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ParticipantAnd now the new material.
Meet the parents or The newlywed vs the old flame
Prologue
“How is my future mother in law?”
Mrs. Wall groaned when she saw who had spoken. Ever since her visit to the Wishbone restaurant Hillary Fisher had become the most dangerous women in town.
“You’re too late. Mike got married yesterday and is currently on his honeymoon.”
Honeymoon?” Hillary cried with rage. She then started to grow, going from 5’6” to 12 feet tall in seconds. Mrs Wall wanted to run from the mad blond woman but was too afraid to move.
“Tell me who the woman that dares to steal my man is?”
“Her name is Mistar Law. Other than she a redhead and she’s tall that all I know.”
“Well I’m going to make this Mistar, sorry she ever meet Mike.” Hillary vowed.Part 1
A month later
“Now remember you can’t tell your parents or the locals that we’re sizechangers.”
“I know Mistar. But I haven’t seen my parents since I became a sizechanger. Also they were at the wedding. They are going to wonder why I married a woman named Mistar. Not to mention the fact, I didn’t introduce you to them before.”
‘That will be awkward. Darn those super witches.”
“I guess we should get this over with. Open the cross time portal.”The portal opened and Mike and Mistar drove through it in his car. They then emerged on a city street.
“Welcome to beautiful Bay Head, Nova Scotia.”
“Looks like any other North American suburb.”
“That’s because you haven’t seen St. Margaret’s Bay yet. I consider it one of the most beautiful bays in the world. That said, we have become a bedroom community of Halifax over the years. Halifax is just 25 minutes down the highway.”
“So what’s the plan? Are we going to your parents place first or are you going to show me around first?”
“Let me pull over into this parking lot. Then I’ll call my parents.”But when he pulled into the parking lot, he saw one of his old buddies.
“Brian, how’s it going buddy?”
“Mike? What are you doing here?”
“I’m here to introduce Mistar my wife to my parents.”
“Get out of town Mike. It’s not safe for you and especially not for her.”
“Why? What’s going on?” Mike asked. But Brian was running away as fast as his legs could carry him.
Puzzled Mike got out the cell phone and dialled.
“Hello mom? It’s me Mike. I’m in town with my new wife and wondering if we could drop by.”
“You know that restaurant over looking the lighthouse in Peggy’s Cove?”
“Yeah so?”
“Meet us there for supper around six. We’ll talk then.” Then she hung up the phone.
“Something is defiantly going on around here.’ Mike commented.
“Look who back in town.”
Mike turned to see who had spoken. He was confronted with a mountain of a woman. She was 6’8” and bulging with muscles all over. She had long black hair and blue eyes that looked familiar for some reason.
“You don’t recognize me do you?”
“Afraid I don’t.”
“It’s me Stacey Duff.”
“Stacey. I would have never have guessed. What happened?”
“The Wishbone restaurant came to town.” Stacey replied.
“The one run by Stanley Charm?” Mistar asked.
“You had been there?”
“Not me personally, but my parents have.”
“Then you probably heard about the Wishbone meal deal. I ordered it, wished to be the strongest girl in town and the next morning I wake up like this. I got to go but one piece of advice, drop Mistar. Hillary has claimed you for her own.”
“My relationship with Hilary ended years ago.”
“I dare you to tell her that.” Then Stacey walked away.
“We got a couple of hours. Why don’t we go for a scenic drive along the bay? I’ll even show you the gift shop I used to work for.”
“Not so fast. Who exactly is Hillary?”
“Hillary Fisher is an old girlfriend of mine. We went out for a couple of years during my university years. Even had sex with her a couple of times. But we drifted apart. And in the end I told her that our relationship was over. I have no idea why she would be making a fuss now.” He reached over and kissed her on the check.
“Besides you’re the one I love now.”
They then drove off unaware they were being watched by hostile eyes.The view from inside the restaurant was beautiful. There were big windows in three of the walls. Giving views of the parking lot, the village of Peggy’s Cove and a small portion of the rocks. The fact the restaurant was on a slight rise also helped.
