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August 11, 2006 at 5:08 am in reply to: The White Knight Cometh (completed 8/10/06 w/Part 10) #32089
Max
ParticipantLovely ending indeed. It was great that Amber showed good determination and the direction she will take with her powers.
Also, it was nice to see her feeling guilty about lying at Devon.
Great story my friend and certainly I hope to see more of Amber's adventures in the future.
Max.
P.S. As a funny note, wasn't she call herself The White Knight "Cometh"? Otherwise, there is an extra word in the title ;D
Max
ParticipantCertainly that was a slip of mind. One that I didn't want to mention since it was great to see the whole growth again. Kind of a flashback ;D
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ParticipantNo problem. I just posted a link in the previous thread to this one.
That way people will know about the update.
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ParticipantJust in case you don't know, this story has been continued here.
http://amaz0ns.com/component/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,3445.0/
So, be sure to check it out.
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ParticipantExcellent new chapter Debido-san. It's great to see the continuation of this great tale. Now that there are 3 muscled girls in the story, things will get more interesting.
Btw, I love the show of strength of Hinata. That is so lovely!!
Ah! If you are looking for your previous post, it's located in the Female Muscle Growth section
http://amaz0ns.com/component/option,com_smf/Itemid,130/topic,620.0/
Here is the link. Hope it works.
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ParticipantThank you for all your comments. I will try to post more of this short stories in the future and hope you will continue enjoying them ;D
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ParticipantFinally!!!
And then people say that blondes are dumb. LOL ;D
Great new chapter Fonk. I'm glad that Amber finally did the connection.
Amazing scene in the classroom my friend and certainly a very good cliffhanger you had set.
It seems that we will know more about this mysterious t-shirt very soon.
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ParticipantThank IBP and Cowprobe for your comments. The funny thing about short story is that leaves a seed in the mind of readers and depending of them the story grows and have many branches.
I'm glad that you have enjoyed this story and I hope you enjoy the next one that will be up in a few minutes ;D
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ParticipantThanks Nam and Tertio. I'm glad that you have enjoyed the story.
To answer at your question Tertio, I'm afraid that there won't be a continuation. Certainly this story could be expanded, but if that happens it won't be a short story anymore ;D
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ParticipantOh my…
I certainly hope that piece can be recovered.
I wish you the best.
Max
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