[Lupus14]

Very nice! 😀

You mean like here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r9CSawPPxRU
;D

[Lupus14]

Nothing you draw can be considered "scrap". Absolutely astonishing! The "big arms" sketch is amazing!  😮  Is it a boy or girl?  ???

[Lupus14]

Is there any chance that you will one day write a story and invent a "nice" character  with the proportions of Mercy? Or are antiheroes your only genre?

I don't know what you or the others think of the idea, but what about a story where "Es" and "Mercy" have to fight it out to the finish?

Although I have my problems with the character of your antiheroes I still love your stories – how you build up the suspense, keep people guessing, letting their own imagination run wild while they wait for the next part.

[Lupus14]

Silently, Megan pads over to Tim.  Steeling herself, she uses her foot-long tongue to lick the pre-cum off the tip of his penis.  She’s never tasted anything quite like it!  Not quite citrus, not quite chocolate.  Maybe rum cake with walnuts?  Whatever, it’s amazing!

Wrapping her tongue around Tim’s member, she slowly begins jerking him off.  Soon Tim grunts a little and quickly Tina wraps her lips on to the head of his penis.  A cupful of semen spurts into her mouth for what seems like a minute; coming too fast for her to swallow it all, some of it drips onto her breasts.  It tastes like heaven and sin!

Megan unwraps her prehensile tongue from her brother’s dick and sits back on her haunches with her eyes closed, waiting for the changes.  She feels a warmth in her stomach that quickly expands to encompass her entire body.  Soon she’s jerking her hand against her sex in rhythm to the waves of warmth, quickly coming to orgasm.

A bit confusing!
I also might add that I find it disturbing – to say the least – how the sister gives her own brother a blow-job.  You could have avoided that somehow, if you wanted her to grow she could have licked it off the breasts of her friends, off the sheets, the wall – whatever….  :-

[Lupus14]

Great story, lovely girl. Also in a way very funny. I try to picture the situation: There is a cute 19 year old that simply picks up a minivan and walks out of a parking garage and walks by the attendant who simply says "You're never going to get that into traffic".    😀 LOL!
Imagine the faces of the pedestrians in Manhattan. Or some guy coming around the corner and seeing a car float above the heads over a crowd of people, finally recognizing that in this crowd is a herculean teenager just taking a simple walk like it were nothing. Awesome!
I can hardly await the next story.

[Lupus14]

Awesome! Love it! The description of her walking down the corridor – *moan*!

[Lupus14]

Fair enough! I put a lot of effort in crafting my language, so your appreciation is very welcome.

Just a quick note to those all those that happen to agree with Lupus (and it may be the large majority of readers) on finding the antihero premise objectionable:

**Spoiler**
Looking at the Mercy character, she is every bit as violent and probably even more ruthless than Esther… which is why, of course, I named her "Mercy." While The Monster as written in the series was sheer overwhelming (and often mindlessly straightforward) dominance, Mercy is a litte more fleshed out. She has more than one side to her. And that, in my opinion, makes her even more disturbing and psychotic. Her vicious sadism has a seed of reason planted in her past, and unlike her exterior, it's not at all pretty.

As I remarked to StMercy2020, the entire Esther series was not so much akin to a movie as episodes of fetish porn. Suspension of disbelief is key to this "genre", and I admit that I've stretched it past the breaking point several times in the heat of the scene.

Your "spoiler" has really ruined it for me. Reading your first part I actually like her. Her shy nature. How she excuses herself and asks if he is o.k, how she is incapable of looking him in they eyes etc. Most of all, I love blue eyed girls. Everything seemed so perfect. And now she is supposed to get an even more rotten and twisted character than "Es". Oh no, not again!
I thought she would be some sort of hypersensitive girl which does bad things because she can't control her strength (“Sometimes I don’t think about my strength when I’m anxious,”). What a gorgeous body (her preternaturally small, impossibly narrow hips,….).
I already started to draw her.  🙁

I have nothing against gore, as long it's against the right people (misfits, criminals, psychopaths, sleazy politicians, assholes…) One can always excuse it with "just punishment". Ah well – I don't want to repeat myself and bore you to death.

