[Mr.Shhh]

Good point.  I'm gonna need that suspension of disbelief to finish the Kitty story.  That is one freakin' HUGE mega-babe. 

[Mr.Shhh]

Female muscle story about a cop?  SOLD! 

I had an idea recently about a muscle-bound female military operative.  The concept began with her captured and chained up behind enemy lines.  A bunch of huge, hulking goons are taking turns abusing her bulging body.  She manages to escape and single handedly takes out the entire enemy base (I had this image of her strapping two giant m-60's together and going nuts).  Gotta' love a woman in uniform!

[Mr.Shhh]

Thanks for the correction on the weight issue, fm-jumkie.  I know there's a lot of other issues as well, such as no one ever warming up before doing enourmous feats of strength.  What the heck, that's why they put the fantasy in muscle fantasy  :wink:. 

Since Rhinehartd imbued Dawn with the superpower to grow mass pretty much out of nowhere, it was a challenge to have Jenna (who has no such powers) keep up.  Had the table not shattered, it's likely that Dawn would eventually out muscle Jenna……….. or would she :evil:?  Dun dun dahhhhh!!!

Hey Sacul, we need to see what you've got cooking as soon as possible.  There's definitely some great female muscle work being posted right now (Reaper's stuff is fantastic)! 

[Mr.Shhh]

Thanks for the comments so far!  I think with this story, both Jenna and Dawn reached a whole new plateau of mega-mass.  I'm really excited to see what Rhinehartd comes up with :-D.

Speaking of mega-mass, I was working on a story staring Femxman's number one muscle babe, Kitty when the shit hit the fan at forum Saradas.  For those who don't follow Femxman's stuff, Kitty is probably the biggest muscle babe in existence.  We're talking almost 700 pounds of hulking girl beef on a 4'9 body.  (Maybe Jenna will get that big one day.)

I'll post it up as soon as it's ready.

 

[Mr.Shhh]

The idea was to post both my story and Rhinehartd's illustrations in one shot.  Rhinehartd's been working away on the art, but these things take time (he's also got a lot of other things on his plate).  Since it may be a little while still before everything is ready, I've decided to post up the story by itself here in the writing forums.  Look for it in a little bit.  As soon as the drawings are done, we'll add them too :lol:. 

[Mr.Shhh]

It's clear that Tourist is striving for a very particular look here.  If it's not to everone's taste, so be it.  He is taking the time to post this work for free after all.  Thanks for the great work, Tourist  :-D. 

[Mr.Shhh]

I absolutely love that you've nicknamed your character "The Monster".  That right there paints a picture of total bodybuilding insanity.  Can't wait to see this girl get super-freaky PUMPED!  Hulk her out, man!

[Mr.Shhh]

That is great stuff!  I  definitely share your love of thick, heavy mass and inhuman definition.  Your words paint a clear picture in my head of this stunning woman.  I hope you take her to the limit  :-D!

[Mr.Shhh]

Wow, pretty intense.  Gotta admit, the whole gore / domination thing isn't my cup of tea, but you sure do have the writing chops.  My take is more muscle, less squishing – but it's not my story.  It'll certainly be interesting to see where it goes from here.

[Mr.Shhh]

I agree with everyone above.  Great writing!  My vote is for more, definately!

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