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    Max
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    Finally some mysterious are finally revealed and explained. Hope you enjoy this chapter.

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    Invasion
    Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
    Written by Max

    Part 6

    “What it is Brian?” asked Amanda intrigued.

    “The computer is detecting a transmission from the outer space. I’m trying to capture the signal and hear what it’s about” said Brian.

    Then, a female voiced was heard through the speakers. “Surrender now Keispa. I have come with a fleet twice bigger than yours. If you and your renegade followers surrendered at once, I will have mercy of you” said a female voice.

    “Talk to me properly Niftiow. I'm now the undisputable Empress of the Earth. This world is very different from the ones we have conquered in the past. Here, the body fusion has showed impressive changes. You won't believe how astonished I was when I possessed the body of an abducted young female. I found myself virtually invincible and with enough strength to crush at your entire personal guard without problem. Not to mention that I’m five times taller than any of them” laughed a voice that Brian easily recognized as the alien ambassador.

    “In other worlds, the female hosts were almost as equal as the males after the fusion. That was why you could arrest at my forces. Now, the males here are completely under our control. They can't help you, only to us since they are the greatest protection against your assault. Besides, if you are thinking in attacking me, I will suggest you to scan this planet. The stupid earthlings helped at my forces to construct weapons able to destroy your ships even if they are in the space. I give you two hours to abandon the orbit of this planet or I will be forced to destroy your ship, my queen” said Keispa with sarcasm in her voice. After that, the transmission ended.

    “The computer locked the signal of the other female alien. Maybe she can help us” said Brian sending a secure message to Niftiow’s ship indicating where he could be found. Moments later, a message came in. “These are great news Amanda, the alien woman Niftiow is coming here to have a private meeting” he said excited.

    “It will be better that you expect at our visitor Brian. I will try to see if I can prepare something to drink in the room that looks like a kitchen” said Amanda.

    Brian nodded and went to the entrance of the lab. He didn’t wait too long before he felt a strong wind. In front of his eyes, a small ship appeared from nowhere. “It must have a cloaking device” he thought.

    After the ship landed, from it emerged a small green woman with similar features like the one that came out from his mother. The difference was that this woman was wearing some kind of suit to protect her body.

    Once the woman left her ship, it turned invisible again. “Greetings young earthling Brian. I’m the queen Niftiow” she said.

    “Follow me this way your highness” said Brian guiding her inside the lab.

    Once inside, Brian helped at Niftiow to stand on a table as he sat on a chair. He was impressed by the tiny size of her but he didn't let her know her that.

    “Thanks for your kindness receiving me after what my people have done in your world” apologized Niftiow. “I bet that you have many questions, so I will tell you the history of my homeworld. I am the queen of a world populated only by females. The only way to prolong our specie is by fusing our bodies with the bodies of other females from different worlds”.

    “This process involves asking permission at the host for the fusion. Then, once my one of my people is inside of the host, a male from that planet will fertilize at the female. The mission of my specie is to alter the genetic code of the new baby to adapt it to our own. So after the gestation time, the new life born is female of my kind” explained the queen.

    “My specie is dispersed across the universe. We have ships traveling to distant worlds to ask their help in order to continue existing. In exchange, we give them technology or whatever they ask as a fair treat”.

    “The one that has taken over your world is Keispa. She was one of the most important fleet commanders of my world, since the new lives she brought back from her travels could easily match at all the lives the rest of the fleet brought together”.

    “One day, I felt curiosity to know how Keispa was doing such impressive work. That was how I discovered that she was using a virus to weak at the females her forces were about to possess” sadly said Niftiow.

    “Why they used a virus?” asked intrigued Brian.

    “The fusion of bodies let at the host in complete control of the fuse body. That is to assure at other females to trust in us. With the virus, the will of host is too weak to overcome at the incoming presence and becomes a vessel at the will of the invader” said Niftiow.

    “Horrified for such cruely, I ordered to arrest at Keispa and her forces. Keispa and her followers not only managed to escape from prison, but also hijacked 5 of my ships to conquer new worlds. I mobilized at half of the fleet in pursue of the traitor”.

    “From that day, almost 10 human years has passed. My fleet had found all the conquered worlds of Keispa and freed them successfully. But during their conquests, Keispa has increased dramatically the number of soldiers she had under her command”.