PS: I somehow can't imagine this part: "Mercy awkwardly flung out a hand, which he accepted. Too late did he notice the ungodly arm that extended her hand, the bulging, pumped-up forearm that powered her fingers into a vice of unholy strength and his eyes widened as she effortlessly crushed his hand."

How can anyone not notice a person of her proportions (which you describe so vividly and beautiful) standing in the same room? If someone reaches out to give you his/her hand, you would look at the person, no? I tried to imagine some situation in which this could be possible. I can't figure it out. It seems, that she was summoned by the psychiatrist to an appointment. So he must be awaiting her. He must have noticed her at least the moment she entered his office. I'm sorry if I'm being a smart-ass, but I have this logic-tick.

[Lupus14]

*gasp* – Amazing! Beautiful! The second one looks like a cover from an old Conan-Comic!

[Lupus14]

Appreciate the compliment! Y'know, I'm kinda glad you don't LIKE the character. She's a little morally challenged, I think.

He doesn't know she won't kill him… and that's the nature of the fascination. No one would venture that this is a …normal… relationship; in every sense that Es is a twisted narcissistic sadist, he is an equally twisted, spineless, masochist. That's why it "works".

As to the notion every creature has a sense of self-preservation, I humbly disagree: that statement is of only limited truth. Nature is replete with self-destructive sex and violence — look at the mating cycle of the praying mantis, for example. Even in higher-order creatures, say, humanity, there are scores of battered spouses who are still "in love" with their abuser. Sadly, sometimes all the way to their death. Now obviously, this is a work of fantasy, and in no way would this writer ever condone the depravity found here… nor would any reader, I suspect.

I actually considered The Monster's Demise as a worthy end to the series, but testing it proved problematic. Suspension of disbelief, so necessary to the effect of the fantasy, tends to fail when the antihero falls to reality. So as a result, you would never get the drop on Es… and a .44 Magnum would be reduced to a crumpled, mangled scrap with your pulped hand in her grip, while the explosive bullets turn to merely stimulating playthings when fed to the snarling crush of her cunt…

Hmmm.
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I see where you are coming from and what you mean. Now that you mention it, that is another thing that made me so sick – her narcism.
I don't think your comparison with the insect world holds. A praying mantas at least tries to escape (so do the male spiders) and they are fully aware of the danger they are in. They just need to do "it" for the sake of the species. But this guy gets tortured and humiliated and does nothing. The more I think of it – he really deserves to die. I also doubt that some 44 slugs in her head would have no effect. She may have superhuman strength, but unless you have an iron skull, there is no way you will stop a magnum. And if you catch her on surprise – anything is possible. It would be even more satisfying if she were killed by some fat slob still living with his mother. That would be so humiliating for her.

I still like your stories and your style. Especially your descriptions of her body. But it's like in the movies when the end turns out other than you expected and you go home disappointed that the bad guy survived.
I just hope your new character "Mercy" is not going to be another blond version of "Es". I did enjoy the beginning of that story and liked how you made her so shy. Being harmful because you don't know your own strength is something completely different than being a murderous sadist.
And please don't take my "rants" personal. I just find it better to address the subject direct and not pussy-foot around. I like stories that seem somewhat "logic" if they play in the "real world" or are related to historic events (for example).
And thanks for finding the time to answer me.

[Lupus14]

I enjoy your descriptions and writing style but I don't like the character. I can't believe what a cowardly masochist wimp this guy is, allowing this lunatic bitch to torture him like that. He knows that he is dealing with an insane serial killer that has murdered hundreds (?) of people in the most gruesome fashion, and yet he does nothing. A happy End would be in my eyes when she comes out of the shower and looks into the barrel of a 44 Magnum. Before she could say a peep, her head would be perforated with some high-velocity , explosive-tip bullets. Every creature has a sense of self-preservation and will fight for it's own survival. And yet this guy allows this bitch to tear off his limbs. Any normal person (any creature!) would fight for it's survival. What makes him think that she will not kill him one day?

Sorry for my rant. I just don't like her.

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