“I can see why Peggy’s Cove is a popular tourist destination.” Mistar commented.
“It’s one of biggest draws. Look, there are my parents.”
He pointed to a couple sitting at a table. The woman was a 5’4” blond, the man 5’8” with hair that was fast turning from brown to white. They looked like they were sixty of so years old.
“Mistar I want you to meet Dennis and Lauren Wall.”
“You know normally you meet the parents BEFORE the wedding.” Dennis commented. But still shook Mistar’s hand.
“First you disappear for months. Then the next thing we know we’re at your wedding.” Lauren added.
Mike sighed, he wanted to tell them the truth. That he was a sizechanger and spent those months on Sizeloa. And that the wedding was the result of super witch intervention. But he could not, so instead he said.
“I had some personal issues to take care of. As for the wedding it was a shot gun wedding. But so far it’s working out.”
‘That’s what you think. Hillary is very upset that you got married to someone else.”
“And you know this mom because?”
“She referred to me as her future mother in law. I thought she was going to kill me when I told her that you had married Mistar.”
“I can’t picture Hillary murdering anyone.”
“You haven’t seen her since she got the power to become a giantess at will.”
“Say what?” Both Mistar and mike cried at once. Then the earth began to shake. The sound of people screaming came from outside the restaurant.
“Earthquake?” Mistar asked.
“We don’t get them here.” Mike replied. Then they noticed the huge face looking at them through the window. A huge Hillary was on her knees looking inside the restaurant. Mike guessed she had to at least 80 feet tall, maybe even 100 feet tall.
“I SEE YOU MIKE. ARE YOU COMING OUT OR WILL I HAVE TO COME IN AND GET YOU?” Hillary asked.“All right Hillary, I’m coming out.” Mike replied.
“You can’t be serious.” Mistar muttered.
“I got to try to reason with her. Besides I can’t have her destroying the place.” Mike replied as he rushed out the door.
“My son is going to get himself killed.” Lauren moaned.
Mistar frowned as she considered her options. She was supposed to keep a low profile on this world. But the Wishbone restaurant has already exposed magic. She was tempted to try to shrink Hillary down, but being a sizehu (the sizechanger term for humans with size change powers) Hillary would just grow back. It would mean exposure and getting in trouble with the Masterchemi, but Mistar considered getting into a GTS catfight with Hillary.To be continued
Feel free to make comments. It's the busy season at work. Don't know when I'll have time or engery to write part 2.
BTW it's my birthday August 19th. Going to be 33.Mr. G
ParticipantNice to see this story contiuned. Wonder if thoese shields really will stop her from growing. Keep thoese chapters comming.
Mr. G
ParticipantGlad to see more great chapters. So she at the 18 foot mark. She is getting big. Hope the disaster of the kids visions doesn't happen.
Mr. G
ParticipantShe might be pissed off, but I might be too. 😉
You should leave it up to the ladies wether they want their clothes to grow with themor not, or how much of their clothes does.
Also some more setting info could be useful. Is it a yard in the city, or a rural area?
Anyhow, I'll be looking foreward to see the answers that you'll get for this one.
_M.
What I had in mind, was a yard in a suburban area. While not downtown, it's not out in the country either. There are other homes nearby. An area similar to where I live in real life.
Mr. G
ParticipantBesides from my web site. I also got a Writing.com portfilo. Check it out at http://www.Writing.com/authors/gtsfan
I think people will find some of my interactive stories intresting.
ps let me know if this link doesn't work.
I'm split on wither or not to post more classics. Might be better off writing new material.Mr. G
ParticipantThis is proving to be hard on the whole family. Glad your taking the time to write this story.
Mr. G
ParticipantMy error. :-[ the correct link for Return of the Mice Girls is http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/returnofmicegirls.htm
Mr. G
ParticipantHere are some more stories of interest. Hopefully these links will work.