    “Finally, a couple of human months ago, Keispa fleet were intercepted by my fleet. We held a space battle in which thousands of my people die. The remaining of Keispa fleet using a technology she acquired from her last conquered world opened a worm hole and escape to the Earth. Without that technology, we didn’t have other choice that traveling at our maximum speed hoping to catch her in here and put an end to this conflict. Unfortunately, the defense system Keispa had built won’t allow at my fleet to descent. And even if we can, Keispa and her forces had turn so powerful, that it will be impossible to defeat her” said the queen lowering her head.

    “Sorry for taking so long. I couldn’t find the cups” said Amanda carrying 3 cups of tea.

    “Oh, queen Niftiow, I present you at my girlfriend Amanda. Amanda, the queen Niftiow” said Brian doing the introductions.

    Amanda smiled at the tiny queen. “I didn’t know that there was a non-possessed girl with you Brian” said Niftiow with joy in her voice. “I thought that a fight against Keispa’s forces will be a suicide, but with Amanda at your side there is a small hope”.

    Brian and Amanda looked at each other confused.

    “Let me explain what I mean” said Niftiow. “The virus was designed to make female vulnerable for possession, but since Amanda is immune, that means that her will is stronger that the average woman and that is the key to overcome this invasion. Please Amanda, can you give me a clean cup?” asked the tiny queen

    Amanda went to the kitchen and brought another cup. She placed it next to the queen. “Thank you Amanda” said Niftiow as she began to open the front part of her suit. Brian and Amanda were speechless as the queen exposed her large breasts and began to milk them over the cup.

    The couple was amazed as the tiny woman filled with white jets of milk a quarter of the cup. “That should be enough to do it” said Niftiow closing her suit. “Now Brian, if you drink my milk you will acquire the ability to fuse your body with Amanda”.

    “What??!! Why??!!” said the two lovers at unison.

    “My best scientists had found the cure for the virus and as we speak, my fleet is already eliminating the virus from the atmosphere. That will only assure that any young female that reach the fertility age won’t be able to be possessed, but it won’t help to free at the already possessed women” said Niftiow.

    “When the two of you merge together, the combine being will be inconceivable strong, making possible to over power at any possessed female in this world. That is because the psychology of the female human was very special. Once a female body has another body inside her, her body increased its potential according to the mass inserted” explained Niftiow.

    Looking at Amanda to the eyes, Niftiow continued. “Once the two of you are one, you will be in control of the fused body, but Brian will experience everything that you will do. He will see through your eyes, hear by your ears, smell by your nose, taste by your tongue and feel by your hands, but he won't we able to speak or act as independent being. He will be able to talk to you mentally and both will know all about each other instantly. There will be no secrets between you and him once the fusion is completed”.

    “Once Amanda is amplified, she will gain the ability to produced milk with the same compounds that will let at other males to fuse their bodies with the females and since Amanda is immune to the virus, her milk will let at the man cure at his host and the female will regain the control over her body” explained Niftiow. “Once a male enters into a possessed body, his incoming mass will expel at the other present inside. That means that the invader inside the woman will be removed. My specie can't tolerate this atmosphere, so if any of my kind is expelled from her host, she will die a few minutes later”.

    “So the plan is simple, I will have to find a man and them let him drink from my milk. After that, I will use my strength to hold a possessed woman until the male enters into the body. Once the male is inside, the female alien will be thrown out to die” said Amanda truly excited.

    “Well, I don’t like that idea that you will have to breastfeed at all the males in the world. Especially if I will be inside you all the time” said shriving at the thought.

    “That won’t be necessary. After a human male that had drunk the milk is inside of a human female, that female will be able produce the same milk. That will allow at the females to split up and began to re-conquer their world” said Niftiow.

    “As you will share your knowledge, Keispa forces had already shared their knowledge to their hosts. That will be very important to start the liberation of your world” said the queen. “But you must be really carefully at how you proceed. If Keispa realizes your plan, she will order the annihilation of all the males in the world to protect herself. Using the knowledge of the invaders, the freed females can pretend to still be possessed and trick Keispa long enough until you can exterminate her forces” said Niftiow.

