[Mr.Shhh]

The parade continues….

Another sketch by Pdubage.  I like that this pic tells a story.  The crazy thing is, the man does all of these drawing with a mouse.  That's insane!

More to come… 

[Mr.Shhh]

I think the next chapter is the one everyone's been waiting for.  Hopefully, Mercy doesn't disappoint!

[Mr.Shhh]

The quality of her skin is really amazing.  The veins also looks very life-like.  Let's see her flexing!

[Mr.Shhh]

If that brief sample you sent me is any indication, your Mercy character is going to be a stunner.  I swear that small bit of text had some of the most incrtedible muscle description I've ever read.  You can't get that thing posted fast enough!

[Mr.Shhh]

Hmmm.  I guess I messed up the clarity of the time line between chapters 2 and 3 :-[. 

I've essentially cut away from Mercy's "audition" at the club to an hour or two after.  The reason is to continue to build suspense regarding Mercy's physique (to put further emphasis on her eventual first night dancing before a crowd).  Hopefully chapter 4 will clear things up a bit.  I might go back and make a few alterations to the previous chapters to make it a bit more clear.  Thanks for the notes.

Hey Pdub, I agree with you that your fantastic artwork should turn up more often.  However, I disagree with you that the new avatar is better than your pic.  I simply changed it for variety's sake.  Your art is top-notch in my book! 

[Mr.Shhh]

I've realized it's kind of dumb to keep making new topics everytime I post a chapter of the story (particularly when they're so short), so for now on I'm going to just add them in here.

THE HUNGER
Chapter 3
By: Mr. Shhh

Red looked up from his work to see a motorcycle roaring up his driveway. The sun was already setting – who the hell could this be? 

The noisy vehicle pulled up in front of his quaint farm house in a cloud of dust.

“Can I help you?” The grey-haired old man called out.

He watched a young woman in tight leather and denim climb off.

“I’m here about the room.  My Name's Mercy.”

As she approached him, Red was amazed by her stunning beauty. She reminded him of his wife when she was young – a real looker.

Turning back to his work, he continued jacking up the end of the large tractor in front of him. A spare tire sat nearby.

“What’s a pretty girl like you doing in a boring place like this?” Red asked, struggling with the jack.

“Just passing through. I need the place for about a week.”

“Where ya headed?”

“Vegas.” Mercy responded. “I’m going to win the Galaxian.”

Red jerked sharply, knocking the jack loose. The ground shook as the huge tractor fell back to Earth with a crash.

“God damn it!!” He cursed.

Looking up at Mercy, Red noticed her incredible width. He could spot a bodybuilder a mile away and knew in an instant that she was packing some serious mass.

“You look like a big girl, think you could give me a hand with this son of a bitch?”

Mercy glanced at the tractor. It looked heavy. A smile wrapped across her lips.

Stepping up, she bent over and put her hands under the rear axel. With one powerful thrust, the wheels lifted off the ground. Red watched a series of veins bulge along Mercy’s neck and temples. He could hear her leather coat stretching as her back widened noticeably.

For a moment, it looked like she had bitten off more than she could chew. Then, with a soft grunt, the tractor raised higher. Mercy’s huge thighs almost doubled in size, splitting stitches along her jeans and revealing hints of bronzed flesh beneath.

Finally straightening up, Mercy held the entire end of the tractor at a 45 degree angle.

“You’re a strong one, that’s for damn sure!” Red exclaimed, absolutely flabbergasted at the girl’s strength.

“Must be the fresh air.”

As Mercy continued to hold the heavy tractor aloft, Red undid the bolts on the damaged tire.

“Room’s $100 a week. I’ll have breakfast ready at 6 am every morning.”

“I hope it’s a big breakfast. I’ve got an appetite.”

“I don’t doubt it.” Red commented, glancing at the soccer ball-sized calves straining against her jeans.

Pulling the old tire off, Red grabbed the new one and hoisted it into place.

“Y’know, my wife was into weight lifting, god rest her soul. My sons too, so I know a thing or two about muscles.”

“Maybe you can recommend a place where I can get a workout.”

Red finished tightening the bolts.

“There are some good gyms in town, but I figure a girl who can lift a tractor needs something a bit more… substantial.”

* * *

Red opened a set of large wooden doors, revealing a musty old barn. Following him inside, Mercy gazed at an endless row of cast iron plates running the length of the wall. Beside them were old engine blocks and axels.

“My dear, sweet Mindy had a real talent for weightlifting.” Red reminisced. “Strong as an ox, that one.”

Red pointed to the ceiling.

“She used to use that pulley in here to work out. After a while, we had to get it reinforced because of how much weight she was hoisting.”

Mercy examined a set of thick, industrial-sized chains dangling from the roof. They were intimidating as hell. Each was attached to four cast-iron pulleys bolted some 30 feet above.

“What she used to do is load these here scales with whatever she could find. Logs. Rocks. We had all sorts of heavy stuff around here.”

