hem you in.

    June 17, 2007 at 8:39 pm in reply to: The Prisoners #53722
    KeithXZ
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    Great story Josh.  I look forward to reading more.

    June 17, 2007 at 8:31 pm in reply to: New Here #53496
    KeithXZ
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    I read "A Primitive Hope" last night Mimi, and I think it is wonderful!

    I love the details and emotions, and the way the story slowly builds.

    Welcome to the board.

    – Keith

    June 17, 2007 at 10:56 am in reply to: A Primitive Hope #53852
    KeithXZ
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    This is really superb, Mimi.  I really love the details which bring the story to life, the descriptions, the emotions, the side-plots.

    *** Details make it real ***

    I can't wait to read more!!!

    June 1, 2007 at 4:45 am in reply to: The Claws Of Winter #50942
    KeithXZ
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    An excellent story.

    Could the Chinese characters from be from the way your web browser's character encoding is set? 

    In Firefox and MSIE, the encoding is set under View and then Encoding.  Usually autoselect works well, but perhaps with french accented characters another setting is needed?

    June 1, 2007 at 3:59 am in reply to: Buff/Nerf #52863
    KeithXZ
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    Very good story Lingster!  I look forward to reading more.

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