    Brian, holding the cup of milk, looked at Amanda into her eyes. An unspoken agreement was set between them as she gently nodded her head. Brian closed his eyes and swallowed the milk

    To be continued…

    in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17934
    Max
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    Interesting part. I like the way you picture the naive nature of the amazons. I guess they will like to have a man for themselves. Even if he is smaller than them.  😀

    Btw, I wonder what kind of army is outside. According to your description I guess that it's not an ordinary army. Also, how they knew about the amazons? I don't think Mason had something to do with it.

    Excellent part Fonk. I wish you keep up the great work you are doing so far. This story is truly inventive, fresh and enjoyable.

    Max

    in reply to: Evil Nerds Rule #22639
    Max
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    Great new story. It will be nice to see the faces of the teachers and students as Cindy presents to her test.

    Good job.

    Max

    in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17929
    Max
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    Great new chapter Fonk. Very good thinking Florida had in this fight. I only hope her phase two works as good as the first one.

    I wonder is the goddess of the amanzons is looking at the fight while she eats popcorn. It's a great show  😉

    Max

    in reply to: Invasion (Completed) #20224
    Max
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    Thank you for all the nice comments, I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. Sorry for taking so long to post this piece and I hope it was worthy the wait.

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    Invasion
    Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
    Written by Max

    Part 5

    Once they finally were in the lab, Amanda gasped at the side of it. There were several computers and devices that she only had seen in sci-fi series. In fact, the whole lab looked like it had been taken from a space station.

    “Remembering the entering code was easy, but I think I forgot the main code to turn this on” said Brian frustrated as his mind was in blank in front of the keyboard panel.

    “Try the date of your parent’s anniversary” suggested Amanda.

    “Don’t you think that it will be too obvious” sighed Brian as he punched the date. Suddenly all the devices were activated.

    “Told you” said Amanda sticking out her tongue. Brian only lowered his head in defeat.

    Suddenly, the computers showed the leads TV stations in the world on their screens. “Oh no. It’s too late!!” gasped Brian as all the stations broadcasted the image of alien ambassador.

    “Men and immune women of the world, I’m glad to announce that now the 100% of the female infected have received the cure” she said with a smile in her face.

    Then, her smile turned into a sinister grin as she said “Unfortunately for you, that means that now every cured woman in the world has at one of my loyal sisters inside. Yes, as you have heard me. The famous cure was no other than a way to let at my sisters fuse with your women. You were so worried of your fragile females that practically surrender your world to us”.

    The screens showed different images of the captive male population and the small number of women not infected that were prisoners in the suppose shelters. “You were so naïve that you even put yourselves under our on care” laughed the ambassador.

    “Ah! In case you are having hopes in the army of your countries, just let me show what my sisters can do thanks to the physical strength they acquired by fusing their bodies with the native females of this planet” said the ambassador as videos about physical strength tests were broadcasted to assure the obedience of the viewers.

    Amanda and Brian watched astonished as young girls grabbed the guns of the soldiers. “Let me take that useless gun from you. You won’t need it anymore” said one of the girls as she snatched the weapon of the soldier’s hands. Grinning, the girl broke in two the gun without any sign of effort. “Oops! Your gun is too weak against my girly muscles” giggled the girl.

    Then, the unarmed soldiers witnessed the strength of the teenage girls. “I don’t know why you try to protect from us in these weak cans” said a teenage girl as she was capable to break through the thick metal of a tank with one punch. “It will be better for you to stay out were we can see you” said the girl as she tore apart the upper level of the tank exposing at its occupants which flew for their lives.

    If there were still soldiers that have will to fight after the previous feast of strength of the young women, what happened next truly erased that feeling.

    With a big grin on her face, a mature woman approached to were the rest of the tank were. “Girls, girls” she scolded at the younger women. “If you want that a man respects you, you must show him who is the boss” said the woman as she grabbed the upper piece of the tank and put it back in place.

    Then, she applied more strength and began to deform the tank structure, turning it plainer and plainer. When the tank looked like an iron plate, the woman lifted it from the ground and started to compress the plate into a ball using only her bare hands. The creepy sound of the metal being squeezed scared at the soldiers to death.

    Finally the woman dropped a metal trash ball, no bigger than a soccer ball, into the ground forcing it to rumble at the great weight it received. “If I were able to do that to one of your reinforced tanks, just imagine what I can do with your puny bodies” grinned mischievously the woman. The soldiers got on their knees and pledge for their lives.