Giantess Duty
http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/giantessduty.htmand the sequel
Return of the mice girls
http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/returnofthemicegirls.htm
Author not: a lot of SW in this oneTarget Mistar
http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/TargetMistarbase.htmMistar’s Mate
http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/Mistarmatebase.htm
The giant club should be of interest. Thinking of writing a sequel to this story called “Meet the parents.” An alternate title is “The newlywed vs the old flame”Giantess Nightmares
http://www.geocities.com/akagilles/Giantessnightmares.htmIf these links don't work let me know.
Mr. G
ParticipantI like your lists. 8)
Mr. G
ParticipantSince the link to the Demon Busters story is not working. >:( Here's the story in question.
Demon busters: GTS-Goddess woesAuthor note: Demon Busters started out in my mind as a "Charmed" parody. The Demon Busters resemble the Actresses that played the Charmed ones
Ms. Freeze looks like Holly Marie Combs
Ms. Psychic looks like Alyssa Milano
Ms. Orb looks like Rose McGowan
Part 1
2007 CE
Somewhere in California
Dozens of people gathered in the remote valley. The majority of the crowd was men, but there were some women there as well. In the center of the valley was a circle, a thousand feet across. The inside of the circle had been cleared of all vegetation, except grass. In front of the circle was a platform where a tall woman of mixed black/white races stood to address the crowd.
"Welcome GTS-Goddess fans. The day we have been waiting for has arrived. The day of the GTS-goddess summonsing."
The crowd then burst into cheers.
"I need quiet to cast the spell." She reminded them.
Except for a few "sorry Ms. Wilcox" the crowd then fell silent. Ms. Wilcox then began to cast the spell.
A moment later, a huge figure then appeared in the circle. She was 800 feet tall with short blond hair. Blue eyes and tanned skin. Her gray garments where surprisingly plan for a goddess.
"WHO DARES SUMMONDS ME?" The goddess demanded.
"I do. I am Ms. Wilcox leader of the GTS-Goddess lovers." She told the goddess.
"Goddess lovers, that's interesting. Tell me does a GTS-goddess rule this world?"
"No. There are no GTS-goddesses native to this world. If you don't mind me asking, who are you?"
"My name is Vanessa." The blond replied. A question and answer talk then followed.
Armed with a name, a couple of goddess lovers starting going through the "GTS-goddess guide". They quickly looked her up. They frowned when they read the entry on her. One of the goddess lovers then tapped Ms. Wilcox on the shoulder and whispered into her ear.
"My advisors tell me that you're not what we're looking for." Ms Wilcox told Vanessa.
"What makes you think that?"
'They tell me that over a two-year period, you reduced the population of your home world from 5.2 billion to 20 people. While we don't mind some death and destruction. That's a bit excessive."
"SAY"S WHO?" Vanessa asked. Anger showing in her voice. A few goddess lovers started to slip away.
"We get our info from the "GTS-goddess guide produced by the AWEA (Alternate world Exploration Agency)."
"It was the other Vanessa. Not me."
"The other Vanessa is 3000 feet tall and has brown skin." A man holding the guide pointed out.
"Hey. It's not my fault the fools committed suicide. Besides you asked me here, so I plan to stay here.
Ms. Wilcox started to say a spell to send Vanessa back where she came from. But Vanessa stepped on her, before she could complete it. The 6'2" woman was reduced to a bloodstain under Vanessa's foot.
"Stupid witch." She muttered. Then she noticed that most of the crowd was running away. Only a dozen or so people were hanging around.
"Fools. You call me yet most of you run away when I refuse to do your bidding. Well I intend to take over this world. And nobody can stop me." Vanessa shouted to the world.
Demon Busters headquarters: San Francisco
The demon busters gathered around the coffeepot.
"Good Morning." Ms. Orb muttered to her sisters.
"It's only a good morning. If it's demon free." Ms. Freeze replied.
