[lbujold]

Here's an idea for an alternate history:

Louis Cyr (1863-1912), was and may be the strongest man who ever lived, and his recorded feats made him famous world wide.

  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Louis_Cyr

What is interesting is that his wife was no slouch either in the muscle department and his daughter,  Emiliana, seemed destined to follow in his footsetps and even participated in strength events with him during his tours in Canada and Britain.  Unfortunately, after Louis Cyr's death, she was committed to an asylum under suspicious cicumstances by her husband and died there.

What if history had changed, and allowed Emiliana the chance to popularise female bodybuilding decades before our history?

Could be interesting…

Just an idea.

[lbujold]

Here's an idea for an alternate history:

Louis Cyr (1863-1912), was and may be the strongest man who ever lived, and his recorded feats made him famous world wide.

  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Louis_Cyr

What is interesting is that his wife was no slouch either in the muscle department and his daughter,  Emiliana, seemed destined to follow in his footsetps and even participated in strength events with him during his tours in Canada and Britain.  Unfortunately, after Louis Cyr's death, she was committed to an asylum under suspicious cicumstances by her husband and died there.

What if history had changed, and allowed Emiliana the chance to popularise female bodybuilding decades before our history?

Could be interesting…

Just an idea.

[lbujold]

C'est tout simplement magnifique.  Tes histoires sont parfaitement comme je les aime, avec des femmes qui decouvre la jouissance des muscles et de la force progressivement et sans trop de violence excessive.  Vraimant parfait.  Tous ce que je peux dire d<autre…tu peux continuer avec le meme modele et je n'en serais jamais lasse.

Bravo

[lbujold]

I second the encouragement to continue!  I know it must be hard sometimes to not feel appreciated for your work, I mean I am guilty of being a lurker myself, even though I wish I could write worth a damn… 

Again, this is a great story and I applaude your style of writing and of detail in characterisation.

lbujold

[lbujold]

I add my personal compliment for this excellent story and can't wait for the future development.  Can't wait for the growth to kick into high gear, though it has been very enjoyable to read so far too.

THumbs up.

[lbujold]

My hat is off to you JimmyDimples, you continue to write a great story. Too bad for Monty I guess, but it is probably not over. Mmm, we don’t exactly know where they all end up do we?

Again thank you for your generous contribution to this great forum.

lbujold.

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Hi there Jimmy

Sorry for the lateness, but again great work on this story. It is so interesting in itself that even without the fmg element, I still find it interesting to read on its own. I like the main character because of is wits and is completely fleshed out, which is not seen everywhere in this kind of fiction. Plus the global scope of the story is always great to follow.

Now at the risk of sounding annoying…WHEN can we expect part 6! We are dying here! Looking forward to seeing the next part of the show. Those commercial breaks are a killer 😆

Thumbs up and keep up the good work!

lbujold

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Wow, Marknew…we are not worthy.

An EXCELLENT story, with style and great descriptions. I like that you take your time in making the characters grow and explore the changes, and the variety of ways in which they discover their growing power.

One personal criticism: I would have liked to see in this "day" (or the one before) what was happening with Cindy and Calley. There is little doubt now that she is going to emerge from the basement totally transformed into a massive amazon. It would have been nice to have seen something midway, something involving her friends amazement at discovering the pleasure of pumping iron and seeing their muscles emerge and grow. Heck it would be fun to see Cindy’s mother initial shock to her daughter’s transformation…and maybe have her join them when she realises the reason she had started to notice changes in herself…and realise she likes the idea!

It would be nice to have brief mentions of the main characters parents and relatives also beginning to realise what is happening to them and others.

All the different threads are very well developped. I cannot wait until the next installments arrive. I encourage you to keep up the excellent work and thank you for your numerous contributions to this most excellent board.

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