[Lupus14]

I just hope this has a happy end and that Vanessa drains the collarwearers of their strength!

[Lupus14]

That was such a lovely story! I really enjoyed it. Like an old saga, a tale of "once upon a time". "Very well done!".

[Lupus14]

This is an online game? How does it work? I don't get it – do you just create a character and then  go lift weights?  ???

[Lupus14]

I liked the beginning of these stories, but the last two I found a bit unreal. Yeah, I know – the entire thing is unreal, but it still played in a normal, every day environment.
Specially the story with the arm-wrestling was unreal. Although she is able to lift 5 Tons with one arm, carry minivans through the streets…. this guy gives her a hard time arm-wrestling? Then he must also be close to superhuman strength. Then the part with jumping on the roof of a 4 story building with a truck – yeah – nice tale for describing her immense strength, but it is now going into the spheres of superman and incredible hulk.
I'm sorry if this comes across as bickering, but I had to get it off my chest. I still love the character and the story but some things are a bit "far out" in the sense of human behavior and logic.

[Lupus14]

Great how you described her body. The story about the boy in the gym (heart torn out ect.) I found disturbing and even more how the mere thought of it made her smile. How sadistic.
I'm glad you made those guys in the van to some no good gang members with criminal background. What they will receive, they probably deserve. It will be mere justice, since they were always able to evade the law so far. This time they picked the wrong victim. Ha!
I wondering if she may be lesbian or simply a case of frigidity (ISD – Inhibited sexual desire). What if there is a boy/guy who sincerely falls in love with her, who wants to share his life with her? Kind of makes me feel sorry for her that she will never know what love is, never feel the warmth of a passionate kiss, romantic nights ect.

I know I'm a pest with my questions, but I'd like to know why she even bothers to see a shrink and talk about it since she is so convinced of herself?

I also would like to subscribe to airnels view about a story of a repenting girl.

[Lupus14]

Hate to be so rude and direct, but it looks more like the deformed daughter of the hunchback of Notre dam, than the cute girl stmercy describes in his stories.  :-
Just my (worthless)two cent opinion. No hard feelings.

[Lupus14]

'Fraid you won't have to wait for long… and just to aggravate Lupus, I'm totally not going to explain it. At all.

I will continue to enjoy your stories and have learned for myself that it is better to shut up and not ask any more questions or make comments.

[Lupus14]

I will give Sylph a try. I suck at coloring and photoshop, so it will either be in pencil or ink.

[Lupus14]

For me one of the most beautiful FBB. Cute smile, lovely eyes and blond hair and a breathtaking body!
Here some nice clips on Youtube. Download!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aH5UFsiRJM Marja massaging her biceps
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_qfRDHLnXsg&mode=related&search=

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWm2bk1BFNU&mode=related&search= Marja stretching

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aH5UFsiRJM  Marja armwrestling and posing

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qogv9xgKxOQ  Marja posing in blue

[Lupus14]

I can't find No. 5. Last episode was No. 4 ?????

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