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  • March 14, 2007 at 9:41 am in reply to: Re: Wonder Woman and Superman #48389
    KeithXZ
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    An excellent start!  I can hardly wait to read more.

    February 27, 2007 at 2:43 am in reply to: Survey Sez… What Should Jimbo Write Next? #8044
    KeithXZ
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    "For Their Own Good" is a great story so far.  I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

    January 1, 2007 at 5:34 am in reply to: Amazon Flu #18925
    KeithXZ
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    The story is going great, I'm looking forward to more episodes.

    I like this sort of slow development. 

    December 27, 2006 at 5:30 am in reply to: Evil Nerds Rule #22659
    KeithXZ
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    Your writing is improving greatly as you go.  This last part was really good Growguy.

    Any chance of a few more chapters?

    December 27, 2006 at 12:03 am in reply to: Midnight Awakening #24645
    KeithXZ
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    Beautiful detailed description Ataru.  With this character you could take your storyline anywhere.

    December 26, 2006 at 9:00 am in reply to: The Blue Necklase #465
    KeithXZ
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    I really appreciate your story so far Ristard.  I hope you manage to add some more to it.

    It looks to me like you could take your plot in any direction, so you've given yourself a lot of flexibility.

    December 26, 2006 at 8:56 am in reply to: The Copper Water Lily #41190
    KeithXZ
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    Admirable work. 

    In the next part, maybe get Amanda out of the house, and introduce more characters … maybe friends of her brother, a neighbourhood bully, the FBI, that would open up the possibilities for you plot, and also give it a broader appeal.

    There is also the option of powers other than physical power.  Intelligence, persuasiveness, seductiveness.

    December 26, 2006 at 8:47 am in reply to: Blessings of the Goddess #35479
    KeithXZ
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    Yes a very clever twist at the end, which must be difficult to achieve, since it is something even many of the really great stories in this genere lack.

    Congratulations.

    December 26, 2006 at 8:41 am in reply to: Code AVATAR – A Plague of Angels #39318
    KeithXZ
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    I agree, awesome writing, it shows a lot of talent.

    I read a post on zzz everything grows that Au Goose is going back and adding to some of his previous stories.  He has already returned to Yinside to make an addition.

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