[Max]

Great beginning my friend. I really enjoy this romantic scenario you have built so far. Certainly this will be the first of many surprises for Devon. 😀

I will be looking forward for the next piece.

Max

[Max]

Thanks. I'm glad that you have enjoyed it.

Max

[Max]

Another great finale my friend. It was funny and unexpected. Certainly, a nice paralel line. Btw, I think Neftla got her wish as she will be the queen of the amazons since Florida B will remain with the goddess. They fought for nothing  😆

Max

[Max]

Great story so far. It will be interesting to see how Lucy mess with Scott. Also, will she really take care of people that depended on Superman? Certainly she can help people as a hot heroine and became the sex simbols of millons and use her powers to make the life miserable of the ones that hurt her. A double bonus  😀

Max

[Max]

That was interesting. Do you really expect that making at the amazons even stronger will help men accept them?  😮 Well, that will be something to see. I hope Florida isn't planning a take over by force.

Interesting ending for part A my friend. Certainly it will be interesting if someday Florida A meet at her other versions of her.

Max

[Max]

Sorry for the delay in this new part. I hope you enjoy it even it's not edited. My dear friend Gblock, who kindly is taking care of the edition, is now on vacations.

For a period of maybe two months, there won't be updates in this story. Don't worry that it will be continued. I just need time to think what exactly will happen after this (as well as wait for my friend to return from his vacation  😀 )

Don't worry that Rachel will return and certainly Jane will enjoy the benefits of the magazine.

If you have a suggestion or idea that you will like to see in the future chapters, please feel free to send it to me. It could be by a Personal Message or just by posting it here.

Thanks at all the people who is enjoying this story, and I promise more fun between Eliza and Sean, and also with Rachel and Jane (if you know what I mean  👿 )

Max

[Max]

Striking Punishers Magazine
By Max

Part 13

“You do? How?” asked Eliza.

“You mentioned that you get the strength and part of the height of the punished men. So far you have taken the strength of 4 men…”

“Three. Only three” corrected Eliza.

“There were 4, my love” said Sean handling the morning newspaper to Eliza.

Eliza gasped as she read the headlines. “No way” she said amazed of the news. According to the newspaper, 4 cases of men were suffering muscular atrophy and lost in height. Two of them were found in an alley and the other two in an isolate area. The 4 men had criminal records and they didn’t want to say anything about what happened to them.

“I guess that the taxi driver was transporting at two men as passengers and they tried to rape her or do something bad to her that activate her transformation” said Sean.

“That is why I felt twice the itching feeling” said Eliza

“Indeed. Now, even with the strength of 4 men, you shouldn't be able to be that big or strong. So, you must have got the extra buff from other place. Not to mention the curves and beauty. Certainly, this magazine is full of surprises” he said placing the magazine on the table and throwing it to her.

Eliza took it and saw that it was opened in the page with the picture of Rachel. “Which surprise? I already told you that Rachel appears in the magazine because she smelled it”

“Look carefully at the image” said Sean.

Eliza looked at it again and gasped noticing what Sean meant. “She is back to normal. She has no muscles or that voluptuous body” she exclaimed. Then, quickly passed the pages and saw that the picture of the taxi driver was in the same condition.

“Exactly. Now, it’s clear were those extra traits went to, right?” said Sean raising an eyebrow.

For a moment, Eliza stood there silent. Then a big grin appeared on her face. “You know what this means” she smiled.

“I think so” Sean said rubbing his chin. “The more women smell the magazine, the more resources you will have”.

“That’s right!! Imagine Sean if I have all this traits” said Eliza excited as she passed the pages of the magazine.

“Before you head spins with the possibilities” said Sean grabbing gently Eliza’s hands. “It will be better if we test what you are capable of do. I guess that if you think in losing some mass, this will go to the pictures of Rachel and the taxi driver. Let’s find out if you can canalized all the traits to one specific target”

After 30 minutes of trying different things, Sean and Eliza made different discoveries. The first was that Eliza can restore at the two women to their magazine versions allowing her to keep the muscle and size taken from the two men.

The second discovery was that Eliza can transfer the stolen muscle and size to the two women in the magazine in exact proportions until she is back to her normal self

The third and most important discovery was that Eliza can take the traits from one of the models and transferred to another. That means, that Eliza can transfer the traits the taxi driver had to Rachel.