    The destruction of these cured women was not only linked to the army in the ground. The computer screens showed how women were having fun in an air force base. “Look how good they fly” laughed a teenage girl as she threw an empty combat plane into the air. “That is nothing. Look how fast my can go” laughed another girl throwing another plane into the air.

    The pilots only watched scared as their planes were flying in the air to later crash into the ground several miles away. “This is so funny. Let’s do this again, but try not to throw the plane so hard” said the second teenage girl.

    “Roger” smiled the first girl as she lifted another plane over her shoulder. Then, she ran a couple of feet and launched the plane as if it was a javelin.

    “Good throw. Now it’s my turn” said the second girl as she took impulse and launched the plane. She applied so much strength, that the plane broke the sound’s barrier just seconds it left her hands. In a blink of an eye, the second plane reached at the first one colliding and exploding in the air.

    “That was awesome. Let’s do it again!!” said the girls at unison at the shocked eyes of the pilots.

    The navy wasn’t an exception of the women devastation. The marines were forced to evacuate the ships in lifeboats. Floating in the open see, they were also observers of the unbelievable strength of the women.

    “Let’s see who is more resistance, a destroyer or me?” said a woman as she dig her fingers into the ship metal and descended into the water pulling the whole ship with her under it.

    “Hey girls. Look what I found” said another women who was emerging from the deeps of the ocean carrying a nuclear submarine over her shoulder. “What do you think I should do with this?” she asked at her sisters.

    “Well, if one of the submarine’s torpedoes is able to sink a ship, I guess that you can sink that aircraft carrier by using the whole submarine” grinned other girl.

    “That is a terrific idea” smiled the woman as she launched the submarine into the air and then she propelled herself after it. Once she reached it, she slapped it as it was a volley ball and sent it toward the aircraft. The impact of both vehicles produced a huge explosion.

    Later, the first woman emerged from the ocean carrying a compression version of the destroyer. At least it was half its original size. “It seems that we are even denser that this piece of metal” laughed the woman. “I was happily descending, when I turned my head and noticed how deformed the ship was. I couldn’t avoid smiling as the ship had suffered the pressure of the ocean while I didn’t even felt any tickle”.

    “Sir, what those women have done goes against the law of psychic” said a Commander to an Admiral in one of the lifeboats. “Not only these women lack the physical mass to pull down a ship, even though they may have the strength to pull them, but what about the super tremendous heat that would be a by product of such superhuman exertion?”

    “It’s true that force exerted creates heat as a by product. Force at that level would incinerate the human form in an instant. But you must remember that those women are no longer human. Since the human and alien bodies are fused, maybe the human body acquired some special characteristics from the alien body, besides the green color, and they are now able to exert that kind of feasts without the limitations the human body has as flexation and mobility, which turns them into terrible enemies” replied Admiral Garrett astonished by how powerful this new beings were.

    The magnitude of the damage these aliens were able to do wasn’t what scared at Brian and Amanda the most. It was the fact of how easily they did it. It was like they were playing. The couple trembled in fear of what will be of the world from now on.

    The computer screens showed again the face of the alien ambassador “The soldiers that moments ago were confident in the victory become themselves the first victims of the true invasion. They were outnumbered by my sisters who were several times stronger than them. As you can see, in just a couple of minutes, every army of the world had been totally neutralized” laughed the ambassador.

    “For the ones that want to know how we possessed at your women, here are some video clips” smiled sinisterly the ambassador.

    Brian watched the monitor that broadcasted the local channel. He gasped as his the video displayed a group of about 100 women in a large room. Her mother and sister were between them.

    “Are you sure you want to see that?” asked Amanda with concerned in her voice.

    Brian didn't reply as he was watching how the green amazons ordered at the women to take out all her clothes saying that they will be grow taller and they could hurt themselves. The women complied and they stood naked in the room. Brian avoid to see at his mother and sister naked.

    After the amazons closed the door from where they entered, a door at the other side of the room was opened and 100 small female aliens run inside. Scared, some women tried to escape while others tried to defense themselves. The second group was the first to fall.

    The aliens jumped against the bodies of those women and began to get inside their bodies. The women cried in despair as the aliens were melting in them. Once the aliens were inside, the women grew in side and muscles.

