[Mark Newman]

I'm enjoying it too, so I hope you'll keep going.

If you want to change an earlier entry, you can always edit your own post!  I know that expanding the scope of the story can make it much more complicated and you could then stick to your main characters for now.

If you do edit it, you might consider making the period in the second time jump a few years later, so that the "edited scenes" could be reinserted. 

[Mark Newman]

Don't worry.  I haven't forgotten Pendant Changes.  It will be finished in 2008.

There are a couple of other stories I'm working on now, including a nearly completed rewrite of The Super One.  Once they're done, back to PC.

[Mark Newman]

I like this sequel.  I like nearly everything The Power Company does.

I would have made Marcie just as bad as her mother and sister.  Worse actually, and a lot smarter. I kept hoping she was only pretending to be good, that she had intuited that there was something extra that a disappointed and defeated Superman could still give her, if he thought she was his only and his last friend.  I was thinking that that just as Superman gave her his powers, she would reveal her true, evil self, but it would be too late.

So that would be my variation on Ric's story.

But I did enjoy his version and I'm very glad he wrote it.

Mark

[Mark Newman]

Part 4, the conclusion of ABX, is now posted on Brawna.org.

[Mark Newman]

Who the hell are you?

I dunno.  I used to be a star.

[Mark Newman]

Part 3 is now up on Brawna.org. 

[Mark Newman]

Part 2 is up now.  A few new characters.  A few consequences.  And more is left to happen later.

[Mark Newman]

Any chance of a finish to Pendant Changes?

It's on the project board, but not next in line.  One other story is speaking to me more urgently.

[Mark Newman]

Thanks.  I've never stopped writing, as you will see.  But I've had to cut out a lot of the other communications.  Thus my relative quiet here.  And you'll be glad to see it's not a short story. 

[Mark Newman]

Thanks.  I've discovered a few more pages searching for Girl Beats Boy and using the Google translation service.  Highly recommended. 

Now, if someone were able to purchase the graphics books themselves and scan them ….

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