[kuner]

wouldnt want to get on her bad side  😮

and very nice work on fixing her triceps

[kuner]

Shes like a human chun-li… O.O

😆

[kuner]

tigersan, i hope you like

[kuner]

😮 😮 😮 😮 😮 😮

Damn, she's grown!     Looks awesome, can't wait to see more of her. Poser 6 is doin wonders here

Love the Jessica Biel like face too

And since I know you're an artist, here's some criticism:

-Her triceps (also those of shredia) look too small and a little too ripped. especially on shredia they look like crumpled paper in that one picture. i think they should be rounded out more to better balance the arm.

-her traps are too small compared to the old michelles.  i think this and the huge v shape of her upper torso made up most of her intimdating look. the traps on shredia look great, maybe you can use those. i dont know if its possible to widen the back a bit.

-the legs are smaller than the arms, especially the back of the legs need to grow a bit.

-to counter her stocky look, maybe you can make the legs a little longer, that would increase femininity

-maybe use softer lighting

this is just some ideas that came to my mind though, don't get me wrong, this is the best michelle ever.

and delta9 is where you get your inspiration from…. i should have guessed. good taste!

[kuner]

I agree, there are far too many stories out there with girls doin stuff effortlessly. Jenna already is a behemoth, lets leave it at that. Her strength feats shouldn't exceed a realistic limit for someone her size (which should be quite high anyways)  😆

Just lifting stuff is boring I think it's been done too often. With her, I think character, I think the fact that she is a bit embarassed / unsure of her size opens the window for a lot of passive feats, i.e. destroying something without wanting to just because of her size. Think doorways, chairs, dressing cabins in shops, car interiors, etc.

With a character like jenna, you got loads of possibilities

[kuner]

Thanks for the awesome replies, everyone. 

I'm hard at work on chapter 4 right now.  If all goes well, it should get pretty nuts.  Once part 4 is done, I'll also be finished my innitial story arc.  At this point, if anyone has any ideas as to where they'd like to see the story go, now's the time.  Think of Jenna as your own personal super-built high school fantasy.  What would you love to see her do?

As for having artists do their interpretations of Jenna, I think it's a great idea!  If any of you artsist out there are reading this, by all means take a stab at it.  Perhaps I'll make a thread when chapter 4's done with an official request. 

-Mr.Shhh

Okay, here's some ideas.

Basically from where part 3 leaves off, it can go several directions.

1) Jenna finds prince charming and they have freak sex.  (that'd be too easy)

2)  the girls and ed have plotted a prank on jenna and expose her in some cruel way (like letting her show up at his house all slutty and then embarrassing her, when ed says he'd never be interested in her)…

3)… which could lead to a fit of anger and rampage

4)… or more obsessive training

5)… or meeting the obligatory skinny nerd guy with the muscle fetish and a happy end

6) another possibility is her guy turning out to be a real asshole and using jenna who blinded by love ends up doing things that are wrong and get her in trouble.

A plot twist that gives her a cause for revenge would be cool i guess. she got the musles, lets see her use them.  And yes i agree, no 747 lifting. but she should be able to cause a good deal of damage with that body of hers.

[kuner]

awesome story! the best i've read in a long time! i think the descriptions definitely issue a challenge to our (active) artists here. maybe it's time for an old fashioned wreck style artist collaboration?  just think of it:  fett, dcm, tigersan, coyote, rex etc  picturing jenna in their own style.

[kuner]

Amazing story. Glad to see you're back in action again. 

btw, was there ever a 4th or 5th part to "Battle of the sexes"?

[kuner]

ha, i knew it wouldn't take long to find the author around here  😀

congratulations on your story. it's one of the few out there that actually deserves this title, because it does have a plot and it isn't just some random scenes thrown together.

about the feedback, well ya know how it is around here (and other sites). people tend to lurk, they will read and enjoy, but they won't comment. it is frustrating i imagine.

and i will second jeremy's request for a sequel (or prequel?) 😎

[kuner]

wow, she did indeed. thanks for pointing it out. seems like we oughta keep our eyes open for her

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