"Don't forget the other threats out there." Ms. Psychic added. Then she found herself, somewhere else.
She was standing in a field somewhere. A huge blond woman dominated the scene. She was crushing a fleeing crowd underfoot.
Then Ms. Psychic found herself back at headquarters.
"Please don't tell me you had a vision." Ms. Freeze moaned.
"I'm afraid so. We got a mega giantess to find and deal with."
"It better not be another sizechanger." Ms. Orb muttered.
Mr. Angel then stuck his head into the kitchen.
"Finding may not be a problem. We just had a major breach of our universe a few minutes ago."
"Where?" Ms. Freeze asked.
"About 200 miles from here. Isolated area really."
"Give us the exact location. Looks like were going to have to fight a battle." Ms. Freeze sighed.
Somewhere in California
"DIE YOU UNGRATEFUL PEOPLE." Vanessa shouted as she crushed the feeling people underfoot. A few people begged for mercy, but Vanessa wasn't feeling kind today.
"Why should I spare you?" She asked a bunch of men on their knees in front of her.
"We promise to serve you for the rest of our lives." The men replied.
"Guess what? I don't believe you." Vanessa replied. Then she crushed the men underfoot.
"As fun as this is. I got a world to conquer. Decisions, decisions, should I go directly to Washington D.C. or visit the cities of San Francisco and Los Angles first?" Vanessa mused.
"How about none of the above?" A voice replied.
"What the? " Vanessa asked. Then she saw three women who weren't there a moment ago.
"Who the heck are you?" Vanessa asked the women.
Instead of replying the demon busters chanted a shrink spell. To there dismay Vanessa didn't shrink.
"Who are you people? Witch want to be?" Vanessa asked. Amused for the moment.
"We are the most powerful witches on the planet." The demon busters replied.
"Yeah right." Vanessa replied.
A size change gun then orbed in Ms. Orbs hands.
"Shrink bitch." Ms. Orb cried as she fired the gun at Vanessa, but she refused to shrink.
"Fools. Do you realize who your dealing with?"
"No." Ms. Orb replied.
"I am Vanessa Comb, the GTS-goddess. Being a goddess I can't no be shrunk or killed." Vanessa boasted.
"I think we're in trouble." Ms. Psychic commented.
"You can't barge into a world and take it over."
"I was summoned by a stupid witch named Ms. Wilcox. She and her stupid followers got what they deserved, death under my feet. Now if you excuse me I got a world to conquer."
Vanessa then stepped over the Demon Busters and heading toward San Francisco.
The demon busters were surprised hear that Ms. Wilcox was involved. True she was a pain in the butt witch who was famous for her involvement in the GTS community. But the Demon busters could not see her summoning an evil goddess.
"Witches we got to do something." Ms. Freeze moaned.
"I say we grow to her size and pound the crap out of her." Ms. Orb suggested.
" If she's telling us the truth about being immortal. That may not do much good." Ms. Psychic pointed out.
"We need more info on Vanessa. I say we go back to headquarters and summand Wilcox's ghost." Ms. Freeze suggested.
To be continued
Part 2
"I agree. We need more information." Ms. Psychic added.
"All right fine. She'll probably win an one on one fight anyway." Ms. Orb muttered unhappily.
She then orbed them back to headquarters.
Demon Busters headquarters: San Francisco
"How did it go?" Mr. Angel asked them when they orbed in.
"Not good. We need to summon the ghost of Ms. Wilcox." Ms. Freeze replied.
"She's dead. How did that happen?"
"Vanessa killed her. Despite that I hope to get some answers from her."
With the power of three it was easy to summand the ghost of Ms. Wilcox.
"Greetings witches. I suppose this is about Vanessa." Were the first words out of the ghost's mouth.
"Yeah! What were you thinking bring Vanessa to this world?" Ms. Freeze asked.
