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  • in reply to: the drink #31902
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    Nice start to continue your "Beach" series… Can't wait to see where this storyline goes!
    Love the cup-holder, & the dress, & especially the awesome BABE…
    Great work!

    in reply to: STEELE / DAWN who is the biggest there is? #29887
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    Mon apologies, Mr.Shhh… Hadn't met Dawn before; didn't realize she was a character who could create new mass at will.
    Look forward to the next installment.

    in reply to: a little farm story #16913
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    Great job, FFF!
    Always look forward to seeing your new artwork!
    Anxious to see more of what these sisters can do, & meeting the mom!
    Grazi!

    in reply to: MM #28687
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    Ditto to Mr.Shhh's comment, Tourist!
    Love your artwork; superb creations… Always look forward to your new animation work as well.
    Personally, a cuter face might make a more estheticly pleasing package on your gals… but these are your depictions (they've become your signature), & I certainly see the strain & concentration you're trying to portray.
    Again, appreciate all the effort!  Please keep them comin'.

    in reply to: STEELE / DAWN who is the biggest there is? #29883
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    Very nicely written, Mr.Shhh!
    CUDOS for a great descriptive narrative!
    I don't wish to be a spoiler, but I have one minor crtitique of a common misperception… You mentioned near the end of your tale how Dawn was now the "heaviest person on earth" after her body had swelled to such a tremendous size… That's really not possible unless she was eating HUGE amounts of food while arm-wrestling.
    Bodybuilders swell during exercise, but no matter how large they grow from a relaxed state to their new "pumped" state, their weight remains the same… An engorged muscle has added volume, but not weight (not without caloric intake).
    But again I want to stress, sir – nicely written tale!

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