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better, yes. more of those would make it even better still. there are still quite a few passages where the entire screen is just a block of type. as an editor as well as a reader, things like that are important to me. thank you.

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comment feature seems to be not working yet on the brawna2.0 so i’ll make a comment here.

cdr, you must make sure to double-space in between paragraphs. otherwise, the entire story comes out as one huge block of type.
(i find it impossible to read, nomatter how good the tale may be).
so, make it easier for your readers to enjoy your writing and double-space. liberally.
yours,
mlc

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I’m surprised you Brawna writers, especially stmercy, didn’t mention the complicated story submission system the site had. I guess you figured it out (because you had stories on Brawna) but I’ve communicated with a few writers who specifically shunned Brawna because of it.
So, my suggestion, Phoenix, is to make it simple to submit.

Finally, the infamous Brawna CAPTCHA … do I need say any more?

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@ seldom:
That’s Brazilian Jaqueline Costa. She’s @ 5’10”.

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Keith:
The new year's story is the second one that DK wrote. The first one is here:
http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/darkphoenix/buffandblur.htm
Hope that clears up any confusion.

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He's not crazy just upsidedown and he's been exposed to Nicola Tesla; see: http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/theteslainterview

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