The last discovery was that Eliza couldn’t take anything the magazine hasn’t given to the women. So, Eliza can’t make at Rachel smaller or less curvaceous once her image reflects how she looks in real life.

Satisfied with their discoveries, the lovers decided to enjoy their breakfast together, but their heads were filled with so many thoughts that they spent the most non talking breakfast they had ever had.

Being a couple sometimes mean that you know what the partner is thinking. In the case of Sean and Eliza, they knew exactly what the other person was thinking. Sean’s mind couldn’t avoid thinking about Eliza getting better and better as more pages of the magazine are used. With only two pages used, Eliza already had an impressive body. Her mind tried to estimate how much she could improve with the rest of them.

Having those thoughts not only kept their minds busy. Their bodies began to respond at their vivid imagination. Soon, lust began to take them, to consume them, to dominate them.

Eliza swallowed the last of her milk and put the cup on the table with an aloud sound. Her gaze over Sean was the similar at a tigress ready to jump over her prey. Sean tried his best to show indifference at the intimidating and at the same time arousing stare Eliza had on him.

Gulping hard, Sean finished his milk too and slowly moved his cup back to the table. That quick movement appeared like if was done in slow motion. Eliza’s eyes got lock in the cup. As it was getting closer to the table, the sweat in Sean’s forehead was visible as well as the rapid respiration Eliza was having. Finally, the cup reached the plate and a grave silent filled the room.

For a moment, the two lovers got their eyes on each other. The only sound hearable was the ones of their increasing heartbeats. Sean was feeling very uncomfortable as the bulge in his pants was actually hurting him. Eliza pressed her teeth together as her fingers dent into the edge of the metal table.

“Enough!!” yelled Eliza standing up. In a matter of milliseconds, her body grew to seven feet tall and with muscles twice as big as the worldwide bodybuilder champion. Controlled by her passion, she tossed the metal table aside with enough strength to stamp it on the wall. She took at Sean into her muscular arms and move quickly to the second floor.

Sean was caught by surprise as Eliza jumped the length of the stairs as she went from the first to the second floor. Fortunately the door of the bedroom was left opened; otherwise his leviathan girlfriend wouldn’t have doubt in destroying it.

Eliza kneed on the floor and delicately placed at Sean over the mattress of the destroyed bed. Then, she whispered on his ear with a moist voice. “Strip”. Sean’s heart was still pounding from her words, when his hands took live by their own and moved an inhuman speed trying to take away any piece of cloth his body had on. Eliza, for her part, tensed and stretched her torso as her hands unwrapped slowly the sheet that covered her.

In a sensual movement, Eliza lowered her body onto her boyfriend’s one. She moaned softly as their sexes touched each other sparking electrical charges between them. Then, Eliza moved her chest closer to Sean’s one. As she was doing it, her breasts grew allowing them to touch him first.

With a big smile, she rest his large breasts all over his chest and then. “You know, there is something I want to do since I gained all this muscle” she said looking at him in the eyes as she flexed her arm. “Let’s find out if this muscle works in the way I’m expecting” she grinned.

Before Sean could say anything, he was taken by surprise as he understood Eliza’s words. “Oh Eliza. It feels so… so…” he gasped as his penis experienced an intense and intimate massage done by the Eliza’s powerful vaginal muscle.

“I’m glad that you are enjoying it my dear, but then get to comfortable because I’m just starting” she grinned.

“Starting? What you mean by star…OH CRAP!!” gasped Sean contorting his body as Eliza’s massage brought him to a new pleasure level.

“Oh yeah!! That’s my stallion!! Bring it on!!” moaned Eliza as she felt like being in a rodeo. Up and down, back and forward she moved. Eliza was surprised at how good Sean was managing her increased weight. ‘He is stronger than he looks’ she smiled knowing that it requires a lot of strength to let him shake her like that.

Eliza’s control over was perfect, as Sean could give testimonial about it. The great massage applied brought at Sean several times to the bursting point, but her muscles could stimulate him as well as repress him. Certainly Eliza was enjoying a great time while Sean was driven to the edges of the sanity.

Eliza didn’t want to hurt him or tease him too much, but when he began to beg her for release, she apologized to him allowing him to explode inside her.

“You know something” said Sean with the little air his lungs still have.

“What my darling?” said Eliza lying at his side as she embraced him with her muscular arms.

“The water bill will be very expensive this month” he smiled.

“And that is something bad?” she said raising her eyebrow.

“Not at all” he said kissing her.