Mercy saw the two scales on the ground. They were big enough to hold refrigerators.

“What do you think? Too heavy for ya?” Red asked, folding his arms.

Mercy smiled lightly.

“I wouldn't bet on it.”

[Mr.Shhh]

Glad to see you checked out the story, Pdub.  As a huge fan of your art, your comment means a lot to me.  By the way, I hope you don't mind my using the pic you did of Jenna from Hardbody as my avatar.  Let me know if it rubs you the wrong way. 

[Mr.Shhh]

The updated version is amazing, though I prefer following the exploits of modern day Es over her younger, less muscular self.  She just keeps getting bigger and bigger!

[Mr.Shhh]

Chapter 3 should be up later today or tommorrow.  I've decided to intentionally hold back revealing Mercy's physique up to this point – kind of the opposite of what I did with Hardbody.  We'll see her soon enough though  ;).

I've also started posting the stories on Brauna.com.  Here's the synopsis from the main page:

In a world where bodybuilding is a national obsession, professional bodybuilders are the new celebrities. The biggest of them all is Eve, champion of the unified Galaxian competition and the first Colossus-level bodybuilder in history. But a new challenger is travelling across the country, building her monstrous physique on the way to the Galaxian championships – a mysterious loner named Mercy…

[Mr.Shhh]

Geeze Reaper, sorry for stepping on your toes with the name  :o.  I just had a look at the email and there it is.  I appologize.  Must have been a subliminal influence.  Mercy certainly is a cool name for a powerful muscle chick!

AbyssPlanet, not too sure I'm going to be returning to Battle of the Sexes any time soon.  I have a bunch of new ideas that I'd like to explore first.  But never say never I guess.

Thanks everybody else for your comments!  More to come. 

UPDATE:

Upon looking through my writing files, I came across my long forgotten notes for the proposed 7 chapter "Battle of the Sexes" story series.  I only ever made it to chapter 3 (and I probably won't be finishing it up), but these notes give an idea of what was planned.  Some of it sounded pretty cool, so I hope to recycle a bit of it in future stories.  Enjoy!

BATTLE OF THE SEXES – BASIC SYNOPSIS

18-year-old bodybuilder Tina Brody, wants to be the most muscular human being, man or woman, ever.  To achieve this, she’s entered the Ultra Class bodybuilding competition, the first woman ever to do so.  The Ultra Class is a competition which only champions of other professional contests can enter.  It is unregulated, meaning anyone can use any means to achieve their desired physique. 

Each chapter takes place about a month after the last.  Each time, Tina’s measurements have grown.  Her body is bigger and more vascular than before.  Also with each chapter, Tina’s obsession with being the biggest expands.  She pushes herself further and trains harder.  She also becomes stronger as the months pass, eventually able to complete somewhat superhuman feats of strength (although never too ridiculous.  Plus, all her massive feats of strength are incredibly difficult for her.  She rarely has an easy time.)

The emphasis is on description.  Every stage of Tina’s evolution is described in detail.  This includes measurements, descriptions of how her clothes react to she size, and her vascularity.  Tina is constantly pushing her vascularity to new heights.  Even in the most relaxed state, she is a mass of feathered muscle and throbbing veins.  Emphasis is also put on Tina’s obsession.  She is willing to do anything to be the biggest, to push herself harder than humanly possible, and to endure unspeakable pain.  Each step in her evolution should be an indomitable force than would crush even the strongest spirit, yet she prevails. 

TIME LINE:

CHAPTER 1: Tina enters the Ultra Class, meets Tim (boyfriend). 

CHAPTER 2: Tina gets first experimental drug treatment.  Fantasy session with Tim.

CHAPTER 3: Tina goes jogging.  Makes a scene.

CHAPTER 4: Tim is invited to diner to meet Tim’s parents.  Tina’s massive physique and shameless flaunting of it disgust Tim’s dad.  His values are old-fashioned, and he believes a woman can’t be stronger than a man.  Tina challenges him to a strength competition.  Tim, Tina and Tim’s father go into the garage and start challenging each other with weights.  After only a few one-ups, Tina easily beats Tim’s Dad in bench presses.  Now curious, Tim’s Dad asks for her to continue lifting, adding more weight each time.  He wishes to see the limits of her strength.  She obliges. 

Eventually, Tina bench-presses all the weight they own, then all the weight with Tim and his Dad pushing down on the bar.  Though she strains hard, it isn’t enough to stop her, and she not only presses it, but throws the two men off the weight with one fast press. 

Tina, now excited to find the limits of her strength, bends the weight bar.  It’s incredibly difficult, and she strains hard, but she does it.  Still unsatisfied, Tina tells Tim and his dad to get in the family car.  They get in, and Tina attempts to lift the entire car (a 4×4 truck), with them in it.  Tina uses every ounce of her strength, her muscles explode through her clothes, leaving her naked, but she’s able to lift it.  When she’s done, she’s left more pumped than she’s ever been in her whole life. 

