[Lupus14]

I'm not trying to change his taste. I still enjoy reading his stories and like his style. But we are all entitled to an opinion and to express our own views, no?
Personally I don't find serial killing sadists "sexy". It's easy to just sit and read stuff like this, but try to imagine if you are the guy she is going to dismember. You find a girl like her attractive and sexy, you try to tell her your feelings and she kills you like if you were an insect, ripping your legs, arms and intestines  out – and enjoying it.
Are people "sexy" that enjoy torturing dogs and cats? I'm sorry – I'm unable to follow up on that. It really isn't my beer.

[Lupus14]

Maybe you all missed the smiley in my original post. As to my "clumsy" and "ill-considered" words I might state, that English is not my native language and when reading stories and posts on this forum, I sometimes have to use an online dictionary.
I think I am a well mannered person and I try to avoid conflict. Thats one reason I stay away from political posts and keep my thoughts to myself. It is better to shut up than to get everyone upset about such issues.
But when people claim that I'm "inflammatory" because I voice my true opinion and taste, then with all due respect – such people are hypersensitive – to say the least. All I said was that if she had bigger breasts I would like her even more. That just a plain and simple opinion and I don't see how that is insulting to anyone on this forum.
I take the views and tastes of the other members on this forum as they are, even if I don't share or like them. I'm not insulted or offended by them. I don't want to convert them to my views and I'm not going to get a fit if someone disagrees with me. It simply doesn't bother me.
I also see no need for anyone to apologize for the things they said, because they have a right to their views as much as I have to mine.
Honestly – if any outsider reads this thread, he must think we really have no life than to get upset about such a non-issue.
I hope this is now settled and there is no further need to dwell on the matter. I will try to keep my mouth shut.

[Lupus14]

Wow, I never thought that voicing my own taste and opinion would cause such harsh reactions. Why don't you just delete all my comments in this thread and we can behave as if nothing ever happened — sort of like children.
I don't like when people try to put words and meanings into my mouth, so they have a reason to fall into outrage. I never said she was ugly. On the contrary – "She has a gorgeous, feminine face". So pardon me that I hold on to my view that a woman should not only have an attractive face, but also some curves (example: Joanna Thomas, M. Dettwiller, C. Nelson etc.)

if you want to see someone with the body of a boy look up Renne Tonney or Collete Guimond.  Compared to them Shawna is definitely all woman.

Risking to by lynched I dare to say, that they hardly qualify as woman anymore. Ugly as hell (faces).

You may now proceed with deleting all my comments.

Good day Gents.

[Lupus14]

And that's fine! I'm gratified you've stuck with me this long, Lupus… like I've said, Mercy is certainly quite warped and there's no getting around it, but she has a nose for "evil-doers." Then again, her nose is likely too sensitive, and she takes things very personally.

I've wondered what would happen if Mercy directly told someone that they were sexy to her…

Huh.

(I would still NEVER tell her she's sexy, though.)

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I'm glad you are not taking my critique personally. Mercy makes me wonder if she's not frigid or lesbian. Doesn't she have a desire for love and affection, kisses and cuddling? It really makes me sick to see such a healthy, pretty girl run around with just one thought on her mind – how to kill any male that finds her attractive. What the hell does she do, if a guy gives her a box of chocolates and roses? Tear his head and limbs off?  ::)

Another thing that isn't really up to my personal taste is that description of her sex-organ. I found it gross. Besides, it is repetive – you had that already in the "Es" story. I don't understand why a guy with such great descriptive skills and imagination writes so one-dimensional. You could create so many diverse characters and plots that would expand your style and horizon, that it would be a joy to read.

On another note: I'm sad to hear that you are quitting. I will miss your stories – even though I had my troubles with them. I pray that you will give it a second thought and stay with your fans and… critiques. 🙂

[Lupus14]

I agree….

She does not need implants, she is great already.

Please tell me where her breast are? I can't find any. She has a gorgeous, feminine face and the body of a boy. But I guess it is useless to argue – everyone has a different taste in women.

[Lupus14]

Now I'm really at the edge of my seat and curious.
I can't recall her having left anyone alive, except maybe the witness'.
The story turned for me sour, when you revealed her true character – that she likes to tease and get men aroused and then if they show any interest in her – kill them. Just like a scorpion or a spider. Turns out she wasn't the abused innocent little girl that was molested and raped, but deliberately provoked the situation to get her victims.  I guess the only ones that are able to survive in her presence are fags, impotent old men and the blind. And the nasty thing about it is, she enjoys it.
Maybe I'm an "old fashioned" fool, but a person that can't show any feelings of compassion, love and sensitivity isn't really human. No matter what an asshole this shrink turns out to be, it won't make it any better what she does to him.
That aside, I still enjoy reading your style and descriptions. I'm just having my troubles with the plot and the character of the characters.

cheers

[Lupus14]

Now if she just would get some triple F implants, everything would be perfect.  ;D

[Lupus14]

O.k, let me guess – she is going to kill him…. and get away with it.

[Lupus14]

12 minute clip of Marja working out.
http://www.veoh.com/videos/v981380SMeSHCQa

Those quads and calves. that lovely rear in those tight shorts – it's  Christmas and birthday all at once! Watch her massage her legs and biceps – breathtaking! And that cute smile at the end of the cliü. *sigh*

[Lupus14]

How come you can't post in the original thread anymore? It isn't locked, is it?
I hope you are just talking about the end of this "chapter" and not of the entire story (plot). These two characters have so much to offer, it would be a pity to just bury them.
Until now, it always had a "happy end" for the one side. I don't want the heroes to die, but it could make it more interesting if you let the bad guys win a battle – at least against some of the second line characters. (For example if they destroy the lab, kill the doc or that other hot vampire that has an eye on the guy.)
If you give this story a final ending, then it would be hard to revive it again, in case you get some new ideas or inspirations.

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