To be continued…

[Max]

Well, about english not being your native language, don't worry. You are doing great (even better than me when I start to write in english  😆 ). So relax and welcome to the group  😀

Certainly, I speak for most people when I said that Ashley should pop back at some point. Something I find intriguing is that 3 years after the incident, he hadn't notice any radical change in her since her confession.

If she has being changing gradually, maybe you want to explain that a time after the incident she moved to live with her aunt or something like that and he hadn't see her since then. That way, if she reappears, she can be a 16 years old super babe with great strength and muscles.

This is just a suggestion of course.

About the villain, he will be necesary. After all, a girl with big muscles needs someone to used them on, don't you think?  😉

About the animals, well, that is your decision. You can always write a pararel story and show what the animals are doing, but just keep in mind that this is an Amazon forum, so unless the animals acquired human features, I don't know how a story with them will be received.

Certainly is they somehow got altered gaining human form and being able to talk, that will be a very interesting aside story to read.

I really wish you the best with your story and don't forget to put it a good name.

Max

[Max]

Amusing chapter Fonk. Certainly you have managed very well the idea of parallel worlds. Very good job.

Btw, it's good to see at Florida A back to her best form  😀

Max

[Max]

Many thanks to all the people that has being following this story and I hope you enjoy this epilogue.

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Invasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by Max

Epilogue

With the town under the control of humans again, Amanda and Brian realized that its isolate nature was perfect to turn it into the headquarters of the rebellion.

Brian knew that the installations of his father’s lab will be vital for them, so Amanda decided and Melanie decided to bring the stuff to the town. Amanda simple ripped off the whole place from the mountain and launched it to the town where Melanie happily received it.

Once the computers in the lab were back online, Brian contacted at the fleet left behind by Queen Niftiow and asked at the commander to send troops to help them. Meantime, Amanda organized at the super women in teams to begin the re-conquest of the Earth. They will move to other towns and finally cities, but they need spies to know where the men were located in order to know where to strike first.

Moments later, around one hundred aliens descended in cloaked ships and joined at rebellion. Amanda instructed at the aliens to enter into female hostesses in order to give them the appearance of an enhanced woman. Of course that this time, the women will be in complete control of her body.

This was how the rebellion began. It was slow the liberation process at the begging since the super women were outnumbered and men were captive. The spies played a very important role as they found out where the men were kept prisoners in the nearby cities.  Then, they nursed them to let them able to merge with the enhanced women.

As the time passed, the numbers of super women increased exponentially. The women that were in charge to report to Keispa gladly offered their help to keep at the 'Empress' of the Earth distracted with false reports as more and more women were getting freed. To assure them the ‘enhanced’ look, more of Niftiow’s troops descended.

The new ‘false beacons’ remained in the key posts to inform at Keispa that everything was under control.

Keispa conquered the Earth in two months. Amanda and the super women took 3 times that time, but finally, the moment came when the last battle was revealed. Keispa was astonished as her forces were reduced to only the city she named the capital of her Empire.

Incredible battles took placed in the streets as the liberated women fought the green invaders. The aliens were not only weaker to this new race of women, but also extremely outnumbered.

Buildings got smashed and cars flew around in the final battle to recover the Earth. Finally Keispa was expel of her hostess's body and was caught by Amanda herself. The defeated alien begged for mercy but Amanda didn't have any for her.

While Keispa ruled the Earth, thousand of innocent people died. Now, Amanda didn't want that the adverse atmosphere was the responsible of Keispa's death. She closed her mighty fists over Keispa turning her into green sticky pulp.

After near a year the Earth was recovered, the new relationship between humans and the aliens couldn't be better. During Keispa’s oppression, all the enhanced women got pregnant. Due that fact, the population of the Earth increased half their size.

What neither Niftiow nor her scientists could anticipated is that the human DNA made possible the birth of an alien race of men. Niftiow between tears apologized in the name of her race for the damage that Keispa and her forces did and then thanked at the humankind for giving them the opportunity that men will populate her world.

As many female humans were lending their bodies to Niftiow forces to give birth at their new daughters and sons, her scientist shared all the technology and knowledge they had with the human race.

Another good point of Keispa's invasion was that now most of the men have the ability to fuse with any woman at will.

Recently tests had revealed that the new human babies had inherence the fuse ability from their parents. But this ability is not longer suit to the males; the females also had developed the ability to fused with men.

The life in the Earth will never be the same.

[Author]

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