"I wasn't summoning any GTS-Goddess in particular. In hindsight I should have summoned a gentle GTS-Goddess. Gone through the "GTS-Goddess Guide" and asked for one by name." The ghost moaned.
"GTS-Goddess guide?" Ms. Psychic asked.
"It's the book we use as a reference guide. My people looked up Vanessa in the guide and were horrified at what they found."
"So you had no idea who would show up?" Ms. Orb asked.
"I had a spell to send the GTS-goddess back where she came from. But I got stepped on before I could complete the spell." The ghost replied.
"We need that spell." The Demon Busters cried in unison.
"All right here it is."
She then gave them a spell. Which Ms. Psychic wrote down.
"Anything else before I return to the sprit world?"
"Yeah. Where can we get our hands on a "GTS-goddess guide?" Ms. Freeze asked.
"The copy the GTS fans used should still be in the valley. If that copy no longer exits the Watan should have one." The ghost the left them.
"Guess we should take a look at this guide. See if you can orb it here."
Ms. Orb nodded and then said. "GTS-goddess guide."
A thick book then appeared in her hands.
"Let's see if this has anything useful." Ms. Orb muttered as she looked up Vanessa Comb.
"A lot of goddesses in here. Ah here she is. Hails from Texas. Became a GTS-Goddess in June of 1990."
"Became what was she before?" Ms. Freeze asked.
"Human apparently. Soon unleashed a reign of terror. Her first targets besides from governments were blacks and Catholics. But when people started to resist, she went after everybody. By 1991, she was crossing the world wiping out cities and countries."
"Hmm, it says here that within a two year period that she reduced the population of her world from 5.2 billion to 20 people."
"Find it hard to believe that she could kill so many people in so short a time."
"It says here that her rule was so fowl that many people committed suicide. It also says that her fellow GTS-Goddesses turned on her and forced her into exile."
Suddenly the world went black and white for Ms. Psychic. She found herself on the streets of a city. But it wasn't San Francisco. Vanessa was walking down the street crushing cop cars like bugs. Cops were firing their guns at Vanessa, but with no effect. Then the vision ended.
"We got to move. Vanessa reached civilization."
Mr. Angel then orbed in the room.
"Girls. That was the governor on the phone. He wants us to do something about the giant blond attacking Sacramento."
Sacramento, California
Vanessa had planned to go to San Francisco. But when she saw the city off to her left, she just had to take a closer look. At when a friendly man told her the city name was Sacramento, the capital of California. She knew she had to enforce her authority.
One of the first things she saw in town was a Catholic Church.
"See the evil Catholics are here as well." Vanessa muttered to herself. She then pounded the church to pieces. To her disappointment there was nobody inside.
A helicopter then flew by and a man with a megaphone then spoke to here.
"THIS IS THE GOVERNATOR. LEAVE THIS CITY AT ONCE."
"Arnold Schwarzenegger is that you?" Vanessa asked.
"I PERFER TO BE CALLED GOVERNATOR. I REPEAT LEAVE THIS CITY AND THIS STATE."
"No can do. I'm taking over this world, starting with the state of California. And no one can stop me." Vanessa then reached for the helicopter but it flew out of reach. Then a crowd of police cars came forward followed by a couple of police helicopters.
"THIS IS THE POLICE. LEAVE THIS CITY AT ONCE."
"I've seen a lot of cops from all over the world. But you are among the dumbest." Vanessa muttered to herself as she started to crush the cop cars one by one.
Behind Vanessa three figures orbed in.
"Quick while she's distracted. Say the spell." All three demon busters begin the chant. A moment later a huge portal opens up. But to the Demon Busters surprise, Vanessa is not sucked into the portal.
"Haven't you heard the expression, "You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink." Vanessa asked the demon busters.
"I don't understand. A portal brought you here." Ms. Psychic muttered.
"I went through it voluntary. What you fools don't seam to understand is that I'm here to stay."
"Not if we can help it." The Demon Busters cried in unison.