    Amanda turned off the monitor as the image focused at Darlene and Melanie pleading for their lives as the aliens were coming toward them.

    “This can end like this, we must do something” said Brian angrily as he tried to contact at the intelligence agencies that her father had on the memories banks of his computer.

    “It won’t work” said sadly Amanda stopping him. “The aliens certainly must be in control of those agencies or they will never risk taking over the world. For sure some of the personal in those stations were women, and if they got an alien inside, the aliens will know where to strike”.

    Defeated and with no hopes, Brian and Amanda hold each other. At least, they were together. In that moment an incoming signal appeared in the computer screen. “This is…” gasped Brian as he activated the speakers.

    To be continued…

    in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17924
    Max
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    Excellent paths for this terrific story. I'm very curious about what will happen in path A, but I can't avoid wonder how much we can see of path B

    Great story Fonk. Good luck with the following parts.

    Max

    in reply to: The True Nature of Power (Chapters 1-5 posted) #18936
    Max
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    Very good story so far. It's nice to see that Mayim found a way to bend the rules over her powers in order to get benefits from them. Also, it's great that Jinn likes her with all that muscle. I hope Chaud learns to see the new beauty that Mayim has  😀

    Max

    in reply to: Invasion (Completed) #20221
    Max
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    Thanks everybody for their support and feedback. It's very appreciated. Here is the next part of this story. Enjoy it.

    Invasion
    Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
    Written by Max

    Part 4

    “We don’t have enough time Amanda. I think it will be nice if you record a message for your father. That way, you could be with him when the dark hour arrives” said Brian setting the video camera near the TV and turned it on.

    Just when Amanda was ready to talk, Melanie entered into the house. “What aren’t you preparing your supplies for the shelter?” she said angrily to him. “Mom and I can’t watch you all the time Brian. Now, be a good brother and get ready. Mom will get soon to take you to the shelter” Melanie said.

    “Don’t treat him like that YOUNG lady. Maybe Brian isn’t as strong as you, but he is perfect capable of do things by his own” said Amanda standing for her boyfriend.

    “You are nobody to talk to me like that WEAK lady” said Melanie walking menacing toward Amanda. “You can’t even help us. You know that in this moment we need at all women ready but since you were immune to the virus you won’t do any good” she said.

    Quickly Brian stood in middle of her sister and girlfriend. “Hold your horses Melanie. You can’t talk to her like that. After all, Amanda took care of you when you were sick and …” was saying Brian when by surprise his mother entered into the room.

    “You don’t need to say more Brian. You and Amanda had being of great help when WE were sick” said Darlene looking at her daughter. “Please, go to your room and get ready your clothes while I have a small chat with your sister” said Darlene imposing her seven inches of height advance over Melanie.

    Brian and Amanda did what the mother said, but they weren’t too long in Brian’s bedroom when they hear a Darlene screaming “Nooo!!!”

    Both ran down the stairs and watched at Melanie leaving the house. When they entered into the living room, they found that Darlene's shirt was tore off in front, including her bra. Brian’s mother tried her best to cover her nudity.

    “Sorry if I scared you. I was arguing with Melanie and we get a bit physical. Don’t worry that she will be grounded for a whole month once we have taken care of the invasion thing” said Darlene.

    Brian and Amanda were too shocked to say something, specially Brian since he couldn’t imagine at his sister having an arguing with his mother in that way.

    After Darlene changed her clothes, she and Melanie went out to the mall to buy some groceries for Brian. “I still don’t get it, why you left that you mother or sister buy your stuff? You only give them reasons to treat you like a baby” said Amanda to Brian.

    “I don't do that any more since I’m embarrassed every time I go, I barely can handle the heavy bags. I’m sick that young girls like Melanie are willing to help me with them” said Brian picking up his video camera. “Oh great!! I forgot to turn it off” he sighed.

    “You mean that the camera taped the fight between your mother and sister?” asked Amanda interested. “Let’s see how much psychical they got?” she said with sparks in her eyes.

    Brian doubt for a moment if they should see such a moment, but his curiosity won. He rewind the tape and then forward it until the point where his mother and sister were alone in the room.

    “You have to watch out your manners. We don't want that nobody suspect anything” said Darlene.

    “But I can't hold myself. My host body really wants to tease him. So I'm acting as I should be” protested Melanie.