CHAPTER 5:  A month has passed since chapter 4.  Tina is much more muscular now. 

Tina goes to the v-tech warehouse to receive her next drug treatment, only to find Mr. Clarkson alone.  He tells her that he’ll be administering the drug today.  Tina changes and Mr. Clarkson injects the drug.  After only a few seconds however, Tina starts to feel woozy, and quickly passes out.   

When Tina awakens, she’s been strapped down to one of V-tech’s industrial workout machines.  Mr. Clarkson tells her that he drugged her.  She asks him what he wants and he tells her that he’s in love with her (obsessed).  She’s both freaked out and furious at the same time.  Clarkson tells her that he’s set a massive amount of weight on the machine that she’s bound to, and that the only way for her to get loose is to lift it. 

Clarkson starts undressing her and fondling her.  Tina grows more furious, and then shuts her eyes.  She blocks Clarkson out and flexes hard.  She uses all of her incredible strength and lifts the huge weight, breaking the entire industrial machine in the process and freeing herself (she not only lifts the maximum amount of weight, but literally tears the iron and steel machine out of the reinforced concrete floor which it’s bolted to.) 

Clarkson is terrified, and Tina decides to have some fun with him.  She tells him that since he likes muscles on girls, she’s going to show him more muscle than he can possibly imagine.  She grabs him and starts to flex.  She flexes so hard that she literally envelops him in muscle, surrounding his entire body with her pecs and thighs and arms and crushes him until he passes out. 

CHAPTER 6:  A month has passed since Chapter 5.  Tina is even more muscular now.  She’s out shopping one day in some skimpy outfit.  People in the busy supermarket can’t believe her.  She loves it.  She comes across the magazine rack and sees Massimo Van Grievous on the cover of a bodybuilding magazine.  He’s huge, even bigger than her.  She’s devastated, as the contest is only 1 month away. 

That night, Tina tells Tim that she can’t see him anymore until after the contest.  She’s sequestering herself away at the V-tech gym to finish her preparations for the contest.  Tim is worried; he’s never seen her more determined. 

Tina calls Sarah, her best friend, and tells her she needs her help.  She wants her to come to the V-tech gym for a month and help her train.  She needs to be motivated like never before.  Sarah agrees. 

Montage of training.  Over the month, Sarah pushes Tina harder than ever.  Tina trains non-stop, pumping weights so heavy, even the V-tech gym isn’t enough.  Tina ends up training with steel girders, rocks in a rock quarry, etc.  Sarah screams obscenities and motivational lines at Tina as she tortures herself, pushing her body to the breaking point and beyond.  Tina does each exercise until she experiences total muscle exhaustion, she lifts and pumps until she’s crying from the pain, then adds even more weight.  She becomes more obsessed than ever.  She doubles the drug treatment, then triples it.  By the end of the month, even the muscle obsessed Sarah is worried that Tina has gone too far.  But to Tina, it still isn’t enough. 

CHAPTER 7:  The contest.  Tina arrives backstage before the show, cloaked in a huge sweat suit to hide her body.  She meets Van Grievous, and they challenge each other. 

The contest starts.  One at a time, the contestants come out into a row.  Van Grievous comes out second last, and towers over the competition.  He’s clearly the winner.  Then Tina comes out, the last contestant in the row.  She blows even Van Grievous away.  She’s more muscular than anyone though humanly possible. 

The contest is simple.  It’s essentially a pose-down.  The line-up of contestants begins, and starts flexing and posing.  One at a time, contestant’s numbers are called, and they are removed from the show.  It soon comes down to Van Grievous and Tina. 

Furious that he is outclassed, Van Grievous rushes backstage and grabs a container of drug injections.  He returns to the stage, and stabs a needle into his leg.  What he’s injecting is a dangerous new steroid, a growth hormone so powerful, it works instantly with adrenaline to pump the body.  Van Grievous grows bigger. 

Tina pumps her muscles and flexes hard.  She’s still bigger than him.  He injects another one and pumps himself.  He gets even bigger.  Tina flexes harder and harder, and pumps more and more muscle.  Flabbergasted at how massive Tina is becoming from just her own flexing, Van Grievous injects 3 more shots of the drug, a very dangerous dosage.  It’s all he has, and he flexes again, growing absolutely massive. 

Tina looks to herself for strength.  She has more desire to be the biggest than Van Grievous ever will and she pumps and flexes her huge body until she eclipses even the steroid fueled Van Grievous in size.  Tina screams as her muscle lust overcomes her.  Van Grievous can’t keep up, and eventually passes out.  Tina is the winner.

That night, Tim rests in bed waiting for Tina to come out of the bathroom.  He speaks to her, asking her what she’s going to do now.  She tells him that she’s going to work out even harder, find new, more extreme methods of training, more powerful supplements, and make how she looks now look like skin and bones.  With than, she enters the room, dressed as a sexy medieval warrior babe.  She asks Tim if he’s ready.  He smiles. 

THE END

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