Vanessa frowned, and then she sent her fist down on the demon busters. Fortunately Ms. Orb was able to orb herself and her sisters out of the way in time. The portal then closed shut.
Demon Busters headquarters: San Francisco
"That went well." Ms. Freeze commented.
"The portal opened. We just need a way to push her in it." Ms. Orb replied.
"I can think of two options. One we grow to her size and try to force Vanessa through the portal." Ms. Psychic said.
"I like that option." Ms. Orb commented.
"What's the second option?" Ms. Freeze
"Her fellow GTS-Goddesses sent Vanessa into exile in the first place. Maybe we can get them to take her back."
To be concluded
Conclusion
"The last thing we need is more GTS-Goddesses." Ms. Freeze commented.
"I agree." Ms. Orb asked.
"Oh all right. We'll go with the first option. I just hope we don't cause more damage than Vanessa."
"Can't make an omelet without braking a few eggs. But if you're that worried, we'll grow in an isolated dessert area."
"I think that's a good idea."
Ms. Orb then orbed them to a desert somewhere in Nevada. Then a size change gun appeared in her hands.
"Let's get mega giantess sized." Ms. Orb cried before she fired the gun.
Sacramento, California
Vanessa had the mayor of the city in the palm of her hand, literally.
"I demand that you turn over this city to me now."
"Never." The mayor replied.
"How can you resist me? Every cop in town is dead."
"The army has been called in. Also God himself will defeat you."
Vanessa laughed. Then said.
"I've defeated human armies before. As for God, has it ever occurred to you that my becoming a GTS-Goddess was God's will?"
"More like Satan's will." The mayor replied.
"Well it's my will that you die a violent death." She then dropped the mayor who fell several hundred feet to the ground. To make sure he was dead, she then stepped on him.
Then she heard a loud chanting. Then a portal opened beside her.
"Don't you witches learn?" Vanessa asked. Then she noticed that they were 800 feet tall. The same height she was.
"GET HER." The demon Busters cried as they rushed Vanessa.
Vanessa stood her ground, refusing to run. Ms. Orb did her best to suck punch Vanessa and Ms. Psychic tried to kick Vanessa. But her kick seam to have little effect and Vanessa was able to dodge the punches.
"Fools. I am an indestructible goddess." Vanessa cried.
Ms. Freeze then did her freezing magic. Vanessa then froze in place along with the city of Sacramento.
"Whew! Didn't think that would work." Ms. Freeze muttered.
"Quick, shove her into the portal." Ms. Orb cried. All three sisters then shoved Vanessa into the portal. After the GTS-Goddess had disappeared from sight, the sisters closed the portal.
Ms. Freeze then admired her handwork.
"You know I never froze an entire city before. I say it's an improvement." Ms. Freeze mused.
"I don't think the citizens would like that." Ms. Psychic remarked.
"Guess your right." Ms. Freeze then unfroze the city.
"You know. Maybe we should stay this size for a while." Ms. Orb suggested.
She had not finished speaking when army helicopters followed by tanks and troops showed up.
"THIS IS THE US MILATARY. SHRINK TO NORMAL SIZE AT ONCE DEMON BUSTERS." A man using a megaphone shouted.
"They won't let us have any fun." Ms. Orb moaned. But she did get out the size change gun and within moments the demon busters were back to their normal size.
The world on the other end of the portal
Vanessa was confused. One moment she was confronting the witches, then next she was on her back.
"What happened?" She asked.
"It appears that they were able to get rid of you on their own. And that my services were not required." A voice replied. Vanessa got up and scowled at the 3,000 foot black woman standing before her.
"Darn. I'm back in this dump. I'm going to kill those witches."
"Not today your not." The taller Vanessa replied.
"Someday I'll rule a world again. And nobody will stop me." Vanessa Comb vowed.
"I pray that day never comes." The African American GTS-Goddess known as Vanessa Bell replied.
The end for now
BTW what do people perfer. Links to the story or the story itself posted here?
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