    “Host body?” said Brian and Amanda looking at each other with confusion.

    “You know that we are too close to finally get control over all the female population in the world. Once we got it, you can do with him what you please” laughed Darlene and Melanie joined her.

    Then, Darlene bent forward feeling a terrible pain in her stomach. “The mother’s love is too strong in my host. I'm losing control” she said ripping off her shirt and bra.

    Brian with Amanda looked amazed at the TV screen as something was coming out from Darlene's chest. It was something green and small that looked like a human body but about 10 inches tall.

    The shape finally emerged and it was a female girl with green skin. When she went out, Darlene shrunk in size and her skin returned to her normal pink color. Melanie scared, rapidly held Darlene's body. “Quickly, possess her again or you will die” she yelled to the tiny green woman.

    The tiny woman jumped over the mother and wrapped her legs around Darlene’s waist as her hands stimulated Darlene’s nipples. Once they got hard, the alien began to melt in Darlene’s skin. The mother zapped out of her dizzy state and when she realized what was happening to her, she screamed in horror.

    The green woman disappeared inside Darlene and she grew back to 7' feet tall with big muscles. “I love to stimulate them when I possessed a body. It feels wonderful” moaned Darlene touching her nipples. “Now, go to the car and wait for me there. I will deal with the lovers” she said,

    Then, the video showed at Melanie leaving the room and then at Brian and Amanda entering into it.

    For a moment, Brian and Amanda just stood there speechless as their minds tried to digest the information her eyes and ears had just registered.

    “There isn’t a cure. The supposed saviors are the real invaders. We need to send this video to the intelligence agencies around the world” said Brian as she took Amanda’s hand. With her, he took the spare car and drove to the mountains.

    “The virus was the way to impulse a passive way to possess at the women in the world. Men were so devastated by the sickness of the women that we never stop to think what was really the cure. In fact, nobody has seem the famous serum” said Brian angrily.

    “We are so idiots!! Certainly the aliens need to possess at the women in order to survive in this atmosphere and we simply gave them the vessels. Now, my mother and sister are under the will of some tiny aliens” said Brian.

    “Remember that we have always seen at the aliens as tall green women before. I bet they abducted other women to possess their bodies” said Amanda. “And with the possession, the aliens must have access to their host's memories learning everything they need about our culture”

    “Or in order to act like them” sighed Brian. “I can’t believe that I haven’t realized that my mother and sister weren’t truly them” said Brian at the verge of tears.

    “Don’t be so hard on yourself. Every man in this planet had being cheated like that. After all, the aliens knew everything your mother and sister did. There was no way you could have noticed a thing” said Amanda.

    “I know, but that doesn’t make me feel better” said Brian.

    After driving for more than an hour, Brian said “Now all has sense. What I experienced in the grocery store, in the streets and the tease of my sister were part of a plan to break down the morality of men. To make them realized the weak they were”.

    “You are right. That should be the reason we always saw those displays of strength from their part. They looked so innocently doing it that we didn’t suppose they were doing it on purpose” gasped Amanda.

    “Oh no!” gasped Brian.

    “What is it?” asked Amanda afraid.

    “I bet that the shelters are prisons to keep at the men under control. I bet that there is no invasion fleet. That was other part of their plan. Motivated by the fear of an unknown enemy, we practically gave at the aliens access to all our defense systems” gasped Brian. “I chill at the idea that by now, most of the male population is inside the shelters. They are taking over the world and we even have try to defense ourselves”

    “Not only that. Now for every male soldier there are 10 or 20 cured women. These women are standing at the side of the soldiers. If they decided to strike first, our soldiers will be taken by surprise and you know they won’t stand a chance. We need to warn them Brian. We need to find a way to fight at those double-face aliens” said Amanda.

    “That is why were are coming here. Maybe the secret lab of my father can have an answer” said Brian.

    “Your father’s lab?” asked Amanda.

    “What I’m about to reveal to you Amanda is something my father trust me long time ago. You know that my father is in a hospital in coma, but what you don’t know is that he was a top-secret agent that got injured in one of his dangerous missions” said Brian.

    “When I was younger, my father showed me the lab but made him promise to never tell anything about it to my sister and mother. Everything about the other life of my father was something I only knew about” he said.

    “The day my father fell in come, his friends protected his secret identity by simulating an accident in the mine. People thought that my father’s condition was due that accident. Since I knew the true, I closed the lab until his recovery. That was a year ago” said Brian sadly. “Since my mother and sister don't know about the lab, we should be safe there” said Brian driving more in deep of the mountains.

    To be continued…

    in reply to: my first story #17053
    Max
    Participant

    I wish you the best luck Frank. You can try to get the first pieces of your story from this board and them move forward with the story. I bet that many people is waiting eager to see the next part of your serie. That includes me of course  😉 

    Good luck with your writting.

    Max

    in reply to: Invasion (Completed) #20215
    Max
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    Thanks a lot for all the good comments. Sorry that it took me so long to write the next part. Enjoy it.

    Invasion
    Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
    Written by Max

    Part 3

    Almost two weeks had passed since the supermarket incident. The menace of the invasion was imminent and Brian with Amanda were in his house trying to collect as many food as possible. “How long do you think we will have to hide?” asked Amanda.

    “I don’t know. If everything goes as planned, the defensive weapons of the planet should be powerful enough to repel at the invasion fleet. Even the ambassador’s ships will go to the space to fight them if is needed” said Brian.

    “I’m scared Brian. I don’t want to go to the mines. I should stay with my father, but he told me that he will be fine and that you need me since you will be alone there” she said.

    “I will definitely like to be with you there Amanda. The shelters built inside mines for protection were designed to protect at the male population of the town. We don’t have the resources or the equipment to fight if an invasion party landed here. The cured women of the town, including my mother and Melanie, offered themselves to prepare the defense against the invasion in coordination to the national army. According to the alien ambassador, the invasion fleet should be arriving tomorrow” he said.

    As Brian was packing cans and water bottles, Amanda stood there for a minute and said. “Have you thought about what will be of us once the aliens leave the planet?” said Amanda.

    “What do you mean?” Brian said.

    “Before the invasion, I was one of the popular girls in the school and had many good friends, the kind that will help you no matter what if you are in troubles. Now, the girls barely pay attention to me, and my supposed friends are always joking about me. They always are laughing of me and feeling sorry that I missed her great change to be like them. When they said that, they tensed their muscles making me burned in anger”.

    “You are not the only one Amanda passing for a tough phase” said Brian hugging at his girlfriend. “I begin to see at the world with new eyes. No matter what, I always face situations dealing with woman showing their great muscles and strength most of the days. What really bothers him was that they seemed to not do it on purpose”.

    “I know what you mean. The other day I was in the bus stop when a cured teenage girl stopped in a newsstand nearby. When she received her change for the magazine she bought, a coin slipped from her hand and ended getting under the newsstand. Then, as it was the more natural thing of the world, she smiled and lifted the newsstand from its base, with the newsstand man inside, to recover her coin. Once she had it, she put back the newsstand in place leaving at the man truly shocked” she said.

    “Yes, things like that are happing to often. The other day, I was returning at home when a neighbor, a woman in her thirties, was moving a big sculpture in her front yard. It didn’t see to be a big thing if it wasn’t for the fact that once she settled it down, the ground was shaken violently. I was startled at how much that sculpture should have weight and in any time the woman’s muscles were tensed” he said remembering the incident with Jenny.

    In that time, he saw that Jenny’s muscles bulged for the effort, but in case of the neighbor, he didn’t notice her straining or something like that. That only reminded him that when a women is older, her strength is greater.

    Unknown for Amanda, Brian had being suffering to get adapted at the new world. As more and more women were getting cured, Brian found out that her mother and sister began to act weird, specially his sister. She liked to tease him showing him how much she overpowered him in strength. She continually remarked him that with time her muscles will continue growing and her strength will increase dramatically.

    “What are you thinking about?” asked Amanda breaking Brian’s concentration.

    “Oh nothing. I was just recalling how my mother felt embarrassed when she smashed the dinner table by just dusting it. It was a funny accident” said Brian faking a laugh. After all, he didn’t want to let Amanda know about his problems.

    “I bet that it should have being very embarrassing” giggled Amanda and the two lover laughed for a while.

    “You are right about one thing Amanda. I don’t know what will be the destiny of the human race if the aliens left things as the way they are. I mean. The breach between men and cured women is huge. Men can’t have fun with women anymore. Just take sports for example. Women serve too fast, throw the ball too hard, hurl a frisbee too far. It’s just pointless to play with them” he said.

    “I wouldn’t care too much about sports. The intimacy part is what I’m worry about. The other day, I read in the newspaper about a woman that crushed her boyfriend's hand in a movie theater during a scary scene. I shiver thinking what would have happen if she would have hugged his neck” said Amanda.

    Brian shivered at the gory imaged displayed by his mind.

    “If that happened during a movie, imagine what will happen if they have sex?” said Amanda.

    “Well… there are a lot of cured women and I don’t think they haven’t had sex in the last 4 weeks. I guess that now women have to be very careful when they are with a men” he said.

    “Fortunately we don’t have that problem, do we?” she said with a sensual tone.

    Brian knew very good that tone of voice and it didn’t fail to make his legs feel uneasy. “I guess that it’s a good thing that you haven’t change Amanda. We can still love each other without worry about it” he said.

    “True. But still I will really like to know how it feels to be that strong. You know, like super strong” she said.

    Brian was starting to get anxious by this conversation. He perfectly knew what was about to happen. “It’s a shame that I couldn’t get you a sample of the serum” he replied.

    “Don’t worry Brian. At least you try it. But if someday I get my hands on it, I will be so strong that all my suppose friends will fear me. I bet that besides being several times stronger than they, I will be even taller than they. I can already picture me looking down at them. You know that it’s very annoying to have to look up at them” said Amanda.

    “Tell me about it” sighed Brian. “I felt like a child around women”.

    “Oh my poor Brian. You have being used to be so tall and strong. But don’t feel sad, you are still tall and strong for me. I’m a woman you can see down” she giggled.

    “Another reason to love you so much” he said kissing her.

    “But be honest with me Brian. The idea of me being one of those green women ever crossed your mind?” she asked.

    “Several times” he said absently and then he covered his mouth.

    “Oh!!” gasped Amanda in surprise. “So, you have imagine me as a strong woman, haven’t you?” she said with a grin in her face.

    “I… well…” muttered Brian red of the embarrassment.

    “And tell me Brian, have you fantasize about me using my strength. Trying to figure out how strong I will be” she whispered in his ear.

    Brian gulped hard as he felt Amanda’s hand getting inside his shorts and gently grabbing her manhood. Slowly, Amanda began to stroke it as she continued whispering in his ear.

    “I wonder how much stronger have you picture me to be. Just tell me if I’m getting closer ok?” she said and Brian only nodded.

    “What about is I have a hold of long and thick bar of iron?” she said grabbing firmly his erection. “Should I be strong enough to bend it?” she said coyly.

    “That will be too easy for you” Brian managed to say.

    “Oh!!” gasped again Amanda. “If that will be easy for me, I bet that if caress gentle the length of the bar…” her words were describing what her hand was doing to Brian’s manhood. “… my feminine fingers will deformed the bar if I put some effort on it, don’t you think?” she said.

    Brian began to tremble. “No, it will be deform is you barely try to hold it” he gulped.

    “So… if I tried to pick up this heavy bar my fingerprints will dig in the solid metal. That is what you are saying?” she said softly in his ear. Brian nodded his head.

    “I guess that if I’m that strong, I will be able not only to bend the bar but also turn it into paste if I want to” she said. “You will like that Brian? Will you like to have a girl so strong that she could be able to transform an iron bar into a small iron ball by just applying a short amount of her strength?”

    Brian was having serious problems now. Amanda’s words and his vivid imagination was pushing him to the edge.

    “Do you want me that strong Brian? Do you want me to be able to lift a car, a bus, a tractor, a cruiser, an aircraft? Maybe all of them at the same time? Do you want me to be able to rip off a skyscraper from its foundation without sweating? Do you want me to be so strong that even mountains will be weightless for me? So strong than even an army of cured women wouldn’t overpower me? So strong that I could part the Earth in half if I want to?” she said biting gentle his earlobe.

    Brian only closed his eyes as he did a terrible mess in his underwear. “Everything is fine my weak man. Super Amanda will take care of you” she said embracing at her lover.

    As Amanda and Brian was enjoying their wonderful moment, a fleet of spaceships were entering into the Milky Way. Each of them was heavily armed and their destination was the third planet of the solar system.

    To be continued…

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